Photographer
Varton
Posts: 2755
New York, New York, US
Darkroom Art wrote: Still hoping for review. Note: any links point to +18 photos Profile usefulness: informative Worthy of paid assignments: nope First impressions: expressions and good executions, model driven Your Skill level: super basic Your Work focus: Nude art What I like: nothing, unless it is done by an amazing talent nude arts makes me fall asleep. What to delete: https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/7165637 plain tacky and religious icons should be avoided unless you are making a statement however in this case I see really nothing unless I am dumb and you are a genius. Bottom line: You can do better, need to master your light, get courses if necessary. Bad light and random shadows will not give you a free pass to art.
Photographer
Rob Sinkus Photography
Posts: 699
JOBSTOWN, New Jersey, US
varton wrote: Note: any links point to +18 photos Profile usefulness: informative Worthy of paid assignments: nope First impressions: expressions and good executions, model driven Your Skill level: super basic Your Work focus: Nude art What I like: nothing, unless it is done by an amazing talent nude arts makes me fall asleep. What to delete: https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/7165637 plain tacky and religious icons should be avoided unless you are making a statement however in this case I see really nothing unless I am dumb and you are a genius. Bottom line: You can do better, need to master your light, get courses if necessary. Bad light and random shadows will not give you a free pass to art. Thanks for the honest review
Photographer
Varton
Posts: 2755
New York, New York, US
EnlightendedPhotography wrote: I need a lift today, really bad cold, thanks Note: any links point to +18 photos Profile usefulness: Very informative Worthy of paid assignments: yes First impressions: Talent at its best Your Skill level: advanced in crafting, very basic in capturing Your money shot: Your Creativity: inspirational Your Work focus: human statute What I like: I have no preference as your genre is beyond my league. Verdict: keep up the good work.
Photographer
roger alan
Posts: 1192
Anderson, Indiana, US
Would appreciate your review...
Photographer
Varton
Posts: 2755
New York, New York, US
Robinson0Photography wrote: Me! Profile usefulness: somewhat useful Worthy of paid assignments: not sure First impressions: Pretty generic port, nothing earth shattering there, family style portraiture and some pretty girls. Your Skill level: Average or unpredictable What I like: Great series Technique: very basic, your lighting is generally flat. I like some of the photos you shot but not strong enough to list.
Photographer
BlueMarlinPhotography
Posts: 34
Los Angeles, California, US
I'd appreciate it very much, have never asked for this before... Enjoy the 4th !
Photographer
Varton
Posts: 2755
New York, New York, US
IreneNicole Photography wrote: Me Please Note: any links point to +18 photos Profile usefulness: useful Worthy of paid assignments: not sure, average work, nothing grabs me as worth paying for. First impressions: you want to be original but falling short. Your Skill level: your light is flat and need to be improved Your Creativity: limited to exploit the stereotypes Your Work focus: anything that would be fun. What to delete: would have been better to photograph just the seascape.
Model
Jessica Fae Robinson
Posts: 7
San Diego, California, US
Ill give it a shot. tell me what you think
Photographer
Varton
Posts: 2755
New York, New York, US
Ashlynn Dennington wrote: I would like to know please Profile usefulness: short and sweet Worthy of paid assignments: yes within a reason as everyone's time is worth something Your Skill level: newbie Challenges: 5'2" height Your Work focus: not sure Impression: most of your looks in your port are similar. Improve your camera connection. Verdict: Gorgeous features however you are a commodity with a lot of competition. Keep shooting learn poses and gather experience.
Photographer
Varton
Posts: 2755
New York, New York, US
Studio8687 wrote: Me please Profile usefulness: informative Worthy of paid assignments: yes First impressions: you have talent and experience Your Skill level: advanced Your money shot: Your Work focus: Beauty Fashion editorials What I like: Bottom line: I like your work. Keep it up.
Photographer
Varton
Posts: 2755
New York, New York, US
n a t a l i e wrote: Sure, I'd love some critique. (: Profile usefulness: useful Worthy of paid assignments: yes First impressions: sweet baby face Your Skill level: starting newbie Pluses: young! Your money shot: even if you look a bit older there. Your Work focus: Hair, fashion, make up. Next Step: try agencies. Verdict: You have the look.
Photographer
Varton
Posts: 2755
New York, New York, US
jay_lotus_photography wrote: lemme know please. Profile usefulness: somewhat Worthy of paid assignments: yes First impressions: generic port, one size fits all photography style Your Skill level: intermediate Your money shot: Your Creativity: model driven Your Work focus: glamor lingerie Verdict: Develop a style, if you want to be different.
Photographer
Varton
Posts: 2755
New York, New York, US
Alkonost wrote: My best.. Profile usefulness: Informative and overdone Worthy of paid assignments: yes for alternative and adult modeling First impressions: Alternative model Your Skill level: will do Your best: Verdict: Keep shooting
Photographer
Varton
Posts: 2755
New York, New York, US
Rachel A Murray wrote: I'd like to know please Profile usefulness: Useful Worthy of paid assignments: Yes First impressions: Cute look Your Skill level: Beginner Your Work focus: fashion commercial What I like: Verdict: Diversify your port, add looks.
