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Model

D A N I

Posts: 4627

Little Rock, Arkansas, US

I plan to find an amazing photographer to update my portfolio but I want to know what shots are needed.

Oct 22 14 10:12 pm Link

Photographer

Chixpix

Posts: 427

Melbourne, Victoria, Australia

Hey Danielle! I have looked through and think that what you are missing is some colour! I like the yellow bikini on the bike, but the rest of your port is fairly dark and bland. Some bright colour and contrast would really make it pop!

Oct 22 14 10:43 pm Link

Photographer

Glenn Hall - Fine Art

Posts: 452

Townsville, Queensland, Australia

G'day, just looked through your portfolio of images.
Need to find a photographer who can shape your natural body curves with actual real light (studio or natural) rather than add in light during editing. Also, anyone who uses liposuction during their editing clearly has no idea how to light or pose their subjects...avoid these people.
Choose a photographer that displays mastery of light and shadow on location.
Avoid the ones that also "dodge and burn" because they have no clue how to manipulate light and shadow on location.
Take all the above into account, when I say 99% of your current images have little thought with using real light and shadow that suits your physique.
...and what was also mentioned previously, need more colour from that rainbow.

Oct 22 14 11:04 pm Link

Model

D A N I

Posts: 4627

Little Rock, Arkansas, US

chixpix wrote:
Hey Danielle! I have looked through and think that what you are missing is some colour! I like the yellow bikini on the bike, but the rest of your port is fairly dark and bland. Some bright colour and contrast would really make it pop!

thanks

Oct 22 14 11:11 pm Link

Photographer

Sennia Kyle

Posts: 197

Seattle, Washington, US

Ironically, I was going to go the other way. I think you need some black and whites on simple, darker (but not black) backgrounds. smile

Oct 23 14 12:32 am Link

Photographer

Chixpix

Posts: 427

Melbourne, Victoria, Australia

Sennia Kyle wrote:
Ironically, I was going to go the other way. I think you need some black and whites on simple, darker (but not black) backgrounds. smile

Personally, I won't even open an image that looks too dark!

Oct 23 14 02:14 am Link

Photographer

Risen Phoenix Photo

Posts: 3779

Minneapolis, Minnesota, US

chixpix wrote:

Personally, I won't even open an image that looks too dark!

Then you would be missing a lot especially 5 of my 13 +18 POTD images. I often shoot black models against deep grey walls and then process in black and white. Those images are spectacular

Oct 23 14 04:29 am Link

Photographer

Lee_Photography

Posts: 9863

Minneapolis, Minnesota, US

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/141005/18/5431f5dda0345_m.jpg
This has to be your best image in your portfolio
What do you need, as good as this photo is; I bet you can even take it to the next level.
Try this as a studio style headshot, what I am trying to get across, if you look at your eyes there is just a small catch light in the middle of your eyes, with studio style lighting the photographer would use a large soft box or shoot through umbrella set at an angle that would produce a much larger catch light.

Wish you well

Oct 23 14 05:35 am Link

Photographer

Lallure Photographic

Posts: 2086

Taylors, South Carolina, US

I think most of what you have is glamour related. Your answer is simple........add images from your other genres, and when you add those genres, do not take the glamour approach to them.

i.e. for lingerie, shoot a fashion look, and not a glamour look.

Oct 23 14 06:38 am Link

Model

D A N I

Posts: 4627

Little Rock, Arkansas, US

Sennia Kyle wrote:
Ironically, I was going to go the other way. I think you need some black and whites on simple, darker (but not black) backgrounds. smile

I enjoy black and white photos smile

Oct 23 14 12:55 pm Link

Photographer

Nor-Cal Photography

Posts: 3720

Walnut Creek, California, US

Danielle Reid wrote:
I want to know what shots are needed.

You need shots taken by me.  BTW (in jest), I am still mad at you for not picking me up at the Little Rock airport; is it because I insisted on staying at your place and insisted that your brother leave for a few days?.

