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Hi There! Please let me know your feedback on my latest shoot: http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/85 … res01.jpg/ Thanks! Nov 06 12 11:24 pm Link Well, aside from a few feathers around the top of the outfit, it didn't really make me think ballet, black, or swan, (it was not really black either). The composition was okay, kind of plain. The costume, exposure, background, all worked in harmony, which was probably the most well thought out of part of the shoot. Was there suppose to be wind involved? it looked like brown pieces of leaves flowing, but it wasn't quite clear or not. Only two pics? Nov 07 12 12:54 am Link Sorry for the misunderstanding...The fashion collection is called the "black Swan"...It was not supposed to be a shoot around the "black Swan Theme" Yes, the brown-yellow pieces are leaves blowing around...it is an autumn theme... More pics coming...  Thanks for your feedback! Nov 07 12 01:02 am Link Me personally, I'm abselutley in love with it :-) Nov 07 12 01:13 am Link Okay, the lighting is a bit too expected, the poses are too perfect. Nothing suprises me , yet it's very well done. Nov 07 12 01:26 am Link http://imageshack.us/f/856/blackswanlowres01.jpg/ Wonderful-the only issue could be the crop-too much space on the right. ? . Nov 07 12 04:21 am Link http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/85 … res01.jpg/ Hair on back of models head looks messy with the large chunk hanging down Models left arm pose is lacking form Models right arm pose seems odd with elbow Would much rather see arms posed differently Composition wise seems like too much negative space Lighting and location would receive high marks Wish you well Nov 07 12 04:36 am Link I find the colors and clarity stunning. The leaves give an action feel that contrasts the statuesque appearance of the model. I am more drawn to the first image (with wide view) than the tighter shots with closed eyes. Look forward to seeing some more images from this shoot. Nov 07 12 04:37 am Link One word.....Fantastic! Nov 07 12 04:50 am Link I think a darker palette for the makeup would have been alot better. Amazing styling, cool photos, nice backdrop, maybe a bit more balletic posing also would have been good. Nov 07 12 06:00 am Link I love the theme and idea, I think for "black swan" its not dramatic enough. Make up should be much more intense and captivating, and the model should be more fierce. Nov 07 12 06:51 am Link Hi guys, Many thanks for all the feedback...It is much appreciated Definitely wanna take it in to account for my next shoots... Here is the next image: http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/24 … res02.jpg/ This one is without the leaves as I was concerned that it would get a bit boring if all the images contain the flying leaves...Please let me know your thoughts... P.S. Please note that is not a black swan ballet shoot...I know - my bad - the title said so...  The collection is called black swan but the theme is more autumn/ mood oriented...Nov 07 12 10:33 pm Link Neil Snape wrote: OMG..i was going to say the same thing. Nov 07 12 11:36 pm Link Maybe it's just my computer but the dress is completely black on the full body shots. If this is a shoot to show off the dress I think there needs to be more detail in the product. The shot its self is stunning- As a fashion photo I think it's a great pose, with great lighting. Nov 08 12 12:21 am Link Excellent choice of model for this concept and for me, detail on the dress. I wouldn't mind seeing a large tonal range on the leaves (but not too much to take away from the focus) Nov 08 12 01:16 pm Link Thank you all! I have one last image I want to share for critics of the shoot... The mood is quite different as we needed to change location in the end of the shoot... Please let me know what you think...Thanks! http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/5525/blackswan4.jpg Nov 27 12 07:45 pm Link |
