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Joseph William
Posts: 2039
Chicago, Illinois, US
I will tell you your best and worst if you tell me what you think of my new AVI
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Nor-Cal Photography
Posts: 3720
Walnut Creek, California, US
Joseph William wrote:
I will tell you your best and worst if you tell me what you think of my new AVI I like it but think it could be better if (1) the left hand wasn't missing and (2) if the lighting wasn't so straight on the model's face.
But just one worthless opinion. 
OK, now it is revenge time!!!
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Worlds Of Water
Posts: 37732
Rancho Cucamonga, California, US
Red hightlights do a decent job of separating the model from background. I personally like to shoot dark outfits and dark haired models on slightly lighter backgrounds... 
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kschruder
Posts: 85
Toronto, Ontario, Canada
Overall it's a good shot. If I had to critique it, I'm not quite sure I like what she's doing with her hand. I'd prefer it to be more loose and flowy
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Joseph William
Posts: 2039
Chicago, Illinois, US
Nor-Cal Photography wrote:
I like it but think it could be better if (1) the left hand wasn't missing and (2) if the lighting wasn't so straight on the model's face.
But just one worthless opinion.
OK, now it is revenge time!!! Best
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/22116730
Worst
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/p … 4#18473585
I like where you are going with these, but maybe try a bigger light source and light the background separately so the background can be dark where the foreground d is light and vise versa
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Joseph William
Posts: 2039
Chicago, Illinois, US
kschruder wrote:
Overall it's a good shot. If I had to critique it, I'm not quite sure I like what she's doing with her hand. I'd prefer it to be more loose and flowy Best
![https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140506/04/5368c3e876717_m.jpg]()
Worst
![https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140415/10/534d67c74e089_m.jpg]()
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le roy le croix
Posts: 1268
Grove Place, Saint Croix, Virgin Islands of the United States
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2M1 Fotograf
Posts: 270
Montreal, Quebec, Canada
Photographer
Joseph William
Posts: 2039
Chicago, Illinois, US
Deirdre Holmes wrote:
I like it Best
![https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/111126/18/4ed1a74109ccb_m.jpg]()
Worst
![https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120909/10/504ccfa93440c_m.jpg]()
Photographer
Joseph William
Posts: 2039
Chicago, Illinois, US
2M1 Fotograf wrote:
tell me Please read the OP
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Doug Bolton Photography
Posts: 784
Victoria, British Columbia, Canada
I'm not a fan of this image.
The pose looks very stiff.
The hand on the head looks like a claw - tense and with short fingers.
Her left arm hanging vertically 'thickens' her body. Best to leave some negative space there.
It looks a little over exposed too, but that might the porcelain look you were going for. (again, not my thing...)
...I'm no expert at all, that's just my 2 cents....
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Joseph William
Posts: 2039
Chicago, Illinois, US
Blimey Studios wrote:
I'm not a fan of this image.
The pose looks very stiff.
The hand on the head looks like a claw - tense and with short fingers.
Her left arm hanging vertically 'thickens' her body. Best to leave some negative space there.
It looks a little over exposed too, but that might the porcelain look you were going for. (again, not my thing...)
...I'm no expert at all, that's just my 2 cents.... Best
![https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130606/21/51b15f33c9893_m.jpg]()
Worst
![https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140713/16/53c310f086723_m.jpg]()
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