Forums > Critique > Based on your Avatar... Would I work with you?

Photographer

McGrath

Posts: 76

Chillicothe, Ohio, US

this could be fun!

Nov 04 12 10:36 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

steph amberlyn stewart wrote:
id like to know:)

I would say maybe. If it was just based on your face then yes, as I like your curled blond hair and you have nice features- Love the soft quality of the image. But your pose is not great- Both the pose and crop make you appear very short (even if you are short, there are ways to pose that doesn't highlight that). Also your arm and leg appear kind of thick. I do like your dress though and expression looks to be decent.

Nov 05 12 06:35 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Sabrina Lorfei wrote:
would love to know. and if not, which photo would you recommend as avatar?

Yes. Though the image could use a slight retouch, overall I like it and you look great! I love your long hair and the windswept movement look- it looks effortless and beautiful. The outfit is decent and like the bracelets a lot- would've looked nicer if your whole shoes were in the image though. Posing is okay- just that your right arm is just kind of hanging there. But expression is good- Seems like you have some fire in your gaze and a cute little smirk.

Nov 05 12 06:51 am Link

Model

Nude male life model

Posts: 12

London, England, United Kingdom

This will be interesting!

Nov 05 12 11:35 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Jojo West wrote:
New avatar, would love to know if it's captivating enough. :-)

Yes, you're a dark beauty and quite alluring. I normally don't like dark backgrounds with dark clothing, but I can see the reason for it in this image and I car light effect is pretty cool. You look sexy in the lingerie outfit and pose, and you have nice hair and facial features. Also, great legs and high heels!

Lovely:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121104/18/50972694cd8ca_m.jpg

Nov 06 12 06:36 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Megan Camille wrote:
me please

I've gotten to you already and said yes. But no for the new avatar.The pose is kind of weak (though it does show that you're really thin) and the expression you have makes you look angry-Not sure if you were trying to portray that but I still don't like it.

Better:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121029/13/508ee85e33b5d_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121101/20/509342fcd23fa_m.jpg

Nov 06 12 07:18 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

graniteandgrace wrote:
I'm game if you are still doing it smile

Yes. I like the color scheme and the model's wispy blond hair (and I like the way it's parted) with green eyes really stand out beautifully. The outfit is also nice and I like the model's gold earrings too. But expression is kind of plain/blank; should be more engaged.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110723/07/4e2ade5b1ad7a_m.jpg

Nov 06 12 11:53 pm Link

Photographer

mgphotography88

Posts: 3

Fairfax, Virginia, US

how bout me

Nov 06 12 11:59 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Raven Smith Photography wrote:
check me out?

No. Though I do kind of like the lighting effect on the left side, I don't really like the gritty quality of the image and the dark shadows on the side and background on the right side. Model looks nice with the green earrings but expression is definitely lacking.

Like (but would've liked more if you had captured model's whole face):
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121016/09/507d9260dcfd9_m.jpg

Nov 07 12 12:15 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Jojo West wrote:
New avatar...do I make the cut?

Not sure with your new avatar- I think the other one with the added element of car and car light background was better and more flattering.

Nov 07 12 12:40 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Natalie Kay Stokes wrote:
I'm game smile

Maybe, nice black and white tones to this image and I like the soft quality. Though it's maybe a little bit too blurred around the edges. You have a lovely face and nice hair but the face is a bit distorted and expression not the best. Beautiful jewelry though and decent pose.

Nov 08 12 07:27 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

WoodsmanPhoto wrote:
Id like to hear your input. Thanks for the idea!

Probably not. The closeness of the shot is a bit of a turn off - it could stand a bit of retouching. Also the black and white tones on the face then hands are drastically different. At least the smile looks genuine and hair decent especially over the model's face and shoulder.

Maybe:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120924/20/506124e02e596_m.jpg

Nov 08 12 07:40 am Link

Model

RenaBeana

Posts: 1104

Oshkosh, Wisconsin, US

me?

Nov 08 12 07:47 am Link

Photographer

250465

Posts: 134

Amsterdam, Noord-Holland, Netherlands

New av

Nov 09 12 06:16 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Chain Reaction wrote:
I'll give it a shot. Be gentle. I'm not as tough as I look. tongue

As a clothing designer (I had originally thought you were the model) this may not be the best image to showcase your work. It is quite sexy and I like the chain mail-like effect so maybe.

I like:
1st Image and

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121005/18/506f841f5d044_m.jpg

Nov 09 12 04:59 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Alicia Hansen wrote:
I'm curious. smile

Yes I love the outfit on you. I think the top image is better than the bottom one. Your pose is better in the top image and I love the background. Just would like to see how your face look more and The sunglasses make it hard to see what kind of expression you have.

Lovely:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/100824/09/4c73f7ae7b0ec_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/100618/11/4c1bc13ac4ee6_m.jpg

Like the images of you in green dress:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121030/01/508f8eaba3906_m.jpg

Nov 10 12 01:14 am Link

Model

Toria Royale

Posts: 145

Halifax, Nova Scotia, Canada

Would you?

Nov 10 12 07:57 am Link

Model

AnnaLisaZ

Posts: 59

Thousand Oaks, California, US

I just changed my avi looking for some feedback

Nov 10 12 08:33 am Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6906

Champaign, Illinois, US

moi?

