JIOPIX wrote:
I guess I'll be the first casualty

I have to admit I'm not a big fan of your port altogether, so it was kinda hard for me to pick the best image.
In the end it was pretty clearly this one, though it could still be better with an even a little better lighting, color and post:

Ceci L wrote:
ok, I'm in

First of all: Your pictures all seem to suffer from either compression or to heavy (detail-losing) retouching, which is a shame as you seem to look great overall.

That being said I think your avatar is a pretty bad choice as your port looks better than your avatar suggests with it's heavy color cast edges and the smeared details.

I could not decide between these very different two that I think are your best:

MiGel wrote:

I have to admit I'm not a big fan of your port altogether, so it was kinda hard for me to pick the best image.
In the end it was pretty clearly this one, though it could still be better with an even a little better lighting, color and post:

Thank you for taking the time to look.

DavidCoward Photography wrote:
I'll play. Hopefully my work shows some progress.

(Oh, and your port is not only worthy, it's inspiring.)

I couldn't pick a best, I only have some general advices for you:

Honestly, I think you still have along way to go.
Get lost of a lot pictures, concentrate on the best ones of a shoot. Get more variety and excitement in your port.
Get a little more inventive in your themes (I can see traces of you trying).
You have to work on your exposure and WB. Both are too much off in a lot of pictures.

MiGel wrote:

I couldn't pick a best, I only have some general advices for you:

Honestly, I think you still have along way to go.
Get lost of a lot pictures, concentrate on the best ones of a shoot. Get more variety and excitement in your port.
Get a little more inventive in your themes (I can see traces of you trying).
You have to work on your exposure and WB. Both are too much off in a lot of pictures.

Thanks for the feedback. I'll keep working on it.

MiGel wrote:

Thank you Can you suggest me, in the visible port, which my avatar should be??

AaronPawlak wrote:
ok

I like this best:

18+ https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/12019415

I like the drama and contrast of it as well as the mysterious theme.

HEATHER 19 wrote:
More then worthy, please do let me know.  It would be nice to have you take a look and share what you see.

Very nice port and model - on a first glance.

I picked this one, but it was hard to pick a best:



In general: You still have to work on your posing and especially on your facial expression. You look a little tensed (not in a good way) in most pictures and insecure in some.
The facial expression seems quite limited yet.

Ceci L wrote:

Thank you Can you suggest me, in the visible port, which my avatar should be??

One of the two I picked are ok when you're fine with horizonals for now.
In the long term you need a good portrait for that which you are lacking at the moment.

Autumn Rose Brightly wrote:
as I feel everyone should be. Always

Couldn't agree more.

I like this cause it looks like you're having fun and you seem relaxed:


In General: Get loose of some pictures, work on your posing (get lost of the "hand-in-the-hair"-pose, it doesn't work 90% of the time) and work on even more variety in your port from high quality photographers.

Hector Pachas wrote:
Great stuff there, but this has to be the one that catches my eye

You're not required to pick one from mine, but thanks.
I'll get to you soon.

Glenn Worton wrote:
I'd be interested in your opinion  -

I couldn't find one that's especially sticking out.
Your port looks like one of a small area commercial portrait photographer (I hope that's the right expression - I'm not a native speaker).
You should reach for a little higher. Try something more bold, more creative, more exciting.

L2Photography net wrote:
Go for it.
L2

I could not a great one sticking out.

Your text doesn't seem appropriate to your port in my opinion.
Your port needs structure, it's totally mixed up and at least the top half looks like you don't know much about lighting. I can't see any particular style or direction in your port.
You need to do some serious work on your port.
Sorry to be harsh on you.

Ashayla Webster wrote:
Alright, fire away

I love this one, but that might be a personal matter:



I like the colors and the contrasty effect.
And I like Superman.

The Dark Side wrote:
Me next?

I pick this as my favorite:



I'd advice you to get lost of two pictures in your port, as they look quite amateur-ish and put your port down: the second one and the third counting from the last.

Rachel Reilly wrote:
I'll play :-)

Great port and pictures, I pick this as my favorite:



You could use some more FASHION in your pics as an aspiring fashion photographer.

Hector Pachas wrote:
Great stuff there, but this has to be the one that catches my eye

I like the avatar the most, it's quite good lit and the hairdress adds some suspense.



I don't like the soft-effect in some of your pictures. Looks outdated.
Also I have the impression you need more quality lighting equipment.
The "beauty headshots" are not your strength (apart from your avatar) as they look not much like beauty and -sorry to tell you- in most cases not very professional.
The swimwear-section is not that pretty as well.

Dontez Akins wrote:
Ill give it a go

This is cool:



Apart from that I personally don't really like your style of glamour photography. Looks kind of cheap to me. But that is strictly my personal opinion.

MiGel wrote:
In General: Get loose of some pictures, work on your posing (get lost of the "hand-in-the-hair"-pose, it doesn't work 90% of the time) and work on even more variety in your port from high quality photographers.

Thanks so much for your input. I have a shoot coming up next week and I will keep your advice in mind. Best wishes to you

MiGel wrote:
This is cool:



Apart from that I personally don't really like your style of glamour photography. Looks kind of cheap to me. But that is strictly my personal opinion.

Thanks and by glamour are you referring to the bikini type shots are something else

MiGel wrote:

Great port and pictures, I pick this as my favorite:



You could use some more FASHION in your pics as an aspiring fashion photographer.

I want to do fashion but its hard to get decent designers and stylists to work with me :-(
And thank you!
I think we have the same method for outside shoots. One travel light w a beauty dish right? Lol

JAE Photography PA wrote:
Interested

This I picked as favorite, but there's lots of great 18+-work:

18+ https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31349313

Great port overall! Keep up the good work!