Forums > Critique > what do you think of this? retro?

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Paolo Diavolo

Posts: 8809

Martinez, California, US

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121209/15/50c51f9c36883_m.jpg

my first attempt at making something try to look from the 1920's-30's.
i was hesistant to upload it, is it portfolio worthy?

Dec 09 12 03:39 pm Link

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intense_puppy

Posts: 864

Brighton, England, United Kingdom

I like it smile

Dec 09 12 04:05 pm Link

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The Effective Image

Posts: 3943

Lansing, Michigan, US

I think the panties aren't what ladies in the '20's wore. I'm thinking more coverage and looser.

The toning seems a bit 'off' sepia.

I think you got the feel of the '20's, but little details got you.

Dec 09 12 05:45 pm Link

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Mark

Posts: 2893

New York, New York, US

NO! you have enough mediocre shots already.  Step up your game.  This is just a sketch of what you really wanted to do RIGHT?  You really wanted to get a setting consistent with the era to shoot her in RIGHT?  smile

Dec 10 12 07:11 pm Link