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Santiago Alvarez

Posts: 91

Fort Lauderdale, Florida, US

Note this is my first major post production and shot this shoot for the purpose of adding stuff to the photos in post production. I thought a black canvas would work well, however like i said, i've never done anything like this before.


Any thoughts?
http://imgur.com/a/RRORi

Jul 17 14 12:34 pm Link

Photographer

Santiago Alvarez

Posts: 91

Fort Lauderdale, Florida, US

I guess i'll ask again? Anyone care to give some critique?

Jul 17 14 02:33 pm Link

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Nerdscarf

Posts: 172

Baltimore, Maryland, US

Its a cool look, but I just wish that the stars where not so bright.

Jul 17 14 04:42 pm Link

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James Garfield

Posts: 692

Perth, Western Australia, Australia

I think you've done a pretty good job all round. The only thing that looks a bit distorted is the models leg in image 2 and his face looks a bit odd in image 3.

Jul 17 14 06:03 pm Link

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Santiago Alvarez

Posts: 91

Fort Lauderdale, Florida, US

Nerdscarf wrote:
Its a cool look, but I just wish that the stars where not so bright.

Yeah it was hard balancing out the oomph factor and as well as the realistic. I went as close as i could.

James Garfield wrote:
I think you've done a pretty good job all round. The only thing that looks a bit distorted is the models leg in image 2 and his face looks a bit odd in image 3.

I agree with the face looking odd in the third one mainly due to the colors overlapping. i might go back and fix some of it.

Jul 17 14 06:46 pm Link

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Good Egg Productions

Posts: 16713

Orlando, Florida, US

Why does the starfield just stop?  Maybe my monitor isn't bright enough to see what's there (doubtful) but it's odd that your starfield background just stops into blackness in the center of the image.

The green stuff is cool though.

Jul 17 14 07:00 pm Link

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Santiago Alvarez

Posts: 91

Fort Lauderdale, Florida, US

It stops at the Horizon. And thank you big_smile

Jul 17 14 07:21 pm Link