Lorance Photography wrote:
I'll try a couple

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31466710

Listed! great lines and tones in this one!  not sure about the water mark placement, but this feels like a well thought out image. kudos

Lorance Photography wrote:
one of my personal faves

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30852293

pass. the tones are great, but something compositionally does not set well with me on this image. I think it is because your eyes get trapped in space with the business of the lines. I would be curious to see different versions though with different compositions. please feel free to play again.

Tracy Zabriskie wrote:
See what you think

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31531702   18+

pass. the tones and concept are there, but it just feels off with the open legs in this one compositionally. maybe if you are to explore this concept again, try one with forming lines with the scene more than with the sexual undertones which I think would make for a stronger image. please feel free to play again.

_eMMe_ wrote:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30884030

pass, I dig the concept and the execution with the grain and tones in the image, but it is much too center weighted for my tastes. Maybe play with different compositions with your photographer on the next one. please feel free to play again.

_eMMe_ wrote:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30782452

pass. again very center weighted in the composition. I would love to see what you could do in a session with a different style of composition different than just a portrait. please feel free to play again.

Pantelis Palios wrote:




https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/28048697

no offense, but a lot of you do not read the rules. one image per post in this thread please.

as for the images:

pass on all three. sorry, but all of them seem very portraitesque to me. What can you show me that expands the repiotiore more?  please feel free to play again.

--Ishtar-- wrote:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/25315162
maybe?

pass. soft focus issues, I think the framing could be improved upon, and maybe more directional lighting perhaps on your next one. please feel free to play again

Scarlett de la Calle wrote:




here they are let me know

one image per post please.

but pass on all three. first one seems over processed (maybe work on the concept further), second one same, and third one I think could stand better lighting. Your expression and pose are great on the third one, but maybe try it with more directional light. please feel free to play again.

Christoff Smit wrote:
And mine?

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/32287278

Listed!  this one is great for the light and quirkiness factor. kudos

Kasey Lestrange MUA wrote:
I haven't posted this one up on modelmayhem but I'd love to know what you think of it

https://www.facebook.com/photo.php?fbid … =3&theater

edit: oh man I posted with my makeup profile instead of my model profile but oh well, I did the makeup on this image as well

pass. it has a fashion sense to it, but it has some technical details from the photography/post work, and I think that you could put some more drama into the pose/expression honestly. If you work on it though, it has potential. please feel free to play again.

Loria Harrison wrote:
maybe this one?

Listed!  I think that this is a very honest portrait and expression. kudos

MCB Imagery wrote:
I'll play - thanks.

pass. I think your light is on, but maybe shoot with a greater DOF so everything is in focus for a portrait like this. Also, maybe give your model some espresso to liven her up a little on the next one. please feel free to play again.

JT Life Photography wrote:
18+  https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/24853932

pass. sorry, but awkward pose. maybe play with composition for the next one. please feel free to play again.

Paul Tirado Photography wrote:
How about this?

pass. classy suit, but there is something missing in this one. maybe try different light.  please feel free to play again.

S-U-B-L-I-M-E wrote:
My avatar ?

pass. without the leather gloves maybe, but for me they are too much of a distraction in the image. please feel free to play again.

StacieMaria wrote:
Mine?? 

which image? link please

Rick Reynolds wrote:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/9129301
Check this out and tell me would you or would you not list this photograph?

pass. blown out highlights in the shirt, and too much skin re-touching. maybe try to re-work it more naturally with a different crop. please feel free to play again.

Joe Alfano wrote:
How about something a little creepy?

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/32370285

pass. the creepy factor does not bother me personally. In fact, I don't really find this image creepy actually to be honest. The thing about this image for me is the usage of the brick walls where everything is illuminated in space. If you are going for a good old fashioned creepy image, maybe play with grids to selectively light your model in space. Maybe that way the illusion of the possession would be stronger to raise the hairs on my neck. I think composition is spot on though, but maybe lose the black framing as well around the image. The framing on images always feels dated to me personally, but that is just my .02 cents. please feel free to play again.

Photography by Jinques wrote:

pass. you have a very pretty model in your frame there, but the soft focus on the face, and the back focus on the hair along with the over done skin smoothing are what throw me off on this honestly. Check out Audrey Hepburn in Breakfast at Tiffany's. More of a natural look like that would give this image the wow factor especially with your model selection. Maybe try re-shooting and make sure the focus does not back focus on you, and less skin smoothing. please feel free to play again.

Brandon L Ingram wrote:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30532034

pass. sorry, but the writing on the top is distracting, and something about the composition is not working for me. Try shooting different compositions with it and a different top maybe.

Reinhard Block wrote:
Something from the weekend

pass. digging the concept and light, but for me the composition is too center weighted. Maybe try a different crop or different framing on the next round.

Expression Unlimited wrote:
Hmm
I only have this one at the moment in BW 

But he's a great guy, so let's post him!

pass. very James Dean'ish. haha  that is a good part. however, for me the composition could be a tighter crop and the water mark stands out and distracts from the mood of the image.

Katzen Lynx wrote:
The only one I have up currently, it's a new photo from last thursday (april 18th)

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/32364690

pass. awkward pose, technical issues on the photographers part... maybe try some different variations with different photographers on this concept that know how to pose to your strengths.

RachelReilly wrote:
perhaps

since this is my last pass through the realms of the death star.... I give up on re-posting about the rules of this game in this thread...

however, listed this one: https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31817818. Great capture!

Peach Jones wrote:
this?

pass. not true black and white, and a bit too over processed feeling to me along with my eyes getting trapped on the wall vs. the model.

Expression Unlimited wrote:
not still going?

Officially done as of this post everyone. Thanks for playing. I had fun going through all the different styles of work. There are truly lots of talented folks here on MM. Keep up the great work, and maybe I will post another game some day time allowing. good luck!