Oct 23 14 02:57 pm Link

Model

D A N I

Posts: 4627

Little Rock, Arkansas, US

Nor-Cal Photography wrote:

You need shots taken by me.  BTW (in jest), I am still mad at you for not picking me up at the Little Rock airport; is it because I insisted on staying at your place and insisted that your brother leave for a few days?.

Wait what?

Oct 23 14 03:10 pm Link

Photographer

Nor-Cal Photography

Posts: 3720

Walnut Creek, California, US

Danielle Reid wrote:
Wait what?

Back when, you said:  "I've got boobs. Let's grab some pizza."  And I said: "With an invitation like that, I would be grabbing something other than pizza".

https://assets.modelmayhem.com/images/smilies/lol.png

Oct 23 14 03:29 pm Link

Model

D A N I

Posts: 4627

Little Rock, Arkansas, US

Nor-Cal Photography wrote:

Back when, you said:  "I've got boobs. Let's grab some pizza."  And I said: "With an invitation like that, I would be grabbing something other than pizza".

https://assets.modelmayhem.com/images/smilies/lol.png

Oh wow, I hardly remember that convo lol

Oct 23 14 03:38 pm Link

Photographer

Nor-Cal Photography

Posts: 3720

Walnut Creek, California, US

Danielle Reid wrote:

Oh wow, I hardly remember that convo lol

Your reply was: My kinda guy!

Oct 23 14 04:00 pm Link

Photographer

garrinevan

Posts: 120

Atlanta, Georgia, US

I would say better locations, more interesting locations....looks like you've done a lot of photo shoots indoors, but shooting on mostly black or white backdrops gets old after awhile imo. More location photography (more outdoors!) where the photographer uses a shallow depth of field (ie: blurred background). I'm not seeing a lot of depth/dimension in the scenes in your photos - like there is no more than 3' to 6' behind you, which is making your photos appear more flat. Agree with the comment about color. A lot of that can be accomplished with both good styling and good location scouting.

More varied angles, more shots from a distance that capture the entire scene, with you as part of that scene (as opposed to all closer-in shots).

Oct 23 14 04:23 pm Link

Model

D A N I

Posts: 4627

Little Rock, Arkansas, US

Thanks everyone. I'll see if I can maybe connect with a fashion photographer soon. I never really had an interest in fashion modeling but it wouldn't hurt to try something new

Oct 26 14 04:35 pm Link

Photographer

DLH Photo

Posts: 344

Seattle, Washington, US

I would suggest trying outdoor locations.

Oct 26 14 05:35 pm Link

Model

Minh-Ly

Posts: 41

Paris, Île-de-France, France

Hi Danielle,

I'm not a photographer, but I can give you my opinion as a fellow model. I find that you awesome curves, but you have too much glamour and lingerie pictures. Your port is missing of diversity. Also, if I find that your red hair stands out too much which feel that your look is always the same.
You are gorgeous and so you would advise you to get some artistic nudes or bodyscapes, some natural light outdoor or studio shots, some shots in black and white and get some TFs with great quality photographer for some stunning pictures of you.
Hope this helps you.

Oct 27 14 05:22 pm Link

Model

D A N I

Posts: 4627

Little Rock, Arkansas, US

MLT Model wrote:
Hi Danielle,

I'm not a photographer, but I can give you my opinion as a fellow model. I find that you awesome curves, but you have too much glamour and lingerie pictures. Your port is missing of diversity. Also, if I find that your red hair stands out too much which feel that your look is always the same.
You are gorgeous and so you would advertise you to get some artistic nudes or bodyscapes, some natural light outdoor or studio shots, some shots in black and white and get some TFs with great quality photographer for some stunning pictures of you.
Hope this helps you.

Thanks for the advice. I changed my hair but I have no photos with the new style since I've been busy with other projects. I'll try to add more artistic stuff although glam and lingerie is what I'm usually hired for. We'll see...

Oct 29 14 10:32 am Link

Photographer

F O R B E S

Posts: 576

New York, New York, US

you're missing quality.

Oct 30 14 04:51 pm Link

Model

D A N I

Posts: 4627

Little Rock, Arkansas, US

F O R B E S wrote:
you're missing quality.

Thank you

Oct 31 14 12:43 am Link