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Photographer
I Ference Photography
Posts: 1,152
Rochester, New York, US


I'll have a go!
Jan 30 13 03:45 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Ceci L
Posts: 235
Villena, Valencia, Spain


Martin Coombes wrote:
Ceci L
Posts: 37
Villena, Valencia, Spain

The good
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30493016
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30806702

The bad
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31292888

The ugly
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30805444

My honest thoughts are that you are waiting for Mr Right.

You need a photographer that does not just see you as a beautiful sexy woman who he wants to take some cheap thoughtless images off.

You need a photographer who can really express the best from you.

You deserve that smile

Thank you.

I'm going to kill my port u.u

Jan 30 13 04:35 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Martin Coombes
Posts: 115
Goslar, Lower Saxony, Germany


I Ference Photography wrote:
I'll have a go!

I Ference Photography                                                           Male
Charlotte, North Carolina, US

The good
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30363153
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29551884

The bad
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30780438

The ugly
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29881297

The first image under good is great. One of those images that very quickly you see how it was done, but the fact that it took that second look, makes it special.

I love your work and the locations, but if I had to say something negative than maybe the work becomes a little bit repetitive.

I would prefer maybe a few less images and higher printing quality.

Jan 30 13 11:15 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Martin Coombes
Posts: 115
Goslar, Lower Saxony, Germany


Ceci L wrote:

Thank you.

I'm going to kill my port u.u

I am not sure what "kill my port u.u" means, but please do not do anything stupid because of something that I said.

Jan 30 13 11:18 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
B E A R
Posts: 474
Riverside, California, US


Okie
Jan 31 13 12:36 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Martin Coombes
Posts: 115
Goslar, Lower Saxony, Germany


Bear wrote:
Okie

Bear
Posts: 435
Riverside, California

The good
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/25225296
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29856855

The bad
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30905626
(it's like one night in Bangkok)

The ugly
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31382151

Overall really nice images.

Jan 31 13 12:48 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
OmnyRa
Posts: 1,029
Indianapolis, Indiana, US


Still at it?
Feb 02 13 12:25 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Martin Coombes
Posts: 115
Goslar, Lower Saxony, Germany


OmnyRa wrote:
Still at it?

Photographer
OmnyRa
Posts: 918
Denver, Colorado

I am always still at it.

The good
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/24803352
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31431586

The bad
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31420346

The ugly
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30320019

Not sure what to say about your port. Some good images, but I can't help think that you could raise the level a bit.

Feb 03 13 07:15 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Jaywalk_Photo
Posts: 17
Salt Lake City, Utah, US


Yes please.  smile
Feb 06 13 02:36 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
MidnightSun Designs
Posts: 337
WINSTON SALEM, North Carolina, US


Lets do it.
Feb 06 13 10:37 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Martin Coombes
Posts: 115
Goslar, Lower Saxony, Germany


Jaywalk_Photo wrote:
Yes please.  smile

The good

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31501844
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31501963

The bad
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31501933

The ugly
None

Although I have listed none as ugly, my advice is to pay attention to detail.
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31501836
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31501808
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31501821

All of these shots have the potential to be stunning images, but the lack of paying attention to detail is what lets them down.

Over all you clearly have talent and I wish you all the best.

Feb 07 13 12:59 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Martin Coombes
Posts: 115
Goslar, Lower Saxony, Germany


MidnightSun Designs wrote:
Lets do it.

The good
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31232656
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29699005

The bad
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/12023932

The ugly
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30167352

You have some good images and are very lucky to be working with some stunning models.

Feb 07 13 01:05 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Dontez Akins
Posts: 309
Douglasville, Georgia, US


ill go for a critique
Feb 07 13 06:15 am  Link  Quote 
Model
winking_wonder
Posts: 5,559
New York, New York, US


Okay!
Feb 07 13 06:47 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Sibby S
Posts: 178
Adelaide, South Australia, Australia


me please smile
Feb 07 13 07:46 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Martin Coombes
Posts: 115
Goslar, Lower Saxony, Germany


Feb 07 13 10:50 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Martin Coombes
Posts: 115
Goslar, Lower Saxony, Germany


winking_wonder wrote:
Okay!

The good
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/22731725

The bad
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/27772280

The ugly
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/27373071

It's nice to see a llama smile, and I can imagine you would be good fun to work with.

Feb 07 13 10:55 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Ann77
Posts: 175
Atlanta, Georgia, US


I'll play if you are still going!  smile
Feb 07 13 10:57 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
JIOPIX
Posts: 1,149
Toronto, Ontario, Canada


I'd like to play smile
Feb 07 13 11:02 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Martin Coombes
Posts: 115
Goslar, Lower Saxony, Germany


Feb 07 13 11:02 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Martin Coombes
Posts: 115
Goslar, Lower Saxony, Germany


Ann77 wrote:
I'll play if you are still going!  smile

The good
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30964618
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30342253
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/26092918

The bad
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/20180120

The ugly
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/28271558

Really nice to see a great fashion model on here, and it was a struggle to find one image to put under ugly.

