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Sidnay Adams
Posts: 66
Los Angeles, California, US


When I look at my port I feel something is missing or out of place
Jan 04 13 06:05 am  Link  Quote 
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PhotoDynamics
Posts: 52
Martinsburg, West Virginia, US


Stunning Images !!  Very Well Done !!
Jan 04 13 06:27 am  Link  Quote 
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MesmerEyes Photography
Posts: 2,727
Tyler, Texas, US


babyeyez wrote:
When I look at my port I feel something is missing or out of place

IMHO I would get rid of the following:

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31118742
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31158857 or perhaps a better crop in its place. The pubic hair outside of the bottoms is distracting.

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/27944710 because this one http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/27944684 is better.

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31158483
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31158483

and possibly these two
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29053554
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/27290565

Everything else is much better. Quality over quantity.

Jan 04 13 09:37 am  Link  Quote 
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Vile Knights
Posts: 26
Waterbury, Connecticut, US


For me there may be to many pics. Doesn't allow me to see each one as independently. I felt I had to rush to see them all.
Jan 07 13 07:26 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
DVP Photography
Posts: 2,829
Broomfield, Colorado, US


You seem to be working in the glamour (including lingerie and swimwear) and erotic genres.  From these standpoints, two comments.

1.  You need to fully engage the camera.  Draw the male viewer to you.  Get rid of all the photos where you don't engage the camera with you eyes.  Look into the camera, and...

2.  Project your sensuality and sexiness into the image.  Get rid of the images where you seem to be uninvolved, lacking in sexiness.  Get fired up, get sexy, and project yourself into the photos in a sexy way.
Jan 07 13 11:33 pm  Link  Quote 
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