Forums > Critique > I will list your best and will tell you why.

Photographer

Tomas Kibsgaard Larsen

Posts: 85

Kongsberg, Buskerud, Norway

I would love some feedback smile

Sep 08 14 10:34 pm Link

Model

madeline claire

Posts: 18

Minneapolis, Minnesota, US

Be as harsh as necessary

Sep 09 14 01:25 pm Link

Model

kobayashi_m

Posts: 15

Los Angeles, California, US

I would love your feedback and professional critique smile

Sep 09 14 01:27 pm Link

Photographer

Blaschke

Posts: 137

New Braunfels, Texas, US

As they say, why the heck not? :-)

Sep 10 14 07:52 pm Link

Photographer

GSG Photography Studio

Posts: 221

Portland, Oregon, US

I would love to hear your thoughts!

Sep 10 14 11:45 pm Link

Model

LauraLuna

Posts: 261

Madrid, Madrid, Spain

I'd love to hear your feedback, thanks a lot.

Sep 11 14 07:35 am Link

Model

Riecey

Posts: 107

Sacramento, California, US

Haven't been on in a while....curious to see what cha think. smile

Sep 21 14 07:15 am Link

Model

Kaya Mey

Posts: 6

San Francisco, California, US

What do you think?

Sep 21 14 07:28 am Link

Photographer

Northern Sights

Posts: 186

Soldotna, Alaska, US

I'm in.

Sep 21 14 07:39 am Link

Model

Audrey Seybold NYC

Posts: 86

New York, New York, US

Would appreciate opinions and constructive criticism.

Sep 22 14 12:47 am Link

Photographer

Allure Photography AD

Posts: 1

Delta, Colorado, US

interested....

Sep 23 14 11:53 pm Link

Model

Toxxsynn

Posts: 23

Yonkers, New York, US

Interested!

Sep 26 14 02:18 pm Link

Photographer

EnlightendedPhotography

Posts: 828

Eugene, Oregon, US

I applaud your efforts...would like to know.

Sep 26 14 02:27 pm Link

Photographer

RDclicks

Posts: 5

Nashville, Tennessee, US

Very much interested in this . Would like to see different critiques on my pictures . I am a newbie though in fashion photography.

Sep 26 14 09:29 pm Link

Photographer

WeitzmanPhotography

Posts: 43

Cleveland, Ohio, US

Would love your thoughts!

Sep 30 14 12:32 pm Link

Photographer

TheZombieJose

Posts: 106

Los Angeles, California, US

please:)

Sep 30 14 06:44 pm Link

Model

ScottSideways

Posts: 12

Toronto, Ontario, Canada

Please smile

Sep 30 14 07:27 pm Link

Photographer

Oubliette Media

Posts: 146

RESEDA, California, US

I'm game

Sep 30 14 07:38 pm Link

Photographer

G E N I O C I T Y

Posts: 35

Toronto, Ontario, Canada

Will be an honor! Please do

Sep 30 14 07:42 pm Link

Model

Audrey Seybold NYC

Posts: 86

New York, New York, US

Lay it on me!

Thank you for taking the time to do this

Sep 30 14 09:02 pm Link

Model

ChrisK

Posts: 3

Kansas City, Missouri, US

Critique?

Oct 03 14 03:12 pm Link

Model

amberlynncarino

Posts: 27

San Diego, California, US

I want the harsh truth like my Nonna would tell the butcher!

Oct 05 14 10:52 pm Link

Model

Sienna Hayes

Posts: 35

Utila, Islas de la Bahía, Honduras

Hey, please let me know what you think! smile

Oct 05 14 11:38 pm Link

Model

Ann Stokes - All Natural

Posts: 77

Orange, California, US

I'm in!

Oct 06 14 07:08 am Link

Photographer

ShapeTheLight

Posts: 270

Garner, North Carolina, US

Go 4 it...

Oct 06 14 07:09 am Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2755

New York, New York, US

amberlynncarino  wrote:
I want the harsh truth like my Nonna would tell the butcher!

your Nonna is Korean?
smile)))))
I am learning Korean for the past few months and my Nunna is amazing LOL

Oct 07 14 04:19 pm Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2755

New York, New York, US

Carleton Rainey wrote:
let me know what you think!

Sorry nothing out of ordinary strikes me in your port
you do very nice portraiture but that's all
I see no artistic "signature" feel there...
I am not sure what else to say really....

Oct 07 14 04:33 pm Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2755

New York, New York, US

Alexandra Beck wrote:
Please!! <3

Ok looked at your port.
You bring only a single type of "  flavor and emotions" to your  shoots.
Improve your poses, as you poses are mostly generic, blunt looks and your stare to the camera is the same in most photos in your port.
please don't pose like a deer staring at the incoming headlights.
I like few of your "Japanese doll" like looks but I get bored pretty much quickly like most people in this field.
Needless to say you can do much better.

