Photographer
Archie Campbell
Posts: 2
London, England, United Kingdom
Can I get some salty feedback.
Just started out and looking to improve as much as I can so the harsher the better!
Model
_eMMe_
Posts: 866
Florence, Toscana, Italy
Model
Heaven Leigh D
Posts: 15
Saline, Louisiana, US
Salty Spitoon please (: and what industry should I be aiming toward?
Model
E e v a
Posts: 1724
Nashville, Tennessee, US
dd photography wrote:
HI!
Hit me hard. Alright, you know your stuff, and its obvious. But you wanted salty.
1. NEVER will I EVER catch you with another model on a toilet in a sexy shot. She was so gorgeous! Everything else was right. And then it looks like she is taking a shit. NO! NO NO. Seat her on anything but the thrown of glory.
2. You crop fingers, toes, and forheads. NO! Especially foreheads in your case lol.
But that's all I could find. Salty spitoon welcomes you.
Model
Kristin Howell
Posts: 101
Morehead, Kentucky, US
Weenie hut critique 
Model
E e v a
Posts: 1724
Nashville, Tennessee, US
Kess M wrote:
salty!  Salt for you!
WHY is that godawful photo your avatar? Like I get it, your pose is pretty cool. SAVE it for a better quality photo! Always sell yourself. You probably don't have a problem selling yourself, but still. SELL YOURSELF.
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31438004
Not digging this shot, as its not up to par with the rest.
That's all I've got.
Model
E e v a
Posts: 1724
Nashville, Tennessee, US
Photographer
dd photography
Posts: 944
San Diego, California, US
Samantha Emme wrote:
Alright, you know your stuff, and its obvious. But you wanted salty.
1. NEVER will I EVER catch you with another model on a toilet in a sexy shot. She was so gorgeous! Everything else was right. And then it looks like she is taking a shit. NO! NO NO. Seat her on anything but the thrown of glory.
2. You crop fingers, toes, and forheads. NO! Especially foreheads in your case lol.
But that's all I could find. Salty spitoon welcomes you. Thanks!
1. A girls's gotta go when she's gotta go. Doesn't stop me from shooting no?
2. I do, you're right.
3. THANKS!
Model
E e v a
Posts: 1724
Nashville, Tennessee, US
Evie_Wolfe wrote:
If you have the time and inclination, I would appreciate a salty critique
I hope you recover soon, having had issues with a shoulder myself I know how frustrating it can be! I really hope you aren't in too much pain xx The recovery is going well surprisingly. And I'm sorry to hear about your shoulder. Hopefully its fixable.
Now to the critique!
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/22296965
This shot doesnt show enough of you! and the other one is better.
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30270646 18+
Why cant I see your nose?!? It seems like parts of you are dissapearing into the background.
And that's all I've got. Actually a fan of your work honestly. You have a really good niche in avant garde modeling that you do really well.
Model
E e v a
Posts: 1724
Nashville, Tennessee, US
winking_wonder wrote:
Could I get a Weenie hut critique? And what concept of shoot should I try next? Good: You have a very good commercial/lifestyle port, aside from the one nude shot. You have decent expressions, and good posing.
Bad: I find your stuff too safe at times. I'd love to see a strong beauty shot from you, and some fashion where you really pose and rock it, to branch out and give an oomph to your port.
Model
winking_wonder
Posts: 5907
New York, New York, US
Samantha Emme wrote:
Good: You have a very good commercial/lifestyle port, aside from the one nude shot. You have decent expressions, and good posing.
Bad: I find your stuff too safe at times. I'd love to see a strong beauty shot from you, and some fashion where you really pose and rock it, to branch out and give an oomph to your port. Thanks, Samantha! I've been encouraged a few times to do a strong beauty shot. And I personally would like to do some fashion as well, so I will work on it!
Model
Madison P Cook
Posts: 136
Miami, Florida, US
I'd love to learn, super new to modeling so any help is great appreciated! And be as honest as you'd like!!
Model
Ceci L
Posts: 235
Villena, Valencia, Spain
Critiquize me 
Model
Beth Chambers
Posts: 465
London, England, United Kingdom
Weenie hut critique please 
Model
E e v a
Posts: 1724
Nashville, Tennessee, US
Model
aliceelou012
Posts: 24
London, England, United Kingdom
Weenie hut please!
Model
E e v a
Posts: 1724
Nashville, Tennessee, US
APS-Chicago wrote:
Hope you get well soon! I'll take the Weenie Hut! Thank you!
Good: I think you have a good classic style, and I liked your maternity shot. You shoot well balance colored images, and your outdoor is definitely a strong point.
Bad:
I'd say you struggle when taking black and white. for some reason, those were my least favorite shots in your portfolio. They came out too boring with little contrast. Now some shoot in just color, but if you wan't that balance, I think that side of the spectrum needs a little work in balancing the lowlights and highlights.
This shot needs to go in your port: https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/p … 8#22361178
Photographer
Darren Brade
Posts: 3351
London, England, United Kingdom
Model
Angeli Li
Posts: 24
Vancouver, British Columbia, Canada
Any bad photos/good photos in my port? thanks!
Model
Brittney Denea
Posts: 285
Oceanside, California, US
Weenie Hut? Now I want a hot dog!
Also, should I try to submit photos to any magazines?
