Hey everyone. I would love some critique on this shot I took earlier this week. I've been trying to do less glamour work and more fashion/lifestyle type stuff. This was shot outside on a very cold(for around here), overcast day here in the Pacific Northwest. This particular shot was taken on the steps to the fountain at main street park. All I used was a single 5-in-1 reflector with the white side just to camera left. Post was done in Lightroom and Photoshop. Jan 18 13 12:06 pm Link It's okay. The depth of field is good, and the direction of light okay too. She should have had firstly a lot more connection. I see in her eyes a question of is this good? What do you want? Something is missing. There is no joie de vivre so it's not a powerful picture. Light. You may be a bit close, and the light is flat. If you can find a light naturally occurring that travels further like into a tunnel or past an overhang you'll get soft but more direction light. Problem with the 5 in 1 is they are round, and not great at making an easy way to cut the light with barn doors, flags etc. Jan 18 13 12:14 pm Link The catch lights in her eyes are too low, the idea is to mimic the sun, and unless the sun is setting it would usually show much higher as a reflection in her eyes [So if the reflector were higher it would be a nice catch light as you have it] Think a simple background, with less color contrast [Solid green leaves of a tree, solid building way off in the distance out of focus, beautiful blue sky] Would love to see a more engaging look too Jan 18 13 04:31 pm Link It's all around dull. The models expression/pose The surrounding area Jan 18 13 04:34 pm Link |