Feb 07 13 11:11 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Martin Coombes
Posts: 115
Goslar, Lower Saxony, Germany


JIOPIX wrote:
I'd like to play smile

The good
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30395210

The images for "bad" and "ugly" would be too long for me to list.

When I saw your profile page and all the rewards my heart sank, but I thought don't worry I am sure the images are good. When I clicked; my heart sank even more. 

I think all of these rewards are you compensating for a lack of talent.

Ditch the rewards and concentrate on producing some good images.

(sorry)

Feb 07 13 11:22 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Dontez Akins
Posts: 309
Douglasville, Georgia, US


Martin Coombes wrote:
Honestly I think we see things very differently, but that's not always a bad thing:)

Feb 07 13 01:32 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Ann77
Posts: 175
Atlanta, Georgia, US


Martin Coombes wrote:
Really nice to see a great fashion model on here, and it was a struggle to find one image to put under ugly.

Thank you for the encouragement!  Brightened my day!

Feb 08 13 09:06 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Martin Coombes
Posts: 115
Goslar, Lower Saxony, Germany


Ann77 wrote:

Thank you for the encouragement!  Brightened my day!

My pleasure smile

Have a nice weekend.

Feb 08 13 09:12 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Cynthia Serrano
Posts: 12,466
Newark, New Jersey, US


sure smile
Feb 08 13 10:38 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Martin Coombes
Posts: 115
Goslar, Lower Saxony, Germany


Feb 08 13 12:30 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Images by MR
Posts: 7,523
Vancouver, British Columbia, Canada


Yes plz..
Feb 08 13 12:44 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
JWrightPhotography
Posts: 20
Twentynine Palms, California, US


ok I am ready lets have it.
Feb 08 13 01:14 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Cynthia Serrano
Posts: 12,466
Newark, New Jersey, US


Thanks I recently cut it again

Feb 08 13 04:18 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Martin Coombes
Posts: 115
Goslar, Lower Saxony, Germany


Images by MR wrote:
Yes plz..

The good
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/20510952
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29360301

The bad
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/9097965
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/28307904

The ugly
none

I try to be honest with my critique, and when I was looking for an image to display under ugly, I could not find one.

Does that make you a great photographer ......sadly no.!

You clearly have talent and an eye, but I would have liked to see more images that blew me away, than just a few.

Feb 08 13 11:47 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Martin Coombes
Posts: 115
Goslar, Lower Saxony, Germany


JWrightPhotography wrote:
ok I am ready lets have it.

What do they teach at university today?

The good
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/26954837

The bad
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/2523611/267720

The ugly
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/27191904
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/26903913
and many more .....

When I viewed your port, I was in a state of shock. I could not and still not understand it.

I read your biography (which is the best thing on your port), and kindly suggest you stick at being good at point number one.

And yet even while I am writing this I can't help feeling that you are going to produce a great piece of art, and when you do I will humbly eat my own harsh comments.

Feb 09 13 12:06 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Account is Disabled
Posts: 9
Belgrade, Central Serbia, Serbia


New here, so I'd love some pointers!
Shoot! smile
Feb 11 13 03:27 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Martin Coombes
Posts: 115
Goslar, Lower Saxony, Germany


Jelena Jokic wrote:
New here, so I'd love some pointers!
Shoot! smile

The good
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31574128
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31574046

The bad
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31574094

The ugly
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31574125

You have some nice images and I can see a lot of potential.

Have fun in London, my hometown, which I miss a lot.

If you need any help or advice about things in London please don't hesitate to ask.

Feb 11 13 08:36 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Lela Jesse
Posts: 1,148
Arcata, California, US


me please? smile
Feb 11 13 09:29 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
EdwardKristopher
Posts: 3,353
Tempe, Arizona, US


Do me...!  :-)
Feb 12 13 12:29 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Martin Coombes
Posts: 115
Goslar, Lower Saxony, Germany


Lela Jesse wrote:
me please? smile

The good
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/23382411
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/23728565

The bad
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/20805573

The ugly
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/28296578

I like your style very much, and would of loved a chance to work with you.

Feb 12 13 01:44 am  Link  Quote 
Model
-Nadya-
Posts: 325
Houston, Texas, US


give mine a shot please smile
Feb 12 13 01:47 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Katie Pagani
Posts: 239
New York, New York, US


I would love to know what you think! Yes, I know my port is tiny )=
Feb 12 13 07:56 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Martin Coombes
Posts: 115
Goslar, Lower Saxony, Germany


EdwardKristopher wrote:
Do me...!  :-)

I did answer this before but I did not link it correctly.

Here is what I had already written.
....................................................

What can I say; it's like looking at some fake internet dating agency.

Where is the art of the photographer?

Some very pretty models, lots of awful images.

Feb 12 13 12:08 pm  Link  Quote 
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