ScottSideways wrote:
Please

First impressions: Few good shots good look and potential
Challenges: Locked in conformism, not expressive enough
Profile usefulness: informative
Your Skill level: amateur
What I like:
What to delete: https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/37021289 can be only used for CL personals/casual encounters
Suggestions: Get rid of mirror selfies

Anderson wrote:
I'm game

First impressions: Some nice outdoor shots, wedding and underwater photography.
Profile usefulness: informative
Your Skill level: photography enthusiast
challenges: location/genre mismatches, Pregnancy shots look great, watch indoor and outdoor lighting
What to delete: https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/36898824 bad flat light, bad body language cheap looking lingerie, random pose
Suggestions: use a flash with a big guide number and better diffuser when using it for fill on outdoor shoots don't get too close shooting  e.g.

G E N I O C I T Y wrote:
Will be an honor! Please do

First impressions: Excellent work
Profile usefulness: informative
Worthy of paid assignments: Yes
Your Skill level: watch your dynamic range
Your creativity: Great natural capture
What I don't like: artifact/catch light of a beauty dish
What to delete: Oh Teddy shots appears to lower your port
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/37605091 don't see any value in this
Your lighting scheme is sometimes inconsistent.

ChrissyK wrote:
Critique?

First impressions: Drop dead gorgeous assets https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/36194742 all links +18
Your Work focus: Glamour beauty  erotica
Worthy of paid assignments: YES
What to delete: https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/35533949 bad pose
Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: Amazing beauty that would be a perfect match for most assignments.
Be more subtle in your erotic teases, add less revealing shots to your port.

amberlynncarino  wrote:
I want the harsh truth like my Nonna would tell the butcher!

First impressions: Flexible look, lovely expressions, gorgeous Asian look
Your Work focus: fashion vintage and beauty
Challenges: visibly under pressure raised eyebrows make me think that. Unnatural pose
Profile usefulness: informative
Worthy of paid assignments: Yes
Your Skill level: beginner
Your money shot:
What to delete: stairs shots don't add much
Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: Work on your poses, relax before posing

K E L L Y wrote:
Hey, please let me know what you think!

First impressions: I have only compliments for you, you can pull off many genres
Worthy of paid assignments: Yes
Your Skill level: Advanced
Your money shot:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/35879289 +18 listed
What I like: everything
listed

Bottom line/verdict: You will make any photographer look good

Ann Stokes - All Natural wrote:
I'm in!

First impressions: Gorgeous look, right curves.
Your Work focus: Erotic, beauty Glamour
Challenges: body language/posing and expressions need work
Profile usefulness: informative
Worthy of paid assignments: yes
What I like:

ShapeTheLight wrote:
Go 4 it...

First impressions: Beautiful  work
Your Work focus: Fashion Lifestyle
Profile usefulness: informative
Worthy of paid assignments: yes
Your Skill level: experienced
Your money shot:
What I like:
Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: I like to see more interesting shots like this listed

ElanaVital wrote:
I'd like a critique, please. I think I need to freshen up my portfolio.

You have an interesting and versatile look. But photos are failing you.
I browsed your port  and must say I am not much fond of these https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/17082084
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/12545727

Your port gives the "amateur model " impression with photos full of awkward poses, looks, and some like those  are very tacky( red colored gels should be omitted)
looks in glamor pics leave to be desired  expressions are a bit meh too.
I suggest to work with more advanced photographers.

RyanLePhotography wrote:
Do you like anything you see in my port?

This is probably the best

or this

second best


framing needs work, as you crop in awkward areas.
composition needs a lot of work

nothing to list at this time

WEXP Photography wrote:
What are my strengths and weaknesses?

Strengths: Interesting concepts, new takes on old concepts
Weaknesses: Technique, flat light
I would list this if it wasn't more contrasty black and white, can probably be photoshopped.

Eric SUN wrote:
Yes, please.
Thanks.

https://www.modelmayhem.com/forums/post … st18995038
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SHX Photo wrote:
Let's try this again Thanks for the feedback!

First impressions: Some "accidentally come out" good photos
Challenges: Indoor lighting and high keys need work, low key are bad
Profile usefulness: informative
Worthy of paid assignments: No
Your Skill level: basic
Your money shot: but bad crop at groin
What I like: decent headshot
What to delete: low contrast poor dynamic range
Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: It is up to you where you want to take your craft and limited by only how much you are willing to learn. A good start but falls short at times.

Andie08 wrote:
I'm interested!

As a beginner model, your port has quite variety.
I don't see anything in your port to put you in front of the line though.
You are naturally beautiful and unique in look however most  commercial fashion applications will probably discount that because they will select more synthetic beautified and processed looks.
Nothing to list at the moment. Your posing is mostly nice smiling girl next door style
you should take some acting lesson and also vary your expressions and specialize in some market provided that you have a good understanding of your limitations, a will to overcome and pounds of perseverance.

Elizabeth Worth wrote:
I would love your opinion too!

