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Looking for some critiques. Thanks, Tracy Jan 19 19 10:34 am Link
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Reason: 18+ Images Jan 23 19 08:50 am Link O K , since you said please. First you are a good looking model, I would be happy to work with you. That said, as already mentioned hire a good photographer and work closely with his /her directions. Posing, lighting, and angle are all important. If the photographer knows his/her work The difference will be astounding. Best wishes! Jan 23 19 10:07 am Link All of the following are NSFW https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/21669845 https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/39125202 BTW this should be flagged "M" in your portfolio. https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/116701 Not too bad but not to my taste. https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/26403213 No, just no. https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/22142051 Unattractive squashing of your breast. You could have moved the pillow and let your breast hang down. https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/21655916 Roll at waist and generally unattractive. Next time try moving the belt lower on your hips and do not tighten it. https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/22320822 https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/26403234 https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/26403227 https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/22142043 https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/143759 I especially like these. You need some new images. Your two most recent images are three years old. The rest are 8 to 13 years old. Your avatar is 12 years old. Jan 23 19 10:39 am Link My post was removed because it had 18+ images. Mine were not as explicit as several above. What gives? If a mod can put them back up, I can note it on the links. Jan 23 19 11:41 am Link As a Model Friend of mine once told me " Some mystery can make photos of models more interesting " Jan 23 19 03:11 pm Link you don't look happy in these 2 photos... the double chin pose is not quite working here. Posing is Key! Try working with Photographers that can help pose in much better light. don't shoot just to shoot. Create Photos that show your beauty and not your privates. you don't have to be nude to be a model. https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/21669845 https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/39125202 Jan 23 19 03:38 pm Link Unload these Skin color (orange and uneven) and expression. Head should be more forward to prevent multiple chins.. https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/22320822 Expression and chins https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/21669845 Ditto and terrible lighting https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/39125202 Terrible lighting, no chins though! https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/180382 Expression, lighting not great https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/39125202 https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/21655905 The best: https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/21669845 https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/21940012 https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/21903735 https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/229300 https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/26403227 Your pictures are old. Find a good photographer, keep your chin forward and watch your body angles and you could have an amaziing portfolio. All the best. Jan 23 19 08:38 pm Link My advice is something different than technical. Ask your self why you are doing this, and do work that is just what and why you are doing this, because from what you have; I am not seeing it. Jan 23 19 11:22 pm Link Aaron Pawlak wrote: Well said Aaron, I'm not seeing it either. Jan 24 19 01:09 pm Link OK - so you’re not 18 and 110 lbs. That doesn’t mean you can’t model, but it does mean that you’re going to have to put some time and effort into finding ways of posing that are either a) flattering, or b) artistically interesting, for your age and body type. Right now not only are you hit and miss, you have a couple images that seem to indicate that you have no clue it's even an issue (particularly the double chin shots). Many of the photographers you’ve chosen to work with apparently don't have a clue either - which is definitely not helping. You want to establish that while you may not have youth on your side, you make up for it with personality, experience, and a strong visual sense of style and body awareness (including posture). It's doable, but it will take effort. You will need to study great images and figure out what makes them work, especially from a perspective of posing. If you're not ready to put in that effort, I have to agree with the previous two posts. Why then are you doing this? Jan 24 19 05:14 pm Link |
