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Photographer

Project Vain Images

Posts: 83

San Diego, California, US

would love to know

Jul 03 14 05:28 pm Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2755

New York, New York, US

Darkroom Art wrote:
Still hoping for review.

Note: any links point to +18 photos
Profile usefulness: informative
Worthy of paid assignments: nope
First impressions: expressions and good executions, model driven
Your Skill level: super basic
Your Work focus: Nude art
What I like: nothing, unless it is done by an amazing talent nude arts makes me fall asleep.
What to delete: https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/7165637 plain tacky and religious icons should be avoided unless you are making a statement however in this case I see really nothing unless I am dumb and you are a genius.
Bottom line: You can do better, need to master your light, get courses if necessary. Bad light and random shadows will not give you a free pass to art.

Jul 03 14 05:34 pm Link

Photographer

Rob Sinkus Photography

Posts: 699

JOBSTOWN, New Jersey, US

varton wrote:
Note: any links point to +18 photos
Profile usefulness: informative
Worthy of paid assignments: nope
First impressions: expressions and good executions, model driven
Your Skill level: super basic
Your Work focus: Nude art
What I like: nothing, unless it is done by an amazing talent nude arts makes me fall asleep.
What to delete: https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/7165637 plain tacky and religious icons should be avoided unless you are making a statement however in this case I see really nothing unless I am dumb and you are a genius.
Bottom line: You can do better, need to master your light, get courses if necessary. Bad light and random shadows will not give you a free pass to art.

Thanks for the honest review

Jul 03 14 05:38 pm Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2755

New York, New York, US

EnlightendedPhotography wrote:
I need a lift today, really bad cold, thanks

Note: any links point to +18 photos
Profile usefulness: Very informative
Worthy of paid assignments: yes
First impressions: Talent at its best
Your Skill level: advanced in crafting, very basic in capturing
Your money shot: https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/080424/17/4810f820e12b4_m.jpg
Your Creativity: inspirational
Your Work focus: human statute
What I like: I have no preference as your genre is beyond my league.
Verdict: keep up the good work.

Jul 03 14 05:48 pm Link

Photographer

roger alan

Posts: 1192

Anderson, Indiana, US

Would appreciate your review...

Jul 03 14 05:49 pm Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2755

New York, New York, US

Robinson0Photography wrote:
Me! smile

Profile usefulness: somewhat useful
Worthy of paid assignments: not sure
First impressions: Pretty generic port, nothing earth shattering there, family style portraiture and some pretty girls.
Your Skill level: Average or unpredictable
What I like: https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/131022/01/5266372712c03_m.jpg
Great series
Technique: very basic, your lighting is generally flat.
I like some of the photos you shot but not strong enough to list.

Jul 03 14 06:07 pm Link

Photographer

BlueMarlinPhotography

Posts: 34

Los Angeles, California, US

I'd appreciate it very much, have never asked for this before...

Enjoy the 4th !

Jul 03 14 06:17 pm Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2755

New York, New York, US

IreneNicole Photography wrote:
Me Please smile

Note: any links point to +18 photos
Profile usefulness: useful
Worthy of paid assignments: not sure, average work, nothing grabs me as worth paying for.
First impressions: you want to be original but falling short.
Your Skill level: your light is flat and need to be improved
Your Creativity: limited to exploit the stereotypes
Your Work focus: anything that would be fun.
What to delete: https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140123/12/52e180a9cc842_m.jpg would have been better to photograph just the seascape.

Jul 03 14 06:17 pm Link

Model

Jessica Fae Robinson

Posts: 7

San Diego, California, US

Ill give it a shot. tell me what you think

Jul 03 14 06:19 pm Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2755

New York, New York, US

Ashlynn Dennington wrote:
I would like to know please smile

Profile usefulness: short and sweet
Worthy of paid assignments: yes within a reason as everyone's time is worth something
Your Skill level: newbie
Challenges: 5'2" height
Your Work focus: not sure
Impression: most of your looks in your port are similar. Improve your camera connection.
Verdict: Gorgeous features however you are a commodity with a lot of competition. Keep shooting learn poses and gather experience.

Jul 03 14 06:28 pm Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2755

New York, New York, US

Studio8687 wrote:
Me please smile

Profile usefulness: informative
Worthy of paid assignments: yes
First impressions: you have talent and experience
Your Skill level: advanced
Your money shot: https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140603/22/538eb16087f0a_m.jpg
Your Work focus: Beauty Fashion  editorials
What I like: https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140222/23/5309a042eb70e_m.jpg
Bottom line: I like your work.  Keep it up.

