Welcome to MM.
A good way to start to work with legit creatives is to make sure you come across as professional as the folks that you wish to work with. As such, my advice for you is to consider redoing your bio -- keep the enthusiasm but consider losing the slang.
MM is a terrific place to meet amazing talent and network with amazing talent. I wish you the best in doing so.
I agree. Consider your About Me as your resume for a job application. Use proper spelling (real words), sentences, punctuation, and capitals in the proper places.