Model
E e v a
Posts: 1724
Nashville, Tennessee, US
Joseph William wrote:
Can I get a salty spittoon, but with a couple sprinkles of weenie to help the medicine go down? SALT FIRST!
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/20327226
Cropped the top of her head off. Shot is not up to par with the rest.
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/p … 6#10765429
Boring shot. Lighting could be better. Her boots blend in too much with the floor.
Now for the weenie.
Overall your port is actually pretty good, especially the beach work. I'd be a moron if I passed up your beach work for any other style, because it really is your strong suit there.
Model
E e v a
Posts: 1724
Nashville, Tennessee, US
Model
winking_wonder
Posts: 5907
New York, New York, US
Could I get a Weenie hut critique? And what concept of shoot should I try next?
Model
E e v a
Posts: 1724
Nashville, Tennessee, US
Photographer
Darren Brade
Posts: 3351
London, England, United Kingdom
Hi, whatever you feel.
Get well soon.
Darren x
Model
E e v a
Posts: 1724
Nashville, Tennessee, US
Photographer
Rik Williams
Posts: 4005
Melbourne, Victoria, Australia
Samantha Emme wrote:
Thank you!
Alright, Weenie hut it is.
Overall your port is very strong. I see good consistent lighting, good crops, good angles. It definitely shows you have a strong talent for this. I believe you could do well in multiple genres. You could do fashion or art nudes, or switch to a sole classy glamour, and be successful.
I can't say too much in the ways of bad, but delete these two shots:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30139540 (18+)
Because it just isn't as strong and seems a port filler.
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/1 … aa45f2.jpg
I remember someone else mentioning the nose being washed out. I agree with it. Thank you Samantha 
Very kind of you to say so and yes, I am looking to strengthen my portfolio through eliminating the weaker ones.
These may be a good start.
Photographer
Bryland Photography
Posts: 982
Chicago, Illinois, US
Hope you get well soon! I'll take the Weenie Hut!
Photographer
Pixel Fist
Posts: 3404
Knoxville, Tennessee, US
Weenie hut critique please! However, if you see something that looks crummy, use all the salt you need.
Photographer
JOEL McDONALD
Posts: 608
Portland, Oregon, US
I'll play. You make the call.
(I will be say it before you do though, I do need to update my work.) :-)
Photographer
DRaskin Photography
Posts: 167
Sacramento, California, US
Wishing you a quick and smooth recovery.
Please take a look at my port and go whichever direction you feel is best. (I'd probably lean towards weenie hut, but if it's salty spitoon, then so be it).
Cheers
Model
E e v a
Posts: 1724
Nashville, Tennessee, US
Photographer
David Kirk
Posts: 4852
Ottawa, Ontario, Canada
I hope you have a speedy recovery.
I'd like a different sort of critique...if we were to shoot together what would we shoot and why?
Photographer
Foto Priganica
Posts: 50
Leeds, England, United Kingdom
Hope you'll have a quick recovery ... please have a look at my port and tell me what you think I should drop out of it ...thanks
Model
Dakota Burden
Posts: 126
Nanaimo, British Columbia, Canada
Oh dear, sorry about the injury! I wish you a blessed healing. Critique and feedback is greatly appreciated, please!
Makeup Artist
Valerie Walls
Posts: 17
Saint Louis, Missouri, US
salty please
Model
E e v a
Posts: 1724
Nashville, Tennessee, US
Bernadette Newberry wrote:
Weenie Hut for me, please! Haha. Good: I definitely see creativity there, and the lighting isn't bad. You're off to a good start, and I see some good depth and emotion with shots.
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30821135
This shot is very lovely, and is your best.
Bad: I'd tone down the photoshop. Less of the hipster effects and messing with colors, and more just mastering the basics.
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31130128
You cropped off her butt.
Model
Maruschke
Posts: 543
Darfield, Canterbury, New Zealand
Weenie hut critique Please 
Model
E e v a
Posts: 1724
Nashville, Tennessee, US
Maria Susanti wrote:
Weenie hut critique pleasee Good:
I like that you're branching away from the cutesy look. You are definitely improving and you have such a lovely look I think you will continue to do well.
