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Photographer

A-M-P

Posts: 18465

Orlando, Florida, US

Thanks Fixing what was mentioned

Jun 04 15 04:09 pm Link

Photographer

sospix

Posts: 23775

Orlando, Florida, US

Lots of movement (the hair is perfect) and shape Miss A  .  .  .  nicely done  .  .  .  I guess my only distraction is your right hand, seems a bit stiff when compared with the rest of the image  .  .  .  but, that's being very picky  .  .  .

SOS

Jun 04 15 04:33 pm Link

Model

MatureModelMM

Posts: 2843

Detroit, Michigan, US

I really like it, the movement in your hair is a nice touch, you look simply beautiful and have a figure that's nice for modelling as well.

Jun 04 15 04:41 pm Link

Photographer

A-M-P

Posts: 18465

Orlando, Florida, US

sospix wrote:
Lots of movement (the hair is perfect) and shape Miss A  .  .  .  nicely done  .  .  .  I guess my only distraction is your right hand, seems a bit stiff when compared with the rest of the image  .  .  .  but, that's being very picky  .  .  .

SOS

Thanks I feel the same way about the arm I was debating about retouching the arm out.

Jun 04 15 05:23 pm Link

Photographer

Cherrystone

Posts: 37171

Columbus, Ohio, US

Wish it was cropped closer....like just above your left elbow? That would take care of the other little distraction at the same time too! smile

Love your face, it's always been great imho.

Jun 04 15 06:01 pm Link

Photographer

KungPaoChic

Posts: 4221

West Palm Beach, Florida, US

Hot stuff mami

Jun 04 15 07:49 pm Link

Photographer

ChadAlan

Posts: 4254

Los Angeles, California, US

Nice, is this the one that you had in the retoucher's forum?

Jun 04 15 08:04 pm Link

Photographer

Nor-Cal Photography

Posts: 3720

Walnut Creek, California, US

Very nice, but the right hand and missing left hand bother me.

But just one worthless opinion.

smile

Jun 04 15 10:20 pm Link

Photographer

A-M-P

Posts: 18465

Orlando, Florida, US

ChadAlan wrote:
Nice, is this the one that you had in the retoucher's forum?

Yes

Jun 05 15 04:24 pm Link

Photographer

J O H N A L L A N

Posts: 12221

Los Angeles, California, US

Yeah, I agree with the right arm/hand comments - I'd chop it out if that's possible.
Other than that this is nice.

Jun 05 15 04:29 pm Link

Photographer

Toto Photo

Posts: 3757

Belmont, California, US

You're beautiful.

Like others, both hands cropped awkwardly on an otherwise lovely photo. I never do reshoots but if this were mine, I would and crop it mid-thigh, maybe bring one hand up. Too much empty space behind you, might consider a vertical shot.

And a bit more powder if the highlights start to lose all detail, you're on the border now.

Jun 05 15 04:56 pm Link

Photographer

Lee_Photography

Posts: 9863

Minneapolis, Minnesota, US

I really want to see all of your left hand

Wish you well

Jun 08 15 04:16 am Link

Photographer

L O C U T U S

Posts: 1746

Bangor, Maine, US

I want your right hand doing something, and I want to see your left hand.

I love the facial expression, pose, composition, the mood of it all..
smilea very good self portrait indeed.

A-M-P wrote:
https://s15.postimg.org/f17ywmibf/IMG_8597_Edit.jpg

Jun 12 15 12:19 am Link

Photographer

A-M-P

Posts: 18465

Orlando, Florida, US

L O C U T U S wrote:
I want your right hand doing something, and I want to see your left hand.

I love the facial expression, pose, composition, the mood of it all..
smilea very good self portrait indeed.
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can you please remove the image from your quote Thanks smile

Jun 15 15 09:18 pm Link

Photographer

Toto Photo

Posts: 3757

Belmont, California, US

You can probably delete it from that quote by deleting it from your profile and then reposting.

Jun 26 15 11:19 am Link

Photographer

Mark Salo

Posts: 11726

Olney, Maryland, US

L O C U T U S wrote:
I want your right hand doing something, and I want to see your left hand.

I love the facial expression, pose, composition, the mood of it all..
smilea very good self portrait indeed.

A-M-P wrote:
can you please remove the image from your quote Thanks smile

We can benefit by seeing what is being discussed.  You are lovely and you do wonderful work.  Your reputation won't be diminished.

Jun 26 15 11:34 am Link

Photographer

Mark Salo

Posts: 11726

Olney, Maryland, US

L O C U T U S wrote:
I love the facial expression, pose, composition, the mood of it all..
smilea very good self portrait indeed.

+1

Jun 26 15 11:39 am Link