Jul 03 14 06:36 pm Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2755

New York, New York, US

n a t a l i e  wrote:
Sure, I'd love some critique. (:

Profile usefulness: useful
Worthy of paid assignments: yes
First impressions: sweet baby face
Your Skill level: starting newbie
Pluses: young!
Your money shot: https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140613/23/539bf205f2d9b_m.jpg even if you look a bit older there.
Your Work focus: Hair, fashion, make up.
Next Step: try agencies.
Verdict: You have the look.

Jul 03 14 06:41 pm Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2755

New York, New York, US

jay_lotus_photography wrote:
lemme know please.

Profile usefulness: somewhat
Worthy of paid assignments: yes
First impressions: generic port, one size fits all photography style
Your Skill level: intermediate
Your money shot: https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140223/21/530ad1ff345ad_m.jpg
Your Creativity: model driven
Your Work focus: glamor lingerie
Verdict: Develop a style, if you want to be different.

Jul 03 14 06:48 pm Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2755

New York, New York, US

Alkonost wrote:
My best..

Profile usefulness: Informative and overdone
Worthy of paid assignments: yes for alternative and adult modeling
First impressions: Alternative model
Your Skill level: will do
Your best: https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140206/17/52f4344bde873_m.jpg
Verdict: Keep shooting

Jul 03 14 06:56 pm Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2755

New York, New York, US

Rachel A Murray wrote:
I'd like to know please smile

Profile usefulness: Useful
Worthy of paid assignments: Yes
First impressions: Cute look
Your Skill level: Beginner
Your Work focus: fashion commercial
What I like: https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140312/15/5320e41009283_m.jpg
Verdict: Diversify your port, add looks.

Jul 03 14 07:00 pm Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2755

New York, New York, US

analog light wrote:
have at it

Profile usefulness: useful
Worthy of paid assignments: nope
First impressions: hobbyist with extensive skills
Your Skill level: intermediate
Your Work focus: Nostalgia
What I like: https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140313/02/53217a8f7f047_m.jpg
Bottom line: Keep shooting, keep it interesting, your work is pretty much uneventful.

Jul 03 14 07:03 pm Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2755

New York, New York, US

roger alan wrote:
Would appreciate your review...

Your work is uneventful and looks like you are having great time shooting.
But must coach models better
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140313/09/5321e352eaaf3_m.jpg
improve your light as well

Jul 03 14 07:08 pm Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2755

New York, New York, US

BlueMarlinPhotography wrote:
I'd appreciate it very much, have never asked for this before...

Enjoy the 4th !

Profile usefulness: Useful
Worthy of paid assignments: Yes
First impressions: Awesome swimsuit work
Your Skill level: Advanced
Your money shot: https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130226/19/512d799279100_m.jpg
Your Creativity: https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31677806
Your Work focus: Beauty in every form
What I like: https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/081022/04/48fee7b3e88ee_m.jpg subtle sexiness.
Bottom line: Great port, wild stuff, keep it up!

Jul 03 14 07:13 pm Link

Photographer

Rik Williams

Posts: 4005

Melbourne, Victoria, Australia

varton wrote:

all links point to +18 photos
Profile usefulness: To the point
Worthy of paid assignments: Yes
First impressions: I see talent, perseverance, effectiveness.
Your Skill level:   Advanced
Your money shot: https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/26491979 and https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140104/03/52c7ead69adcc_m.jpg
Your Creativity: is seen in art nudes
Your Noteworthy Technique: great control on light
Your Work focus: Primarily as Art and fashion nudes
What I like: https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/28658425 listed
Verdict: Super job, keep shooting!

Thank you for your in depth analysis Varton, you're far too kind smile

Jul 03 14 07:15 pm Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2755

New York, New York, US

Jessica Fae Robinson wrote:
Ill give it a shot. tell me what you think

Profile usefulness: useful
Worthy of paid assignments:yes
First impressions: Great modeling and features noted
Your Skill level: intermediate
Pluses: Tall
Your money shot: https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140622/18/53a78925b755e_m.jpg
Your Work focus: Fashion
What I like: https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140615/10/539dd853bf460_m.jpg
What to delete: https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140613/18/539ba97d07b52_m.jpg
Verdict: Improve expression and posing

Jul 03 14 07:18 pm Link

Photographer

SavageBeautyPortraits

Posts: 82

Auckland, Auckland, New Zealand

I would be interested...Thanks Ant

Jul 03 14 07:19 pm Link

Model

Jechs

Posts: 3

Beaverton, Oregon, US

I don't have a ton of variety in my port yet, but I'd love a critique. Thanks in advance.

