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Model

Hrimnir Frost

Posts: 4

Geneva, Geneva, Switzerland

I was wondering if anybody could give me some tips on what I should add to or edit on my profile I'm very new to this so anything is helpful!

May 21 13 04:00 am Link

Photographer

Erlinda

Posts: 7221

London, England, United Kingdom

Ingimar Hrimnir wrote:
I was wondering if anybody could give me some tips on what I should add to or edit on my profile I'm very new to this so anything is helpful!

This has to go, it looks like you are sticking your stomach out hmm
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130425/04/51790e815e73a_m.jpg

Look to shoot with photographers that could give you work like this
http://cdn04.cdn.socialitelife.com/wp-content/uploads/2011/04/ben-hill-model-04172011-08-580x435.jpg
http://24.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_lvxm363AXG1qc61d2o1_500.jpg
http://25.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_mauzy3KrVd1r1wmcto1_1280.jpg
http://img.scoop.it/NkaB7RNaZpE4CcNYZcRkdDl72eJkfbmt4t8yenImKBVaiQDB_Rd1H6kmuBWtceBJ
http://24.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_mcm8jsRII21qg22hlo1_500.jpg
http://24.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_m45tdrRh9S1qbnhmeo1_500.jpg
http://nojesmix.com/semra/files/2012/04/fotokurs-1.jpg

Just google editorial for men and you should be able to get some inspiration.

Good Luck smile

May 21 13 02:58 pm Link

Photographer

RachelReilly

Posts: 1730

Washington, District of Columbia, US

I agree with erlinda!
You have the potential and those images she posted are fantastic!

May 21 13 04:26 pm Link

Model

Hrimnir Frost

Posts: 4

Geneva, Geneva, Switzerland

Thank you for the tip, I have removed it and will be focusing on jobs in that area.
The photo I removed was taken by my friend, we were only fooling around after a shooting he did with another model.

May 23 13 10:22 am Link

Photographer

Erlinda

Posts: 7221

London, England, United Kingdom

Ingimar Hrimnir wrote:
Thank you for the tip, I have removed it and will be focusing on jobs in that area.
The photo I removed was taken by my friend, we were only fooling around after a shooting he did with another model.

Only put your BEST work in your portfolio. Quality over quantity, remember that. smile

May 23 13 11:06 am Link

Photographer

Matthew Gwinn

Posts: 129

Ypsilanti, Michigan, US

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130425/03/51790c03601fa_m.jpg

I know you don't have many images, but this one is out of focus and pixilated and should be removes as well.

May 23 13 11:16 am Link