Backdrop Photography wrote:
Great idea.  Would love your thoughts.

First impressions: Nice pro work with some deviations from fashion focus. notably Jessica Vaughn erotic nudes https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/28370437
Profile usefulness: informative
Your Skill level: advanced
Your Work focus: fashion and beauty
What I like: but prefer more vibrant colors

What to delete: https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/28370429 she looks cheap due to pose and flat light topped with cropped part of her feet
Verdict: Good work in general but some disparities in quality and themes are noted.

Open Loop Photography wrote:
What an undertaking, be very interested in your feedback if you get this far.

First impressions: some good ideas, good control on natural and artificial light
Profile usefulness: somewhat useful
Your Skill level: intermediate
Your money shot:
Your Work focus: artistic
What I like:
Verdict: Good job!

Robert Hare Photography wrote:
Fire Away!

Nice portraiture work, keep it up.

My preferred BW >   
watch the retouching.

Distinct Edges  wrote:
I'm in!

Great to see some photographers shooting only man. Your work is consistent and quite good. My only recommendation would be to watch your crops.
bad ones below:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/35932763
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/35932714
avoid crutting off upper and lower extremities.
You should add some studio work as well.

Diane Diane Diane wrote:
Review me please! (:

Overall great port targeted to fashion hair and lifestyle with some little failed touches of glamour.
Posing is quite good but at times soulless
Kind of expected.
Your best look is on top 
nothing to list at the moment.

RUDEBOY-PHOTOGRAPHY wrote:
Do me please.

Portfolio buddy photographer here, unfortunately I don't see anything on your port that warrants a good TF deal for the model. Your low key work is mostly flat light and no sophistication are noted in wardrobe or concepts.

Lighting need to be improved.

Your use of lens capabilities are a bit mismatch for the genre and your blatant push for shallow depth of field can be a disservice.
Above:  face out of focus, shoulder waist in focus, butt out of focus. What bothers me most the flat light and lack of contrast and the head crop in the wrong spot.

Emily Smiles wrote:
I'd love to know.

Compliments on your look and some really good print work.

The port is pretty generic as far as poses and themes.
If it serves you it's fine, if not add some spices and sprinkles and show naughty with nice.

Ruebon Edgerly wrote:
I'm in~ Ruebón

I have seen some good artistic nudes with interesting polished post work.
But nothing there that grabbed me at the point to be listed.
Great one just the way is cropped.
good luck to you.

snowflakeonfire4107 wrote:
Could you possibly have time for me please?

I will give you a biased review. First of all bondage and feet fetish is a lucrative field for a model, the trouble is that everyone now noticed it and jumps into the bandwagon and the market is crowded with people thinking their modeling is the best thing after the sliced bread.

You should dump all of the amateur images and get someone decent to shoot with you. Make it classy. As is, your port will only attract GWCs. Your selection of lingerie is crap and makes you look like a cheap hooker.

Dump all the photos and start fresh. Get your photos retouched by someone who knows what he is doing. Smudge and blur is not photoshopping.

While posing act natural and be mindful of raising eyebrows that would raise wrinkles on forehead.

Study other photographer's work, contact other models, attend fetcon. Add charms and personality to your work. Don't reinvent the wheel, there is a huge competition out there.
That's all I can say.
Start the renovation now.

Sharkie Mac wrote:
Please do, when you have time!

First impressions: good functional port, beauty and talent
Your Work focus: glamour beauty commercial
Profile usefulness: informative
Worthy of paid assignments: yes
Your Skill level: intermediate
Your money shot:
What to delete: https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/37151207 you look fat there
Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: gorgeous assets, but watch your expressions.

Katie Reid wrote:
I'd love your opinion!

First impressions: Nice pretty girl look
Your Work focus: Beauty, commercial
Challenges: per port , limited applications
Profile usefulness: informative
Worthy of paid assignments: yes
Your Skill level: beginner
Your money shot: listed
What I like:
What to delete: https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/36695781 , https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/36695772 usless to a model port, better suited to a retoucher or photographer port, looks also tacky.
Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: try to diversify to attract broad range of paid work.

sillykitty wrote:
I'd love some feedback please!

First impressions: Pretty lady trying to leverage on +18 genre photography
Your Work focus: fetish art, art nudes
Profile usefulness: most people will skip
Worthy of paid assignments: yes
Your Skill level: beginner
Verdict: Not a very strong port.

Tomas Kibsgaard Larsen wrote:
I would love some feedback

First impressions: Good photographer that has an eye for beauty.
Your Work focus: Primarily fashion,
Profile usefulness: informative
Worthy of paid assignments: yes
Your Skill level: intermediate
Challenges: bad angle and flash reflection on wall messes up otherwise a great shot.
Your money shot:
What I like: crop out the distracting candle light fixture in the background.
What to delete: https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31743472 weakens your port although not bad.
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31743368 replace with better crop
Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: Awesome port, Your low key needs work, be conscientious of your light paths.

