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Hello everyone. I'm looking for feedback on my newest 5 images. It was a fun shoot, and was my first time using a 70-200 L which was fantastic. Accepting all feedback, from positive to negative. Thanks ahead of time.  Nov 13 12 10:37 pm Link  Not crazy about her left arm and phantom fingers  awkward silhouette  Similar complaint to first  I like it  Not crazy about phantom fingers on pole and her head is awkwardly tangent to the background building edges, but I basically like it. Nov 13 12 10:47 pm Link Thank you! I appreciate the honesty. Nov 13 12 11:07 pm Link Those first three images are badly washed-out. Nov 13 12 11:38 pm Link Ya got the same basic pose in a bunch of images and the images are inconsistent in color and contrast. Just my opinion. PS... I'm not a fan of 'drifting' logos. Why not tie it down? Nov 14 12 03:46 am Link Even though the backgrounds are blurred using a 70-200 like this you still need to think about them and how they affect the composition of the image. Also, try not to shoot down at your models! Just my $0.02 Ciao Stefano www.stefanobrunesci.com Nov 14 12 04:07 am Link I think including one of the images such as the last environmental image or the smiling image (for vareity in genre-emotion) would be a good choice but some of your earlier work strikes me with more impact: Nov 14 12 07:42 am Link |
