Photographer

stephaneb

Posts: 634

Paris, Île-de-France, France

Anna Schnabel wrote:
https://s018.radikal.ru/i527/1205/62/dcb5288f9eb3.jpg

Interresting work but you LOST SUBJECT, change make up , and didn't correct skin. not bad word but for me it's not the picture

May 10 12 02:27 am Link

Photographer

stephaneb

Posts: 634

Paris, Île-de-France, France

lavuazen wrote:
https://i016.radikal.ru/1205/32/133df21d7915.jpg

it's look like perfect , but it's a small picture. In small i say a big YES

May 10 12 02:28 am Link

Retoucher

MarkusKister Retouching

Posts: 198

Ratingen, North Rhine-Westphalia, Germany

thanks

May 10 12 02:56 am Link

Retoucher

MarkusKister Retouching

Posts: 198

Ratingen, North Rhine-Westphalia, Germany

sbourson wrote:
why do you change this man on oldman and don't work it in cosmetic beauty way ?

for me men retouching is quite different from women beauty, no blur - must look masculine - i still like it that way, very strong image.
Generally, the use of blur in some images here is just awful.
Some really look like plastic dolls.

May 10 12 03:02 am Link

Digital Artist

LISA D

Posts: 12

Savyon, Hamerkaz, Israel

https://i1048.photobucket.com/albums/s362/lisadvir/ZA9E8139copy.jpg

May 10 12 03:37 am Link

Retoucher

MarkusKister Retouching

Posts: 198

Ratingen, North Rhine-Westphalia, Germany

May 10 12 04:43 am Link

Retoucher

polygonlight

Posts: 111

Geislingen, Baden-Württemberg, Germany

https://www.imgbox.de/users/public/images/M9ARi7JzXT.jpg

May 10 12 04:55 am Link

Photographer

stephaneb

Posts: 634

Paris, Île-de-France, France

polygonlight wrote:
https://www.imgbox.de/users/public/images/M9ARi7JzXT.jpg

Lol just effect for me .. PICTURE is lot , it's not still beauty. But why not. but so easy to do

May 10 12 06:44 am Link

Photographer

stephaneb

Posts: 634

Paris, Île-de-France, France

i know i'm hard but professional are hard

May 10 12 06:45 am Link

Photographer

David James Coxsell

Posts: 34

Birmingham, England, United Kingdom

Here is my attempt been a long while since I did a retouch like this.
Can I use in my retouching portfolio?

https://www.davidjamescoxsell.co.uk/MM/retouch.jpg

Please let me know if you would like the high res.

May 10 12 09:30 am Link

Retoucher

23rdmarch Retouch

Posts: 58

London, England, United Kingdom

https://img194.imageshack.us/img194/4577/zelieimg1347copy2copy.jpg

https://img703.imageshack.us/img703/1477/zelieagainmg7986copy.jpg
May I use it in my portfolio outside of MM?

May 10 12 09:42 am Link

Retoucher

pixel dimension ilusion

Posts: 1550

Brussels, Brussels, Belgium

https://i46.tinypic.com/e6rsj5.jpg
hi this is my try , is retouched smile sometimes i mess up
cause i pâint and sometimes i bring the artistic impression in
my retouch, mais cette bien quand vous ne pas de accord
comme ca nous te connaitre miyo jajaja

May 10 12 10:06 am Link

Retoucher

Nadia_S

Posts: 3

København, Hovedstaden, Denmark

https://i1250.photobucket.com/albums/hh526/nadiaretouching/Retouch.jpg

Can i use it in my port?

May 10 12 11:23 am Link

Retoucher

Shine Retouching

Posts: 194

Chicago, Illinois, US

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120510/20/4fac82924f5b6.jpg

May 10 12 08:19 pm Link

Photographer

stephaneb

Posts: 634

Paris, Île-de-France, France

MarkusKister Retouching wrote:

for me men retouching is quite different from women beauty, no blur - must look masculine - i still like it that way, very strong image.
Generally, the use of blur in some images here is just awful.
Some really look like plastic dolls.

You are right perhap's too must sharp ... but it's cosmetic way shoot light, then your retouch is not bad but strange effect , don't forgot to correct HAND many retoucher forget Hands

May 11 12 12:02 am Link

Photographer

stephaneb

Posts: 634

Paris, Île-de-France, France

Shine Retouching wrote:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120510/20/4fac82924f5b6.jpg

Really good work, perhpas would be great to correct hair, put off the body line in hair. make color of all body same, but it's perfect

May 11 12 12:03 am Link

Photographer

stephaneb

Posts: 634

Paris, Île-de-France, France

Nadia Retouching wrote:
https://i1250.photobucket.com/albums/hh526/nadiaretouching/Retouch.jpg

Can i use it in my port?

perhap's to much wax for me, but i love it .. it's a style and perfect style

May 11 12 12:10 am Link

Photographer

stephaneb

Posts: 634

Paris, Île-de-France, France

JuszczakRetouch wrote:
https://img194.imageshack.us/img194/4577/zelieimg1347copy2copy.jpg

https://img703.imageshack.us/img703/1477/zelieagainmg7986copy.jpg
May I use it in my portfolio outside of MM?