First impressions: Good look and great work
Your Work focus: Most everything except nude fetish and erotic
Challenges: You have big teeth and gums avoid big smiles.
Profile usefulness: informative
Worthy of paid assignments: yes
Your Skill level: intermediate
Your creativity: photographer driven
Your money shot:
What I like: listed
bad crop
What don't like: weakens the port and your boudoir skills lack

example of bad pose. In this photo you seem like wearing someone else's costume
Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: Make sure you are very conscientious of your poses. Some lack in photos

MLT Model wrote:
I'm interested.

First impressions: varied work and artistic tendencies, supported by post work expertly done,
Your Work focus: multi -
Challenges: Staying above the threshold of shallow tackiness
Profile usefulness: informative
Worthy of paid assignments: yes
Your Skill level: fairly advanced
Your creativity: usually shallow, some feels artificial  again I would prefer all this without post work support.
Your money shot:
What I like:
What to delete: failure in every aspect of the genre
Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: I put you in the "can't be a good model  unless  heavily photo-shopped". Great job though! In your fetish and girl girl scenes you look more as a prop(object)  rather then the subject.
Keep it up. Great job overall.

GreenEyedNude wrote:
me me me



please...

all links +18

First impressions: traveling model on the nude-looks very successful.
Your Work focus: fine art artistic nudes
Challenges: Glamour poses are meh
Profile usefulness: informative
Worthy of paid assignments: yes
Your Skill level: intermediate
Your money shot:
What I like: https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/36761000
What to delete: https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/36867907 meh look, awkward / handicapped looking pose
Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: On many BW fine art nudes (bodyscapes)  your face is either indistinguishably small or covered with your hair which makes you be "not there" you should show your emotions in your port pics without hiding your face.

HEATHER 19 wrote:
some new photos, like to know

First impressions: Nice port and good modeling ability
Your Work focus: Fashion
Your MM Profile usefulness: Good
Your money shot:
What I like: 
Great camera connection.

Colorado Figures  wrote:
I would appreciate you opinion on which, if any, of my photos have merit. 
Thank you!

First impressions: You have too many images that really don't add or diminishes overall value of your port
Your Skill level: amateur at heart prosumer
Your creativity:  inconsistent artistic vision, but I like some of your compositions.
Specific  style: amateur figure art,
Your Work focus: mostly nudes
Your challenges: don't reflect GWC image
Your MM Profile usefulness: long to read but useful
Paid assignments: will eventually happen
What I like:  http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/38638415 +18
What to delete:  https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/36802669  all+18
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/38613264
I didn't have the patience to add more to this list.
Suggestions: Improve the sitting and posing when you shoot amateur models
don't shoot from above that makes look models even shorter then they are.
Watch the ribs sticking out on skinny models, they look pretty ugly. You should leave retouching to pros.
Nothing to list.

Pauline Yee wrote:
Me please.

First impressions: Nothing earth shattering, too many useless images, few good ones that can get you hired
Your Skill level: Average and can improve
Your Work focus: should be commercial
Your challenges: You need directions, tense and stiff
Your MM Profile usefulness: Useful
Paid assignments: yes
Your money shot: but face over retouched to fake level
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Suggestions: Redo your port to reflect more commercial and fashion style. Your beauty glamor looks  fail

were poorly captured, find other photographers.

Rach7478 wrote:
Let me know

Your Skill level: Beginner
Your Work focus: Fashion
Your challenges: Posing abilities need to be improved superficial pose
What to delete:  useless to you and non relevant to any skill set
Suggestions: Rip and redo port

Suspended In Light wrote:
You're giving really useful feedback, I'm curious as well!

First impressions: No photo in your port makes me want to click on a thumbnail
Your Skill level: average
Your Work focus: figure art
Your challenges: posing is passive
Paid assignments: for nudes I guess yes
Suggestions: your style and posing duplicates content found in many other model's port, find the ways you can be more original.

Allisonm222 wrote:
I'd like your opinions!

First impressions: Amateur with a capital A
Your challenges: -dynamic expressions -unique poses , posture, looks, presence
Suggestions: Most pro photographers will skip your port which consist of facebook  style pictures.
Find a good photographer and get a stylist to redo your port.

JamesBernard wrote:
I'm in!

First impressions: Few pics that grabbed my attention
Your Skill level: average
Your Work focus: a bumpy road on Artistic edgy and creative work
Your challenges: Model driven, try to get better poses from your models https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/37492817  +18
Your MM Profile usefulness:
Paid assignments: yes
Your money shot: very noir and vintage just I like
What I like:  I am not a big fan of computer aided editing but I like this https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/37492833
What to delete:  https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/36982395 lack originality or expression
Suggestions: You will do better keep shooting

ThruTheAshes wrote:
I seek improvement!
Hit me please!

First impressions: good work
Your Skill level: above average
Your creativity:  Looks poses and bondage shoots mark a certain savoir faire of your part
Specific  style: Erotic style dominates
Your Work focus: Pretty girls,
Your challenges: At some point you are running out of ideas
Paid assignments: yes
Your money shot: listed
What I like: 
Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: Keep it up!