Just keep the language PG folks. Always up for some honest opinions.

I really like what I can see.  Good variation & some great shots :-)

Loose the photo borders and logos
Composition, if you show a knee or elbow include the foot or hand that goes along with it


In many of the photos you have posed the model so the neck looks short


An MUA would go a long way toward finishing the look of your photos


Wish you well

Thank you!

Melanie783 wrote:
I really like what I can see.  Good variation & some great shots :-)

Un-bordered and un-logoed images go to the client if they are paying for it. Otherwise images uploaded to this site get done that way. Thank you for the input though it is much appreciated. Wish you well too!

Lee_Photography wrote:
Loose the photo borders and logos
Composition, if you show a knee or elbow include the foot or hand that goes along with it

Wish you well

Cleanup the distractions.

I am curious what you think of your portfolio and how you would critique it. 

What are you aspiring to in your photography.  What photographers do you like.

To be honest I am a hater of this portfolio but to each their own.  I don't like any photo in it.   If you are having fun shooting this type of photo just keep at it and keep get better.

The only image that doesn't seem "trashy" for lack of a better word is this one.



I am sorry I can't offer much more help unless I know what you want to aspire too.

Study the basics: lighting, composition and color. Your color corrections, if you're doing any, are either too orange or too blue. The lighting is flat and lacks luster, start playing with your setup. Composition: don't cut off hands and feet when photographing the torso and be mindful of your horizon line, as of right now it's all over the place. Your models are often closing in on themselves, direct them out of that and have them elongate their neck and limbs.

Watermarked images should be removed from your portfolio or make it a small, clean one.

Not a huge fan of your slanted angles. I usually associate angles as an attempt to make an otherwise uninteresting photo interesting.

Doesn't show enough concern for lighting and composition for my tastes.

Head shots, head shots, head shots. Time to show what else you can do.