Paige Addams wrote:
Go for it :p
Feel free to point out any photo you feel is less strong among the rest.

Since this is so close to being amazing I will choose this one:

These don't work as a duo. Just overall visually they don't mesh. Maybe if the portrait were on the right... I think you should revisit images and see if others flow together better.
The model, styling, and makeup are great. Your technical skill is great. However, I don't think the lighting suits the images. There is no story here. This would've been much better with a single light source, maybe black and white, more drama and mystery.

Very strong work overall!