Jul 03 14 10:15 pm Link

Model

Manadis

Posts: 3

Amsterdam, Noord-Holland, Netherlands

Thank you for the review! smile

Jul 03 14 10:31 pm Link

Model

Azlyn

Posts: 35

Spartanburg, South Carolina, US

I truly can't thank you enough for your detailed (and incredibly pleasant) feedback. smile

Jul 03 14 10:41 pm Link

Photographer

catchlights-NL

Posts: 32

Haaksbergen, Overijssel, Netherlands

aight...hit me with a review.

cheers,

JJ (Netherlands)

Jul 04 14 02:26 am Link

Model

Anita1993

Posts: 316

Venlo, Limburg, Netherlands

Okay big_smile

Jul 04 14 08:50 am Link

Model

dead and goneeeeeeeeee

Posts: 161

Aniak, Alaska, US

varton wrote:

Profile usefulness: Useful
Worthy of paid assignments:yes
First impressions: amateur who made up her mind
Your Skill level: beginner
Your Work focus: a good fit for potentially everything
What I like: https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140521/11/537cf23cf0253_m.jpg
Bottom line: Beautiful look and features that should attract many shooters.
nothing to list at this time.

Thanks! smile

Jul 04 14 08:56 am Link

Model

Audlum

Posts: 20

Grand Rapids, Michigan, US

I could really use your insight - I'd love to know your thoughts!  Thanks.

Jul 04 14 08:59 am Link

Photographer

Carleton Rainey

Posts: 191

Dayton, Ohio, US

let me know what you think!

Jul 04 14 09:16 am Link

Model

Alexandra Beck

Posts: 175

Los Angeles, California, US

Please!! <3

Jul 04 14 05:11 pm Link

Model

Annie S

Posts: 197

Minneapolis, Minnesota, US

varton wrote:

Thank you smile I am definitely going to keep all of this in mind!

Thanks also for running such an amazing thread! You've got so many critiques done and it's all still so organized.

Jul 05 14 11:22 am Link

Photographer

BlueMarlinPhotography

Posts: 34

Los Angeles, California, US

Thanks very much ! I really appreciate the feedback.  I'm always looking to improve. There are some incredible photogs on mayhem.  Am getting to the point where I recognize their work as soon as I see it.





varton wrote:

Profile usefulness: Useful
Worthy of paid assignments: Yes
First impressions: Awesome swimsuit work
Your Skill level: Advanced
Your money shot: https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130226/19/512d799279100_m.jpg
Your Creativity: https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31677806
Your Work focus: Beauty in every form
What I like: https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/081022/04/48fee7b3e88ee_m.jpg subtle sexiness.
Bottom line: Great port, wild stuff, keep it up!

Jul 07 14 04:07 pm Link

Photographer

Michael Sundin

Posts: 12

Napa, California, US

Let me know if you find anything worthwhile

Jul 07 14 06:10 pm Link

Model

Rose Devillion Devine

Posts: 3

Brooksville, Florida, US

interested

Jul 07 14 06:27 pm Link

Model

Destiny Noir

Posts: 49

Clarksville, Tennessee, US

I'd love to know your opinion smile

Jul 07 14 11:40 pm Link

Artist/Painter

Glitterartsi

Posts: 29

Liverpool, England, United Kingdom

Hi,
I would love to know, if you wouldn't mind.
Thank you ever so much.
Take care, Rhiannon x

Jul 21 14 01:24 pm Link

Photographer

vantran

Posts: 37

Singapore, Singapore, Singapore

Let me know, thanks!

Jul 21 14 01:30 pm Link

Model

Annie Blair Lieber

Posts: 233

Brooklyn, New York, US

Please tongue

Jul 21 14 02:08 pm Link

Photographer

Paige Addams

Posts: 21

Brugge, West Flanders, Belgium

I wouldn't mind a little feedback smile

Jul 21 14 03:24 pm Link

Model

carrielbarlow

Posts: 31

Nashville, Tennessee, US

I'd love to hear your thoughts smile

Jul 21 14 04:22 pm Link