Forums > Critique > Serious Critique > comments feedback on my port needed please

Model

Sidnay Adams

Posts: 66

Los Angeles, California, US

When I look at my port I feel something is missing or out of place

Jan 04 13 06:05 am Link

Photographer

PhotoDynamics

Posts: 62

Martinsburg, West Virginia, US

Stunning Images !!  Very Well Done !!

Jan 04 13 06:27 am Link

Photographer

MesmerEyes Photography

Posts: 3102

Galveston, Texas, US

babyeyez wrote:
When I look at my port I feel something is missing or out of place

IMHO I would get rid of the following:

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31118742
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31158857 or perhaps a better crop in its place. The pubic hair outside of the bottoms is distracting.

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/27944710 because this one https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/27944684 is better.

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31158483
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31158483

and possibly these two
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29053554
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/27290565

Everything else is much better. Quality over quantity.

Jan 04 13 09:37 am Link

Photographer

Vile Knights

Posts: 26

Waterbury, Connecticut, US

For me there may be to many pics. Doesn't allow me to see each one as independently. I felt I had to rush to see them all.

Jan 07 13 07:26 am Link

Photographer

DVP Photography

Posts: 2874

Broomfield, Colorado, US

You seem to be working in the glamour (including lingerie and swimwear) and erotic genres.  From these standpoints, two comments.

1.  You need to fully engage the camera.  Draw the male viewer to you.  Get rid of all the photos where you don't engage the camera with you eyes.  Look into the camera, and...

2.  Project your sensuality and sexiness into the image.  Get rid of the images where you seem to be uninvolved, lacking in sexiness.  Get fired up, get sexy, and project yourself into the photos in a sexy way.

Jan 07 13 11:33 pm Link