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Been awhile since I've been to the forums, been learning alot the last couple yrs and would like some general feedback on the below image. Thanks ahead of time. https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30627363 Nov 13 12 03:54 pm Link I like the lighting and the fall off around the skirt. The crop bothers me. IHMO cropping the top of the head works better in a corner not dead center. Maybe also have the model turn a bit more towards the camera. Nov 13 12 07:50 pm Link Ted Sandilands wrote: Cool, thanks..appreciate the feedback. Unfortunately, I shot this one cropped like this in the camera, tight. I actually added a little dead black space to the left of the image to try to get it not to look so tight. Nov 13 12 08:14 pm Link Overall, it's a good image. Yeah it would have been better a little more off center. I'm not liking the light from below under her skirt. To me it creates a bright spot that pulls my eyes away from her face. Nov 13 12 10:20 pm Link What is the horizontal line between her legs? I would clone that out. Also tone down the up light. The rest has been covered. Nov 13 12 10:28 pm Link DVP Photography wrote: Thanks for the feedback. Nov 14 12 05:19 am Link Innovative Imagery wrote: the line is from the octagon glass top coffee table she is kneeling on. Yeah, I should hve cloned that out. Thanks. Nov 14 12 05:20 am Link Midwest Expressions wrote: Aside from the above fix you are going to do, I liked the photo. Nov 14 12 05:31 am Link MainePaintah wrote: Thanks, appreciate that! Nov 14 12 08:05 am Link |