Oct 07 14 04:37 pm Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2755

New York, New York, US

Michael Sundin wrote:
Let me know if you find anything worthwhile

I think you are mostly model driven
you lack control over your subject matter
You need to improve your lighting as you fall in the category of some people  who insist bad lighting is either high or low key LOL
At this point your high key work lack good contrast on clothing
and it is really a crime to try to shoot high key white color outfits on white backgrounds see below:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30979979
and also some pics like this below
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/34029734
gives GWC feel
the only photo I really like is this one below
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/37069401
but badly photoshopped
keep it up
you can do tenfold better

Oct 07 14 05:31 pm Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2755

New York, New York, US

Rose Devine wrote:
interested

Profile usefulness: somewhat useful
Worthy of paid assignments: yes
First impressions: in older photos the nerdy girl next door look however I like your versatility when the magic of make up is applied well.
Your Skill level: average
Pluses: none
Your money shot: https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120923/12/505f61e4b3813_m.jpg
Your Work focus: should be fashion
What I like: https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140707/18/53bb4c41e84d4_m.jpg but it is not you, it is the photographer and mua
What to delete: too many girl next door photos

keep it up!

Oct 07 14 05:41 pm Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2755

New York, New York, US

Destiny Noir wrote:
I'd love to know your opinion smile

Profile usefulness: yes
Worthy of paid assignments:yes
First impressions: beautiful look
Your Skill level: will do
Pluses: great camera connection
Your money shot: https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130316/21/5145404bae285_m.jpg
Your Work focus: urban fashion, high fashion, lifestyle
What I like: https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130316/21/51453fcdc61b4_m.jpg totally awesome.
[b]Verdict:
cool port that could  get you hired.

Oct 07 14 05:52 pm Link

Model

Elana Vital

Posts: 42

Miami, Florida, US

I'd like a critique, please. I think I need to freshen up my portfolio.

Oct 07 14 05:57 pm Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2755

New York, New York, US

vantran wrote:
Let me know, thanks!

You have really too little posted for me to have an idea on your overall skills.
Your best https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140908/07/540dbb109e5e1_m.jpg
keep shooting
this black and white https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140715/14/53c5a31926690_m.jpg is a total flap for 2 reasons
a) flat light
b) bra mark on model's back that shouldn't be there as well as untidy hair strands clearly visible.

Oct 07 14 05:58 pm Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2755

New York, New York, US

Annie Blair Lieber wrote:
Please tongue

Versatile look, I like the artistic slant of your port and look.
notably https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120908/10/504b838589a3b_m.jpg
I am sure you can pull of many genres from fashion to Bates style fetish.

Oct 07 14 06:23 pm Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2755

New York, New York, US

Paige Addams wrote:
I wouldn't mind a little feedback smile

Worthy of paid assignments:yes
First impressions: model material
Your Skill level: would be compatible with my top pick for print work
Your money shot: https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140607/14/539389e58212a_m.jpg
Your Work focus: natural for alternative and alt fashion goth bondage and adult themes
What I like: https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140517/04/5377450698b28_m.jpg

Bottom line: You should be viable for many applications.
Advice: don't be predictable in your poses

Oct 07 14 06:31 pm Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2755

New York, New York, US

carrielbarlow wrote:
I'd love to hear your thoughts smile

Profile usefulness: generic, we don't know nothing about you.
First impressions: girl next door look some photos look like facebook shots
Your Skill level: beginner
Your Work focus: commercial fashion
What I like: https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140611/11/5398a26acbc7e_m.jpg mainly because of the interesting color distribution.
Advice: Watch your weight. work on your poses.

Oct 07 14 06:40 pm Link

Photographer

ShapeTheLight

Posts: 270

Garner, North Carolina, US

Go 4 it...

Oct 07 14 06:48 pm Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2755

New York, New York, US

Anita1993 wrote:
Okay big_smile

nice standard port
nothing earth shuttering
and  in some of your photos you appear somewhat soulless (my impression only)

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/36657624
and
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/36413488
are redundant and bad photos-> delete

work more on your poses and looks.
show more your wild side, spontaneity
too many "nice girl" shots there.

Oct 07 14 06:50 pm Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2755

New York, New York, US

Emma Joan wrote:
Appreciation to your time into this! smile

Ps, i know my port is lame atm so don't bother

First impressions: Modeling as an afterthought
Your Skill level: newbie, need guidance
Challenges: lack of confidence in your expressions
What I like: your innocent look, you could capitalize on that
What to delete: http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/36833628 bad amateur, you look horrible
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/36826108 redundant
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/36486102 facebook
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31856123 useless for you
Bottom line: work hard, team up with real pros
Advice: if you can mix naughty with nice it will work better for you.

Oct 07 14 07:00 pm Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2755

New York, New York, US

Groover wrote:
Let's do this. Thanks in advance.

First impressions: babes babes babes and more babes
and I only have compliments for you.
I noticed some outstanding light schemes and great portraits as well.
you have the ability to show the best of your models

Oct 07 14 07:07 pm Link