Great work, yes of course

just please don't put before and after in facebook

May 11 12 12:11 am Link

Photographer

stephaneb

Posts: 634

Paris, Île-de-France, France

David James Coxsell wrote:
Here is my attempt been a long while since I did a retouch like this.
Can I use in my retouching portfolio?

https://www.davidjamescoxsell.co.uk/MM/retouch.jpg

Please let me know if you would like the high res.

yes you can use in your port but i think you forget the subject, the WET Hair are reallly really important

May 11 12 12:12 am Link

Photographer

stephaneb

Posts: 634

Paris, Île-de-France, France

reswelx123 wrote:
https://i46.tinypic.com/e6rsj5.jpg
hi this is my try , is retouched smile sometimes i mess up
cause i pâint and sometimes i bring the artistic impression in
my retouch, mais cette bien quand vous ne pas de accord
comme ca nous te connaitre miyo jajaja

But it's a great retouch ^^

May 11 12 12:13 am Link

Photographer

stephaneb

Posts: 634

Paris, Île-de-France, France

LISA D wrote:
https://i1048.photobucket.com/albums/s362/lisadvir/ZA9E8139copy.jpg

not bad but for me it's not a flat picture, and hair are really important, correct them improve light would make a bigger picture

May 11 12 12:14 am Link

Photographer

stephaneb

Posts: 634

Paris, Île-de-France, France

Aaron Ford wrote:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120509/14/4faae4a53598c.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120509/17/4fab09e3a344f.jpg

Good work aron on zelie picture for me subject is the lips and with your effect we lost it.. but it's interresting

man picture is good very good

May 11 12 12:16 am Link

Retoucher

MarkusKister Retouching

Posts: 198

Ratingen, North Rhine-Westphalia, Germany

sbourson wrote:

You are right perhap's too must sharp ... but it's cosmetic way shoot light, then your retouch is not bad but strange effect , don't forgot to correct HAND many retoucher forget Hands

Thank you Stéfan for your time and important tips. I will keep it in mind. For me a useful critic is much better than a "looks good" for every image.

May 11 12 01:08 am Link

Retoucher

Elena Pyzhikova

Posts: 97

Penza, Penza, Russia

May 11 12 03:18 am Link

Retoucher

Elena Pyzhikova

Posts: 97

Penza, Penza, Russia

https://s2.ipicture.ru/uploads/20120511/7agXtJ7d.jpg

May 11 12 03:19 am Link

Photographer

stephaneb

Posts: 634

Paris, Île-de-France, France

lena_joy wrote:
https://s2.ipicture.ru/uploads/20120511/7agXtJ7d.jpg

sorry for me not good why use and abuse of hi pass think

May 11 12 06:05 am Link

Retoucher

moni

Posts: 118

Bratislava, Bratislavský, Slovakia

https://img819.imageshack.us/img819/5039/smallza9e8641origdet.jpghttps://img10.imageshack.us/img10/7162/smallza9e8641retdet.jpg

https://img254.imageshack.us/img254/5080/smallza9e8641orig.jpghttps://img824.imageshack.us/img824/816/smallza9e8641ret.jpg

May 11 12 07:39 am Link

Retoucher

Helena

Posts: 227

Pervomaysk, Mykolayivs'ka, Ukraine

Can I use in my retouching portfolio?
https://s018.radikal.ru/i514/1205/8c/99a378b3a074.jpg

May 11 12 08:33 am Link

Retoucher

Shine Retouching

Posts: 194

Chicago, Illinois, US

Revised Version. Thanks for your input Sbourson.

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120511/12/4fad6b8279241.jpg

May 11 12 12:45 pm Link

Retoucher

ulianaeme

Posts: 94

Rio de Janeiro, Rio de Janeiro, Brazil

https://i1152.photobucket.com/albums/p482/ulianaeme/rrr.jpg

My first try here. I would like to hear some comments from the photographer and ask for portfolio use.

May 11 12 08:57 pm Link

Retoucher

Andy Hope Retouching

Posts: 60

New York, New York, US

https://i1228.photobucket.com/albums/ee457/isangelical/vittoriomars__MG_8893aftSM.jpg

Hi. smile Here's my try. Can I use it in my port?

May 11 12 09:00 pm Link

Retoucher

c17h19no3

Posts: 36

Dresden, Saxony, Germany

Hello Stefan,

here is my try.
I know it is more artistic, but it´s just a try.
Hope i don´t have missed the subject.


https://img831.imageshack.us/img831/1226/za9e4074v1800x533.jpg


Positive criticism is always welcome. wink

May 12 12 02:33 am Link

Retoucher

malanhua

Posts: 173

ADAK, Alaska, US

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[email protected]    thanks!!

May 12 12 04:57 am Link

Retoucher

MoonwalkerGfx

Posts: 48

Cairo, Cairo, Egypt

https://g1205.hizliresim.com/x/d/5rbxk.jpg

May 12 12 05:51 am Link

Retoucher

Shine Retouching

Posts: 194

Chicago, Illinois, US

oops

May 12 12 06:14 am Link

Retoucher

MoonwalkerGfx

Posts: 48

Cairo, Cairo, Egypt

May 12 12 06:21 am Link

Retoucher

MoonwalkerGfx

Posts: 48

Cairo, Cairo, Egypt

May 12 12 08:10 am Link

Retoucher

JeffCampbellphoto

Posts: 42

Wanaque, New Jersey, US

https://img839.imageshack.us/img839/4111/zelieimg1346web.jpg

May 12 12 11:57 am Link

Retoucher

A Plus Retouching

Posts: 255

Port Richey, Florida, US

Need to fix a few things hmm

May 12 12 06:51 pm Link

Retoucher

makargina1

Posts: 278

Łódź, Łódzkie, Poland

https://i859.photobucket.com/albums/ab153/makargina/retouches/zelieagain__MG_7947.jpg
could I use it in my port?

May 13 12 10:04 am Link