Nov 10 12 08:43 am Link

Model

Barry Jones McIntire

Posts: 16

Sobreda, Lisboa e Vale do Tejo, Portugal

Press "like" to help me get a spot on the 2013 Unigirl Canada Calendar! "Share" is greatly appreciated :p

http://www.facebook.com/photo.php?fbid= … =1&theater

Nov 10 12 02:33 pm Link

Model

Brandy Selene

Posts: 17

Williston, North Dakota, US

No

Nov 10 12 05:23 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Brandy Selene wrote:
No

I should be the only one responding...

Nov 11 12 06:34 am Link

Photographer

The House of Velvet

Posts: 1429

Cumming, Georgia, US

Me Please

Nov 11 12 06:36 am Link

Model

Account Is Not Valid

Posts: 1744

Durango, Colorado, US

winking_wonder wrote:

Yes I love the outfit on you. I think the top image is better than the bottom one. Your pose is better in the top image and I love the background. Just would like to see how your face look more and The sunglasses make it hard to see what kind of expression you have.

Lovely:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/100824/09/4c73f7ae7b0ec_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/100618/11/4c1bc13ac4ee6_m.jpg

Like the images of you in green dress:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121030/01/508f8eaba3906_m.jpg

Thank you for your thoughts, love~ c:

Nov 11 12 07:54 am Link

Model

MssJDanielz

Posts: 17

Atlanta, Georgia, US

Me maybe smile

Nov 11 12 08:01 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

ABB Modelling wrote:
Would be interested to hear your thoughts smile

Yes. I like your look and the outfit and lighting look great on you. Seems like you have a fine physique as well and a handsome face but would've liked to see your eyes more. The expression kind of looks like you're squinting and not engaging enough. Your pose is ok but the bottom of the image couldve been cropped better.

Love:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121021/04/5083dd44066cb_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121021/04/5083de1403e5f_m.jpg

Nov 11 12 08:05 am Link

Photographer

SYCF

Posts: 276

Los Angeles, California, US

would you?

Nov 11 12 10:42 am Link

Photographer

This User Is Not Here

Posts: 1964

Durango, Colorado, US

How about it from this page? c:

Nov 11 12 12:01 pm Link

Model

Jacqueline Mayer

Posts: 22

Appleton, Wisconsin, US

Me?

Nov 11 12 05:49 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Revenge Photography wrote:
Do tell..

Yes I like the smooth quality and dewy clear skin on the model. The makeup is well done and the veil quite pretty. Nice background as well. Though expression is a bit lacking and your Revenge Photography in the corner is a bit too big.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/100629/23/4c2ae7eb03e0f_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110825/17/4e56ec3889129_m.jpg

Nov 11 12 11:43 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Michele Bowers wrote:
Me?

Yes though the image is different from my usual style I still like it. Model looks good. I like her hairstyle and very blue eyes. The makeup is also decent as is the outfit .. I especially like the red ribbon detail. The pose and expression are kind of flat though. Background though gritty fits and looks cool.

I like:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121019/20/50822002aeae6_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121019/20/50821f7e6afd8_m.jpg

Nov 11 12 11:57 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

TinRoses wrote:
moi?

I would say maybe but probably not. I like the concept of image with a horse, but this doesn't show enough of it and maybe a different color would stand out more. Also, you have nice features- love your hair and blue eyes but the expression is pretty blank. Makeup is okay and the red does look good on you.

Nov 13 12 12:20 am Link

Photographer

Deleted Account1177

Posts: 19

'Ajmān, 'Ajmān, United Arab Emirates

I'll toss in my application, thanks in advance! smile

Nov 13 12 05:21 am Link

Photographer

Ty Sheers Photography

Posts: 1

Gold Coast, Queensland, Australia

SO would anyone work with me ? haha

Nov 13 12 02:17 pm Link

Photographer

JBerman Photography

Posts: 1133

New York, New York, US

i serve cookies.

Nov 13 12 02:22 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

the MooD-ologist wrote:
ill play

Maybe. I do like the color scheme- dark skin against white backdrop looks good and the model has a decent fierce expression. Don't really like the crop though and I think your signature is well placed but a bit large.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110902/23/4e61c52058752_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120502/10/4fa16c9f59ae5_m.jpg

Nov 13 12 05:20 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

MissMaria79 wrote:
Fun topic !

Probably not. The outfit does look good on you and shows off your figure but the pose is not great- a bit plain and awkward. Also the expression needs work- it looks kind of stunned and blank.. It should be more engaged.

Nov 13 12 05:50 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

McGrath wrote:
this could be fun!

Yes. I love the styling- model looks great in the hot pink bikini and all the jewelry wrapped around her neck, figure etc. The pose is interesting and I like how the model's hair is fanned out, lovely grey eyes and nice makeup. A couple things: Expression is a little blank and there's not much neck. Also, crop on the right side cuts off part of the model's hand/arm so looks awkward. And I'm not sure if PINK needs to be spelled out like that...

Nov 13 12 06:12 pm Link

Model

Kate Vaillencourt

Posts: 31

Memphis, Tennessee, US

Nov 13 12 06:27 pm Link

Photographer

Photogenic Memories

Posts: 122

Concord, North Carolina, US

I'm game.

Nov 13 12 06:32 pm Link