I love these two shots:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30655679
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/p … 9#29950637
Bad: I see two expressions. Smiling. And blank face. I think with such expressive eyes and with your look, you could go much farther then you have. I want to see some strong emotive shots, and I think it can really show your versatility.
Photographer
I Ference Photography
Posts: 1202
Brooklyn, New York, US
I'll take a salty spittoon critique!
Model
E e v a
Posts: 1724
Nashville, Tennessee, US
Lela Jesse wrote:
I'll take salty spittoon Critique please!
( By the way, I love love love that you are doing Spongebob based critiques! "I slipped on an ice cube and got covered in boo boo's! " "Boo boo's eh? I think you want that hospital!") Glad you like it!
NOW FOR THE SALT.
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31163169
WHY is this shot here? It doesn't show you well at all. I see half a set of a lips, a chin, an eye bag, and some hair. Your port needs to show your face! (which is gorgeous by the way)
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30999333
Same with this shot. Never put shots lower then what you have in your port.
New rule for you lady. If your new work does not beat this shot below, do not use it:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/21912817
This is your best shot and it's stunning. I want your goal to be to make it your worst in your port. Because I like your look, and you can do this level and better.
Model
E e v a
Posts: 1724
Nashville, Tennessee, US
Jorge Kreimer wrote:
Salty spittoon, please. Salty? I'll give you salty. You suck for not being in Nashville.
Alright now that has been said, I'll give some actual salt.
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/1 … 707893.jpg
All the empty space in this shot definitely bothers me. It feels like there should've been something at the top of the photo. A swooping hawk? A gigantic T rex dipping into the shot? Something, anything really.
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31431606
Maybe this is in, but this lighting makes the model look very sickly, and I think it takes away from the shot.
And I liked your old avatar better then the one you have currently, because the new one also has too much space over the models head.
Model
E e v a
Posts: 1724
Nashville, Tennessee, US
Dominique Banner wrote:
Weenie hut. New model so need something nice for a change The good:
You have very pretty eyes, gorgeous hair, and a really pretty smile.
What you need to work on:
It looks like you are going for a glamour look. I think you need to work on posing. When modeling with lingerie, don't turn your upper half to the side so much. Turn it toward the camera. Relax the shoulders. And make your poses more elegant. Kick out the hips a little, and bring the hands to a more natural position. You look very nervous I'd say, but there's no need to be, since you're lovely.
http://stylecrave.frsucrave.netdna-cdn. … l_msp1.jpg
Do more shots like this. I'd find a make up artist, curl the hair all sexy, and be confident, because you have a lot to be confident about. Good luck
Model
E e v a
Posts: 1724
Nashville, Tennessee, US
Cole Morrison wrote:
I need a Salty Spitoon Critique to go please. I'm gonna make this extra salty, since I'm having trouble finding things to be harsh about in your stuff and this makes me ANGRY.
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/1 … 2ad1fe.jpg
I dont want to see a pole! I WANT TO see your face and modeling! Not up to par!
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/1 … 0e4379.jpg
WHY IS YOUR FOOT CROPPED?!?! Maybe fans want to see your foot.
Alright, that's pretty much all I've got. You'd make it in the salty spitoon.
Model
E e v a
Posts: 1724
Nashville, Tennessee, US
Art of the nude wrote:
Whatever you feel like. Good: You know I like your art nudes. You have a lot of creativity, and they are very classy and well composed.
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/28980218 (18+)
I want to see some more intense work however, with the outdoor nudes. I think you have potential to make your images pop, and I want some more drama!
Model
Maggie Xia
Posts: 452
Atlanta, Georgia, US
hope u feel better soon Salty Spitoon Critique pls!
