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both a mood of "what was this model thinking about the person she was looking at". I want to know if her pose/expression and the lighting combine to create such feel to this image. *18+* https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/36724963 edit: no more replies are needed. thanks! Aug 22 14 03:41 pm Link Although I like the overall look and feel to this image, the area around her eyes is too dark as opposed to her chest which is significantly more lit. If it were me, I would focus more on her eyes and light them really well to make them the main focus. Aug 22 14 03:52 pm Link aneyeforform wrote: I was thinking " WHERE are those eyes"... is that what you intended? Aug 22 14 06:23 pm Link If you're trying to make a statement about her eyes - then you might want to at the very least, get them in focus. Aug 22 14 06:49 pm Link you both are correct; si I have made the face brighter than the torso, and sharpened the eyes! .. thank you both for those ideas!! .. note: my wife had told me the eyes should Not be sharpened ... my eyes are not as good as they used to be(!). 18+ new version.. https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/36753785 Aug 23 14 11:14 am Link aneyeforform wrote: Unfortunately, I don't see anything in this expression. It's a look. But it's not very complex. I suppose I could read all sorts of things into it, but with the sparse lighting, and the odd wardrobe with the blatant nudity, I have to assume it's all about sex. Aug 23 14 11:33 am Link focus needs to be "in camera",adding sharpness in post still misses the punch.I'd re-shoot this one! Aug 23 14 11:34 am Link |
