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Light Writer
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Post an image or link
I'll write a comment in 5-7-5 poem form
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Senry%C5%AB

I hear images
like colors in sound- silence
singing in gray shades
Feb 10 13 09:44 pm  Link  Quote 
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winking_wonder
Posts: 5,318
New York, New York, US


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Feb 10 13 09:54 pm  Link  Quote 
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Oakland, California, US


winking_wonder wrote:
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Azure the wind's breath
over the brown trees- winter
longing for flowers

Feb 10 13 10:19 pm  Link  Quote 
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_eMMe_
Posts: 842
Florence, Toscana, Italy


Feb 11 13 01:07 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Light Writer
Posts: 18,387
Oakland, California, US


sunlit blackbirds trill
from shadowing trees obscure
leaves rustle- eyes pierce

Feb 11 13 06:14 am  Link  Quote 
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Ceci L
Posts: 235
Villena, Valencia, Spain


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Feb 11 13 08:03 am  Link  Quote 
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Jorge Kreimer
Posts: 1,937
Los Angeles, California, US


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Feb 11 13 09:30 am  Link  Quote 
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TDSImages
Posts: 768
Salt Lake City, Utah, US


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Feb 11 13 10:15 am  Link  Quote 
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Ceci L wrote:
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white rings like bells, blue
echoes softly lasting long
distant quiet sounds

[
rings could be a noun or verb
]

Feb 11 13 06:32 pm  Link  Quote 
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Jorge Kreimer wrote:
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wrecked engines quiet
in their tombs- disturbed fur-clad
stranger's revenge- tall

Feb 11 13 06:34 pm  Link  Quote 
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TDSImages wrote:
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heart beats blood red, white
flowing ringing fabric, child's
cries to come, soon, soon

Feb 11 13 06:36 pm  Link  Quote 
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Jorge Kreimer
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Los Angeles, California, US


Light Writer wrote:

wrecked engines quiet
in their tombs- disturbed fur-clad
stranger's revenge- tall

Very nice, thanks!

Feb 11 13 10:52 pm  Link  Quote 
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EdwardKristopher
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Tempe, Arizona, US


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Feb 12 13 12:27 am  Link  Quote 
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Maruschke
Posts: 543
Darfield, Canterbury, New Zealand


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Feb 12 13 01:49 pm  Link  Quote 
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Oakland, California, US


EdwardKristopher wrote:
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orange sounds of skin
on skin, gentle stroking touch-
smiling contentment

Feb 12 13 10:01 pm  Link  Quote 
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Oakland, California, US


Maruschke wrote:
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the sound of rain on
broad leaves running and dripping:
heat of summer's storm

Feb 12 13 10:02 pm  Link  Quote 
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Amul La La
Posts: 708
Plymouth, England, United Kingdom


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smile
Feb 13 13 06:15 am  Link  Quote 
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OmnyRa
Posts: 1,029
Indianapolis, Indiana, US


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Feb 14 13 09:51 am  Link  Quote 
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TDSImages
Posts: 768
Salt Lake City, Utah, US


TDSImages wrote:
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Feb 15 13 05:49 am  Link  Quote 
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TDSImages
Posts: 768
Salt Lake City, Utah, US


Light Writer wrote:

heart beats blood red, white
flowing ringing fabric, child's
cries to come, soon, soon

That was beautiful...thank you!!

Feb 15 13 05:50 am  Link  Quote 
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