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Avalon Fell
Posts: 75
Rowland Heights, California, US
Model
NoemiLeighton
Posts: 24
Bedford, England, United Kingdom
got skipped x
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Lakin S
Posts: 308
Ashland, Kentucky, US
Photographer
Better Souls
Posts: 128
Cleveland Heights, Ohio, US
Lot of input output. Looking forward.
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Landy
Posts: 67
La Crosse, Wisconsin, US
Would love to hear it thanks
Photographer
ikonas Boston
Posts: 736
Boston, Massachusetts, US
Mandi1993 wrote: I'm in Hi Mandi and welcome to MM! Delete this one as you already posted another image (my favorite listed below) from the same scene. Remember, less is more. Below is another image to be deleted because you do not look relaxed in this forced pose. This one is sultry and clearly shows you beautiful facial features.
Makeup Artist
SD Makeup Artisty
Posts: 184
Hicksville, New York, US
I'm interested if you're still doing it. (:
Photographer
ikonas Boston
Posts: 736
Boston, Massachusetts, US
Christina Vanity MUA wrote: Interested Variant images from the same scenes must be avoided like the plague. This one should go as its sister image shows the model in a much better light and her breast shape look more appealing than here.. Take this advice throughout your port and get rid of another 10-20 images. Here is my favorite. The makeup is creative and the photography is good. Make sure you delete the sister images.
Photographer
ikonas Boston
Posts: 736
Boston, Massachusetts, US
Better Souls wrote: Lot of input output. Looking forward. Pretty model, lovely figure, but her poose is hunched, I dont like cigarettes and I dont see a clear concept here. Let her go. https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/22788068 I like the light and the vintage rendering below. I do like your image captions throughout your port
Photographer
Better Souls
Posts: 128
Cleveland Heights, Ohio, US
You're the second to say. This is fine, as she just returned to Cleveland from France this week, we're trying to set up another shoot. That photo was taken 2 years ago and I have improved immensely. Thank you.
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Kerri Jean Photography
Posts: 588
Indianapolis, Indiana, US
ikonas wrote: Welcome to MM Kerri. The following image should go. It is just a snapshot with no concept behind it. Also get rid of this one of Yas'Ming as you have posted two much better images of her. As a rookie, you are having a great start doing portraits and you seem to do well on composition. My favorite one is your heart image. While your photographic technique nor her expression shine, you are showing interest in creating concepts. Keep it up and you will do great.
Thank you very much. I appreciate the feedback!
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ikonas Boston
Posts: 736
Boston, Massachusetts, US
Audrey Dasia wrote: Got skipped Your skin fold under your breast is rather unflattering. https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29482242 "Me and my pussy" [LOL] you look significantly heavier than in the rest of your port. https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29078100 You should delete (or hide) perhaps 10-20 more images as your port is getting out of control. Remember, less is more. Ask other photographers for advice. Love your figure, pensive expression, flying hair and the natural scene adds to the overall beauty of this image:
Photographer
ikonas Boston
Posts: 736
Boston, Massachusetts, US
SD Makeup Artisty wrote: I'm interested if you're still doing it. (: Delete this one as the photo does not clealy show that this lovely lady is wearing any makeup. My favorite is this one. Your creative colorful makeup and her beauty make a truly sublime image.
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Landy
Posts: 67
La Crosse, Wisconsin, US
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Audrey Dasia
Posts: 120
Santa Rosa, California, US
ikonas wrote: Your skin fold under your breast is rather unflattering. https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29482242 "Me and my pussy" [LOL] you look significantly heavier than in the rest of your port. https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29078100 You should delete (or hide) perhaps 10-20 more images as your port is getting out of control. Remember, less is more. Ask other photographers for advice. Love your figure, pensive expression, flying hair and the natural scene adds to the overall beauty of this image:
Thank you for the input, I deleted over 20 I knew it was getting crazy, but those are the only kinds of photos I have, I need more variety I guess?
Photographer
By His Hands
Posts: 9
Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania, US
ooo im inn
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Terrance Rahl
Posts: 7
Bellingham, Washington, US
I would love if you could tell me.
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Avalon Fell
Posts: 75
Rowland Heights, California, US
ikonas wrote: Hi Mandi and welcome to MM! Delete this one as you already posted another image (my favorite listed below) from the same scene. Remember, less is more. Below is another image to be deleted because you do not look relaxed in this forced pose. This one is sultry and clearly shows you beautiful facial features.
Thanks:) will do.
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Alyson Pink
Posts: 32
Los Angeles, California, US
Retoucher
LauraErsoy
Posts: 15
New York, New York, US
criticize away! but can you message to me, please?
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Lily V
Posts: 1
Syracuse, New York, US
I would like to know.! Always game for some constructive criticism.
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Sylph Sia
Posts: 36
Canberra, Australian Capital Territory, Australia
I'm interested!
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NoemiLeighton
Posts: 24
Bedford, England, United Kingdom
ikonas wrote: Sorry to skip you Noemi, trust me it was not intentional I propose delteting at least one, or two images from SoulStealerPhotography. Not because there is anything wrong with them, its just you posted three similar images. Remember, in photography, LESS IS MORE. Not a fan of composites, but I do love your expressive face and connection with the viewer here Best wishes ~Julius Thanks x
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Sarah_Elisabeth
Posts: 278
Sydney, New South Wales, Australia
What do you think my worst is?
Photographer
ikonas Boston
Posts: 736
Boston, Massachusetts, US
Miss Andria wrote: Hmmmm...why not! THis image renders you beyond your age. Get rid of it. Here you nicely display all your assets and I like your attitude. Great photography too.
Photographer
ikonas Boston
Posts: 736
Boston, Massachusetts, US
Landy wrote: I was skipped as well, Here you are just posing. Nothing outstanding to take one's breath away A great portrait, alluring display of your cleavage genuine smile, beautiful soft light
Photographer
ikonas Boston
Posts: 736
Boston, Massachusetts, US
By His Hands wrote: ooo im inn You are pushing your breasts inward forcing them too close together. In cases like these, I use surgical tape to keep them farther apart. Delete it. Besides, your other self prtrait is much better, I especially like your spunky expression. Here you have great light producing cinematic quality image with superb display of emotion. Great job
Photographer
Katie Jane Photography
Posts: 4
Camborne-Redruth, England, United Kingdom
I'd like to know your opinion, if it's not too late? x
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Jason Rahim
Posts: 32
Miller Place, New York, US
next please
Photographer
By His Hands
Posts: 9
Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania, US
ikonas wrote: You are pushing your breasts inward forcing them too close together. In cases like these, I use surgical tape to keep them farther apart. Delete it. Besides, your other self prtrait is much better, I especially like your spunky expression. Here you have great light producing cinematic quality image with superb display of emotion. Great job
thank you! I'll probably end up deleting that one once I get a little more time to be on the site =]
Model
Anjie
Posts: 17
Oxford, Mississippi, US
*I can do this* (2x) Can you critique me next?
Photographer
MVK Photo
Posts: 463
Augusta, Georgia, US
Model
Landy
Posts: 67
La Crosse, Wisconsin, US
ikonas wrote: Here you are just posing. Nothing outstanding to take one's breath away A great portrait, alluring display of your cleavage genuine smile, beautiful soft light
Thank you so much, very helpful !
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