Madeline Lunzer wrote:
Be as harsh as necessary

First impressions: Pretty lady in the land of Red riding Hood with the big bad wolf
Your Work focus: fashion
Profile usefulness: informative
Your Skill level: beginner
Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: You are still young and good habits form early. Use your time wisely and work with the right photographers network with other models of your age.

kobayashi_m wrote:
I would love your feedback and professional critique

First impressions: You are an amazing woman
Your Work focus: should be sports, fitness, dance, fashion, commercial.
Profile usefulness: informative
Worthy of paid assignments: yes
Your Skill level: advanced
What I like: Classy feminine look.
What to delete: delete redundant photos of the same outfit and location
Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: Add more photos. When you pose for glamour/lingerie avoid tense poses that would show or enhance your leg/thigh musculature.

Jayme Blaschke wrote:
As they say, why the heck not? :-)

First impressions: Interesting port by a talented photographer. like the IRs
Your Work focus: "this and that"
Challenges: edits fall short of convincing
Profile usefulness: informative
Worthy of paid assignments: yes
Your Skill level: advanced
Your creativity: very amusing indeed. listed
Your money shot:
What I like:
What to delete: https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/36126262 replace with less processed one
could be a good idea but obvious that it is fake
Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: I like your work, it appears unique in your own way.

GSG Photography Studio wrote:
I would love to hear your thoughts!

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LauraLuna wrote:
I'd love to hear your feedback, thanks a lot.

First impressions: Beautiful face and versatile look
Your Work focus: this and that alternative and artistic
Profile usefulness: informative
Worthy of paid assignments: yes
Your Skill level: advanced
Your money shot: https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/37019941
What I like:
What to delete: https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/36658773 you have better ones
Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: I like your vintage look keep up lady.

Riecey wrote:
Haven't been on in a while....curious to see what cha think.

First impressions: Experienced model with flexible bad ass look
Your Work focus: glamor, beauty, urban fashion,
Profile usefulness: informative
Worthy of paid assignments: yes
Your Skill level: advanced
Your money shot:
What I like:
Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: you'll do well.

Kaya Mey wrote:
What do you think?

First impressions: Brave , Interesting character, acrobatic skills will come handy
Profile usefulness: helpful
Worthy of paid assignments: yes
What I like:
Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: Impressive work overall.

Northern Sights wrote:
I'm in.

no photos

Audrey Seybold wrote:
Would appreciate opinions and constructive criticism.

First impressions: versatile talent and beautiful canvas
Profile usefulness: informative
Worthy of paid assignments: yes
Your Skill level: great camera connection
Your money shot:
What I like:
What to delete: https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/37086962 diminishes port
Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: Great look and versatility. Keep up.

Allure Photography AD wrote:
interested....

First impressions: Nice use of natural light and decent head shots and portraits, some great ideas as well
Profile usefulness: somewhat useful
Your Skill level: beginner
Your money shot: watch highlights and avoid over processing
Your Work focus: mainstream
Verdict: Nice compositions, decent work and this port could get you hired. Add some studio shots asap.

Toxxsynn wrote:
Interested!

Photographer

First impressions: Pretty face and body, it is up to the photographer to make you or break you
Profile usefulness: Vague
Your Skill level: beginner
Your money shot: https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/33895891 listed +18
Your Work focus: glamour erotic
What to delete: toss out everything else other  then the  above listed shot.
Verdict: Watch how you coordinate outfits for your portfolio needs.  Elaborate on your expressions. improve posing and camera connection.
Shoot real concepts. Shift more to fashion if you won't do nudes. Your carrot and stick seduction doesn't work well as pictured.

EnlightendedPhotography wrote:
I applaud your efforts...would like to know.

Awesome work, your port is very enjoyable to visit, all my compliments.
In this https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/35589356 +18
she has this not so nice "why are you staring at me look" that really neutralizes all inspiration, delete or replace with better pose. Other then that I have very little to say.

RDclicks wrote:
Very much interested in this . Would like to see different critiques on my pictures . I am a newbie though in fashion photography.

First impressions: beginner striving to better himself.
Profile usefulness: they will get the idea
Your Skill level: amateur with pro equipment
What I like: even if busy ink is a distraction
What to delete: awkward posing, better not to lean as much and have both arm show.
Verdict: Coach better your models or pay for pros to make you look good. Low key shots are not as good as other shots. Avoid over saturating hue in general.

WeitzmanPhotography wrote:
Would love your thoughts!

First impressions: 2 cool shots made me want to look the rest of the port
Profile usefulness: effective and to the point
Your Skill level: amateur
What I like: not too strong to list
What to delete: bad pose, posture and mood, to correct it you should have had her hair bunched up and falling on one shoulder, also have her eyes open.
Angel wings are tacky, photoshopped after or not,
you need to improve that "art " lighting https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/37228886 +18
Bad crop, focus and all, bw could have been better on this https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/37228882
Obviously you want that plush thing as a prop, but it is blur due to shallow field of view. wrong aperture for wrong subject there. Only Teacup is in focus
unskilled photoshop, Neutral density filter effect on choppy waters is simulated with soft glow in selected areas of the photo, skys around head and nose looks smudged as well if photo was a bit bigger I would be more confident in what I am speculating.
Verdict: Leave retouch for now to pros.

JoseM Photography wrote:
please:)

Photographer

First impressions: You lack composition
Profile usefulness:
Your Skill level: beginner
Your Work focus: girls and such
What I like: you overdid with props, there was no need to include the champagne gift box near her body which obstructs all the key points to your intended seduction scheme.
dislikes:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/36581573 butt cut off
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31929325 shoes cut off, bad low key flat light
Verdict: Think before you click. Even for a babe (or a boob) shot.