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Photographer

Erik Lee Photography

Posts: 422

Amityville, New York, US

Would love to hear constructive criticism on the newest swimwear images in my portfolio. Top images of Morgan. TIA.

Jul 10 15 05:58 am Link

Photographer

sospix

Posts: 23769

Orlando, Florida, US

Nice location, wonderful model  .  .  .  I shoot a lot of beach/surf/island for catalogs, mags and such  .  .  .  the one thing that hit my right off was your horizon line, depending on the usage (and the editor) a horizontal horizon line is almost a must  .  .  .  if it's more of a fashion based shoot, not quite as critical  .  .  .  another thing is lighting, was it an overcast day when you shot????  Most beach shoots want to be fairly bright, with saturated colours to pop the model, the wardrobe, the water, and the sky  .  .  .  likin' what you got, with a few tweaks you've got some winners  .  .  .  enjoy your next "day at da beach"  .  .  .  wink

SOS

Jul 10 15 06:53 am Link