Model
E e v a
Posts: 1724
Nashville, Tennessee, US
KMA2SQ wrote:
Weenie hut critique please! However, if you see something that looks crummy, use all the salt you need. Good: You have some very creative ideas. I like your vintage and pin up styled work.
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/24778524
The first shot in this series is gorgeous.
Bad: Your photoshop skills. Very cheesy, too much gaussian blur, and everything is unrealistic, which bothers me. I want you to do two things. If you take outdoor pictures, I recommend not to shop skies into the backgrounds anymore. Just shoot early in the morning, and you'll get pretty skies. If you have to, make sure the artificial sky makes sense lighting and hue wise in the shot. Basically the first thing is to make your photography consistently good before playing with photoshop. Secondly, when you do photoshop, I'd take tutorials on how to make it more realistic and visually appealing. If that's not something you have time to do, pay a retoucher, or just do simple fixes. A lot of your photography I feel would be just fine without the extra photoshop. Good luck!
Model
E e v a
Posts: 1724
Nashville, Tennessee, US
Model
E e v a
Posts: 1724
Nashville, Tennessee, US
Model
E e v a
Posts: 1724
Nashville, Tennessee, US
DRaskin Photography wrote:
Wishing you a quick and smooth recovery.
Please take a look at my port and go whichever direction you feel is best. (I'd probably lean towards weenie hut, but if it's salty spitoon, then so be it).
Cheers Thank you!
Good: You have some good use of natural light, and for the most part good composure. Only one shot had a cropped foot, which shows you're focusing on decent cropping. I can say there weren't any really bad shots.
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31365976
This shot is absolutely lovely.
Bad: You only appear to have 3 shoots under your belt. Honestly I thought it was only two at first since two of the shoots blend so much in together. This means for what you have, it is very repetitive. Branch it out! Either do something indoors, or a different background/look.
Photographer
Cameron J Wright
Posts: 34
Los Angeles, California, US
Feeling a bit salty best way to improve imo
Model
E e v a
Posts: 1724
Nashville, Tennessee, US
David Kirk wrote:
I hope you have a speedy recovery.
I'd like a different sort of critique...if we were to shoot together what would we shoot and why? Thank you!
Critique: I'd definitely shoot with you, as I like your style of work.
You definitely have a strong suit in portraiture styles, which all though is something I love doing, it is something I am working to branch away from. For a shoot with you, I'd hope to challenge both of us to do a full body shot. I think you could do well in one of two directions. You could probably do a kickass avant garde shoot, or I would challenge you to do a soft look, such as the image below:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/1 … 79bf4e.jpg
Both styles would be something I could see you doing well.
Model
Daniel Pierce
Posts: 634
Burbank, California, US
Very sorry about your shoulder. May there be shakes and foot massages in store for you.
Hit me with the Salty Spitoon as you see fit.
Sincerely,
Soon to be burned.
Model
Magic Forests
Posts: 530
New York, New York, US
Hi Samantha! Hope you're recovering well. I'd like a bit of feedback so weenie me up, please!
Model
E e v a
Posts: 1724
Nashville, Tennessee, US
Foto Priganica wrote:
Hope you'll have a quick recovery ... please have a look at my port and tell me what you think I should drop out of it ...thanks Thank you!
Good: I like the creativity and some of the edgy shots in there.
I'd drop the last image of this series:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30946922
Comes off a little rapey looking to me, like she is annoyed/bothered by it. The other two shots in this are awesome though.
Probably would ditch the tattooing image, since while its a good image, it isnt really selling you to models.
Model
E e v a
Posts: 1724
Nashville, Tennessee, US
xMissLaurenElizabethx wrote:
Me! Please? WEENIE hut!
Good: You are very pretty and have such lovely skin! You have a good bone structure and you'll do fine. You might consider agency work, because while 5'8 might be a smidge short, its tall enough to where an agency will still consider you.
This shot needs to be your avatar: https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/1 … 237c94.jpg
Bad: Before you submit to an agency if thats what you want to do, practice with expression. Your poses aren't bad for a start, but you do make a lot of the same faces. Also in the beach shots, why did you decide on lingerie? I think it is a little out of place in the outdoor location.
Model
Jane Smithly
Posts: 1097
Crowley, Texas, US
Me please Also FEEL BETTER!!!!! (shakes finger at)
Model
Jeneva Jones
Posts: 215
Murrieta, California, US
Salty Spitoon Critique sounds delicious
Model
Winnie L
Posts: 5868
Singapore, Singapore, Singapore
Saltyyy.... Hope the shoulder is doing well
Model
Bronte Ann
Posts: 23
Detroit, Michigan, US
I'd like a real salty spitoon critique! Plus tips for the industry... I'm trying to find paid work!
Model
Dottie Lynn
Posts: 1
Sacramento, California, US
I do like some salty snacks. But I can be a weenie sometimes too.
Model
E e v a
Posts: 1724
Nashville, Tennessee, US
Dakota Burden wrote:
Oh dear, sorry about the injury! I wish you a blessed healing. Critique and feedback is greatly appreciated, please! Thank you.
Good: Love your look. You seem to have a really good handle on your posing and expression ability.
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/p … 1#28199651
This shot is my favorite, and I think it is port worthy, even though it's not good photo quality.
Bad: https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/26352336
This shot you are blurry and blend into the white. I am not a fan.
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