Model
E e v a
Posts: 1724
Nashville, Tennessee, US
Model
E e v a
Posts: 1724
Nashville, Tennessee, US
Folly Photographe wrote:
I already critique your port saying what was your best and worst on an other thread. Go as you feel, don't be afraid to hurt of to be kind, I can manage both. I quite like your port. Most of your work is well done. Other pieces confuse me, but that's ok.
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/1 … 4246b8.jpg (18+)
This shot is absolutely amazing, and I think it needs to be in an art gallery or sold for some good money honestly. Probably took a ton of time for you to take as well.
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/1 … 95b742.jpg (18+)
This shot isn't quite as amazing. Model is a little too centered for my taste, and I think your better genre is your more crazy work.
Photographer
Jorge Kreimer
Posts: 3716
San Cristóbal de las Casas, Chiapas, Mexico
Samantha Emme wrote:
Salty? I'll give you salty. You suck for not being in Nashville.
Alright now that has been said, I'll give some actual salt.
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/1 … 707893.jpg
All the empty space in this shot definitely bothers me. It feels like there should've been something at the top of the photo. A swooping hawk? A gigantic T rex dipping into the shot? Something, anything really.
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31431606
Maybe this is in, but this lighting makes the model look very sickly, and I think it takes away from the shot.
And I liked your old avatar better then the one you have currently, because the new one also has too much space over the models head. Thank you for your too kind words.
Model
Cole Morrison
Posts: 3958
Portland, Oregon, US
Samantha Emme wrote:
I'm gonna make this extra salty, since I'm having trouble finding things to be harsh about in your stuff and this makes me ANGRY.
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/1 … 2ad1fe.jpg
I dont want to see a pole! I WANT TO see your face and modeling! Not up to par!
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/1 … 0e4379.jpg
WHY IS YOUR FOOT CROPPED?!?! Maybe fans want to see your foot.
Alright, that's pretty much all I've got. You'd make it in the salty spitoon. I'm actually quite flattered because your work is so awesome too. Thanks for the critique.
Model
E e v a
Posts: 1724
Nashville, Tennessee, US
Model
Axioma
Posts: 6822
Antwerp, Antwerp, Belgium
A bit salty, a bit weenie maybe? Whatever you see fit . Thank you. Get well soon!
Model
E e v a
Posts: 1724
Nashville, Tennessee, US
Model
E e v a
Posts: 1724
Nashville, Tennessee, US
Model
Miluna V
Posts: 14
Dayton, Ohio, US
Samantha Emme wrote:
Good: You have gorgeous eyes, and a lovely face. You'd do well doing beauty work, as well as alternative if you wanted to.
http://media-cache-ec2.pinterest.com/up … S9GC_c.jpg
This type of work I could see you doing.
This shot is your best: https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/p … 5#31293446
Bad: Work with better photographers, relax your poses, and do not hunch the shoulders! Pose and express with confidence.
Whoever photoshopped this dress on you needs to be smacked.
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/1 … 622adc.jpg Thank you! I want to work with more photographers but its just about getting things set up and finding the right ones! Thats exactly the type of work I want to do. Im in love with alternative photography, the darker side of things. And that dress is horrid. I hate that photo but its the ONLY edited photo that photographer sent to me thus far. NOT what we agreed to. I posted it only to not hurt their feelings. Perhaps Im too nice?
Model
C A T H Y
Posts: 5464
Anaheim, California, US
Weenie hut critique please
Model
E e v a
Posts: 1724
Nashville, Tennessee, US
Model
Lela Jesse
Posts: 1148
Shasta Lake, California, US
Samantha Emme wrote:
Glad you like it!
NOW FOR THE SALT.
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31163169
WHY is this shot here? It doesn't show you well at all. I see half a set of a lips, a chin, an eye bag, and some hair. Your port needs to show your face! (which is gorgeous by the way)
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30999333
Same with this shot. Never put shots lower then what you have in your port.
New rule for you lady. If your new work does not beat this shot below, do not use it:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/21912817
This is your best shot and it's stunning. I want your goal to be to make it your worst in your port. Because I like your look, and you can do this level and better. Thank you very very much! I'll hide, or get rid of those right away!
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