Photographer
Varton
Posts: 2755
New York, New York, US
analog light wrote: have at it Profile usefulness: useful Worthy of paid assignments: nope First impressions: hobbyist with extensive skills Your Skill level: intermediate Your Work focus: Nostalgia What I like: Bottom line: Keep shooting, keep it interesting, your work is pretty much uneventful.
Photographer
Varton
Posts: 2755
New York, New York, US
roger alan wrote: Would appreciate your review... Your work is uneventful and looks like you are having great time shooting. But must coach models better improve your light as well
Photographer
Varton
Posts: 2755
New York, New York, US
BlueMarlinPhotography wrote: I'd appreciate it very much, have never asked for this before... Enjoy the 4th ! Profile usefulness: Useful Worthy of paid assignments: Yes First impressions: Awesome swimsuit work Your Skill level: Advanced Your money shot: Your Creativity: https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31677806 Your Work focus: Beauty in every form What I like: subtle sexiness. Bottom line: Great port, wild stuff, keep it up!
Photographer
Rik Williams
Posts: 4005
Melbourne, Victoria, Australia
varton wrote: all links point to +18 photos Profile usefulness: To the point Worthy of paid assignments: Yes First impressions: I see talent, perseverance, effectiveness. Your Skill level: Advanced Your money shot: https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/26491979 and Your Creativity: is seen in art nudes Your Noteworthy Technique: great control on light Your Work focus: Primarily as Art and fashion nudes What I like: https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/28658425 listed Verdict: Super job, keep shooting! Thank you for your in depth analysis Varton, you're far too kind
Photographer
Varton
Posts: 2755
New York, New York, US
Jessica Fae Robinson wrote: Ill give it a shot. tell me what you think Profile usefulness: useful Worthy of paid assignments:yes First impressions: Great modeling and features noted Your Skill level: intermediate Pluses: Tall Your money shot: Your Work focus: Fashion What I like: What to delete: Verdict: Improve expression and posing
Photographer
SavageBeautyPortraits
Posts: 82
Auckland, Auckland, New Zealand
I would be interested...Thanks Ant
Model
Jechs
Posts: 3
Beaverton, Oregon, US
I don't have a ton of variety in my port yet, but I'd love a critique. Thanks in advance.
Model
Manadis
Posts: 3
Amsterdam, Noord-Holland, Netherlands
Thank you for the review!
Model
Azlyn
Posts: 35
Spartanburg, South Carolina, US
I truly can't thank you enough for your detailed (and incredibly pleasant) feedback.
Photographer
catchlights-NL
Posts: 32
Haaksbergen, Overijssel, Netherlands
aight...hit me with a review. cheers, JJ (Netherlands)
Model
Anita1993
Posts: 316
Venlo, Limburg, Netherlands
Okay
Model
dead and goneeeeeeeeee
Posts: 161
Aniak, Alaska, US
varton wrote: Profile usefulness: Useful Worthy of paid assignments:yes First impressions: amateur who made up her mind Your Skill level: beginner Your Work focus: a good fit for potentially everything What I like: Bottom line: Beautiful look and features that should attract many shooters. nothing to list at this time. Thanks!
Model
Audlum
Posts: 20
Grand Rapids, Michigan, US
I could really use your insight - I'd love to know your thoughts! Thanks.
Photographer
Carleton Rainey
Posts: 191
Dayton, Ohio, US
let me know what you think!
Model
Annie S
Posts: 197
Minneapolis, Minnesota, US
varton wrote:
Thank you I am definitely going to keep all of this in mind! Thanks also for running such an amazing thread! You've got so many critiques done and it's all still so organized.
Photographer
BlueMarlinPhotography
Posts: 34
Los Angeles, California, US
Thanks very much ! I really appreciate the feedback. I'm always looking to improve. There are some incredible photogs on mayhem. Am getting to the point where I recognize their work as soon as I see it. varton wrote: Profile usefulness: Useful Worthy of paid assignments: Yes First impressions: Awesome swimsuit work Your Skill level: Advanced Your money shot: Your Creativity: https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31677806 Your Work focus: Beauty in every form What I like: subtle sexiness. Bottom line: Great port, wild stuff, keep it up!
Photographer
Michael Sundin
Posts: 12
Napa, California, US
Let me know if you find anything worthwhile
Model
Destiny Noir
Posts: 49
Clarksville, Tennessee, US
I'd love to know your opinion
Artist/Painter
Glitterartsi
Posts: 29
Liverpool, England, United Kingdom
Hi, I would love to know, if you wouldn't mind. Thank you ever so much. Take care, Rhiannon x
Photographer
vantran
Posts: 37
Singapore, Singapore, Singapore
Photographer
Paige Addams
Posts: 21
Brugge, West Flanders, Belgium
I wouldn't mind a little feedback
Model
carrielbarlow
Posts: 31
Nashville, Tennessee, US
I'd love to hear your thoughts
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