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Photographer

Safikm

Posts: 2

Philadelphia, Pennsylvania, US

I am 100% self taught, ive been into photography for going on 7 years. Im wondering what others think of my work.. Opinions?

SafiKM.com

Sep 18 14 11:13 am Link

Photographer

Lallure Photographic

Posts: 2086

Taylors, South Carolina, US

Looking at the images, I think it is a bit portrait like. Not very commercial. Your lighting outdoors, is far better than your in-the-studio lighting.

Sep 18 14 11:24 am Link

Photographer

Safikm

Posts: 2

Philadelphia, Pennsylvania, US

Lallure Photographic wrote:
Looking at the images, I think it is a bit portrait like. Not very commercial. Your lighting outdoors, is far better than your in-the-studio lighting.

thanks for your response... When im in studio I still use natural lighting. I dont use any softboxes or anything..

Sep 18 14 12:35 pm Link

Photographer

GSG Photography Studio

Posts: 221

Portland, Oregon, US

If you have been into photography for 7 years you sure don't have much!
Get to shooting and have fun!

Sep 18 14 03:38 pm Link

Artist/Painter

Hunter GWPB

Posts: 8191

King of Prussia, Pennsylvania, US

Interesting.  Interesting people.  Interesting composition.  Interesting lighting.  Artistic work.   There are other things in life than commercial.

Sep 18 14 05:40 pm Link

Photographer

Lallure Photographic

Posts: 2086

Taylors, South Carolina, US

Hunter  GWPB wrote:
Interesting.  Interesting people.  Interesting composition.  Interesting lighting.  Artistic work.   There are other things in life than commercial.

Yes, but that wasn't really there, either.

Sep 18 14 06:16 pm Link

Photographer

PhotoLoveXO

Posts: 95

Philadelphia, Pennsylvania, US

GSG Photography Studio wrote:
If you have been into photography for 7 years you sure don't have much!
Get to shooting and have fun!

^ Good point.  I suffer from this too for taking 4 years off shooting after dropping out of photo school and not getting out and shooting enough the past few weeks since starting again. 

I think you have a solid base (maybe experimenting with some off camera lighting with help your natural lighting).

Maybe try messing around with some different compositions too.

I don't think the photos of the male models in you MM port help much. 

I think with shooting a lot more and better model selection ( and more experienced models ) you will have some great images.

Sep 18 14 06:20 pm Link

Artist/Painter

Hunter GWPB

Posts: 8191

King of Prussia, Pennsylvania, US

rules

https://www.modelmayhem.com/po.php?thread_id=85512

edit:
Safikm (so there is no doubt whom I am addressing)
I see artistic merit in your work, and fortunately, for artistic people, art is not defined by people with egos or those that control the galleries. banghead The artist and buyer defines it.  Do the work that pleases you, is the advice I am given by other artists.  Not that I don't want to be better, as well.

I understand, from your profile, that you want to move into more editorial and fashion work.  I am looking at your work where they are now and I am not trying to see into your future.  I hope your sense of art influences the work you do in the future and that you find great success.

I was involved in an art show, where the judge dismissed someone's work because it depicted animals and scenes from Africa.  The judge assumed the work was copied from a published photograph, without even considering any other possibility.   The artist was from South Africa.  She feels she was effectively banned from doing art shows related to her home land.  However, her work sold very nicely without the acknowledgement of the judge.  Don't be discouraged by any comments made in the forum.   Some people will help you learn.  Some won't.  And don't expect your ego to be stroked here.

Sep 18 14 08:21 pm Link

Photographer

Lee_Photography

Posts: 9863

Minneapolis, Minnesota, US

From my viewpoint I think cropping the human body is your biggest shortcoming, the guide is to crop above the first joint, which is above the knee and above the elbow

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140430/08/53611b6a07659_m.jpg
Example in this you have most of models right arm but choose to cut off her fingers

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140430/08/536118ae6eb48_m.jpg
Move hair behind models right shoulder, this will open up her neck which will make it appear longer and more inviting

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140828/08/53ff4fe795d8a_m.jpg
An out of focus background is less distracting, move model away from wall, use a f2.8 lens opening

Sep 19 14 03:11 pm Link