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Photographer

David Sheldrick

Posts: 719

London, England, United Kingdom

I have been working at my computer all day on a big project and need a break.

I have decided to take a one hour break to take a look at other peoples portfolio and hopefully give some useful advice on what you should look to improve upon to get you a step ahead.

I have worked in America, Europe and Asia so ask away, if you have any specific questions dont hesitate to shoot them at me.

My photographic background www.davidsheldrick.com

David

EDIT: Will slowly work through these in my spare time

Nov 18 14 10:41 am Link

Photographer

Laurence Moan

Posts: 7844

Huntington Beach, California, US

I'll take you up on that.

As far as questions go… what's the project? If you don't mind.

TIA

Nov 18 14 11:16 am Link

Photographer

Images by MR

Posts: 8908

Vancouver, British Columbia, Canada

Yes plz.

Nov 18 14 11:29 am Link

Model

kaydooms

Posts: 79

Toronto, Ontario, Canada

Ill take it!

Nov 19 14 06:58 am Link

Model

2027869

Posts: 787

Mandurah, Western Australia, Australia

Would love to know.

Nov 19 14 07:07 am Link

Photographer

Studio 17B

Posts: 46

Waterdown, Ontario, Canada

Can't wait - thx

Nov 19 14 12:23 pm Link

Photographer

PhotoByWayne

Posts: 1291

Toronto, Ontario, Canada

How do you market yourself to prospective clients?

Nov 19 14 12:27 pm Link

Makeup Artist

Sandra Valero

Posts: 293

Madrid, Madrid, Spain

Pleeease please I could do with some advice!! ^_^

Nov 19 14 03:14 pm Link

Photographer

Doug Bolton Photography

Posts: 784

Victoria, British Columbia, Canada

sign me up!

(You have a stunning portfolio!)

Nov 19 14 04:06 pm Link

Photographer

TDSImages

Posts: 1018

Salt Lake City, Utah, US

please tell me...

Nov 19 14 04:28 pm Link

Model

- Auroraa -

Posts: 178

Salt Lake City, Utah, US

If you still have time, I would LOVE to hear your opinion...

Always looking to improve!

Nov 21 14 03:45 pm Link

Model

Pauline Yee

Posts: 406

Calgary, Alberta, Canada

If you are still viewing portfolios, can you please look at mine?

Nov 21 14 03:49 pm Link

Photographer

David Sheldrick

Posts: 719

London, England, United Kingdom

Laurence Moan wrote:
I'll take you up on that.

As far as questions go… what's the project? If you don't mind.

TIA

Hi Laurence,

You are getting some pretty good images but I feel that if you worked on some  more interesting colour grading on your images you can really elevate them.
Also in your case I would cut your portfolio down to just 5-6 of your strongest and contact agencies for new faces and if you arent using a stylist already I think that will really benefit your work.
You can get good headshots but maybe try working on a 6-10 image series with a team and see how that goes?

Nov 22 14 04:51 am Link

Photographer

David Sheldrick

Posts: 719

London, England, United Kingdom

Images by MR wrote:
Yes plz.

Your images are mediocre and you need to shoot more. You should try maybe finding photographers that you love or certain image series that you like and try to emulate them. Your images need more interesting posing/fashion/composition. Try looking at the work of Guy Bourdin or Bruce Weber for some inspiration. Some of their shots are very simple but still absolutely awesome.

Nov 22 14 04:56 am Link

Photographer

David Sheldrick

Posts: 719

London, England, United Kingdom

kaydooms wrote:
Ill take it!

Hi Kay,

If you want to make money doing this your going to have to spend money. So far you dont have a strong enough headshot, half body of full body. If you can get a strong set of these images you can scrap the rest of your images.

I suggest hunting down the best 2-3 photographers in your area and see if you can get a relatively cheap shoot with them with a stylist make up artist and hair stylist. Otherwise you might spend ages testing with pretty average photographers getting pretty average images.

Nov 22 14 04:59 am Link

Photographer

David Sheldrick

Posts: 719

London, England, United Kingdom

Emily Maddison wrote:
Would love to know.

Hi Emily, you wouldnt make a fashion model but you could do well in pin up, glamour and alternative.

Some of your images are nice but still not strong enough for me to want to work together. You need to test more with photographers so you can get more images and experience, and hopefully find your market.

D

Nov 22 14 05:03 am Link

Photographer

David Sheldrick

Posts: 719

London, England, United Kingdom

Brian Paul Photography wrote:
Can't wait - thx

Hi Brian,

Your work is actually quite cool, I like your choice of models and your images are well balanced. I suggest maybe trying to work on a more substantial project, maybe doing a really urban 6-10 look image series shooting in the streets with a cool model and a team? I think that focusing on creating a strong set of images that all stick together is the next step.

Nov 22 14 05:07 am Link

Photographer

David Sheldrick

Posts: 719

London, England, United Kingdom

PhotoByWayne wrote:
How do you market yourself to prospective clients?

Hi Wayne,

I have a large body of work covering all kinds of concepts and aesthetic styles. I try to fill in all the gaps in my body of work if I see them, and also try to emulate anything new and fresh that I see that I would like to have in my portfolio.
You have to shoot to the point where you have developed your own particular style that only you can deliver and that is what will really attract a client.

When I have a client get in touch I will customise my portfolio, for example if Nike contact me, I will reduce the amount of high fashion im showing and put in more fitness images. If it is a skin product company I will throw in alot of headshots and beauty images.

I shoot alot of editorial for magazines which is the best way, not only because of the exposure from the magazine, but over time you will get to meet loads of people working in the industry and I actually find most of my clients come through recommendations through people I have worked/ tested with in the past.

I hope this helps! Clients can be a tough question as certain areas might have smaller/larger industries and so different methods will be more effective.

Nov 22 14 05:15 am Link

Photographer

David Sheldrick

Posts: 719

London, England, United Kingdom

Sandra Valero wrote:
Pleeease please I could do with some advice!! ^_^

Hi Sandra,

You need to be more careful about what colours you are choosing, and blend them more carefully when applying it. Your make up looks quite heavy in most of your images, your top row are the best. The make up in your fourth image is brilliant, its well balanced and works with the fashion and the models bone structure really well.

You need to cut your portfolio down, their are quite a few images there that  I feel bring down your portfolio and it could be much stronger with just 6-8 of your absolute best.

You should also look at finding photographers who have specialised in beauty.

D

Nov 22 14 05:49 am Link

Model

Axioma

Posts: 6822

Antwerp, Antwerp, Belgium

oh yes please, I could really use your insight.

Nov 22 14 07:33 am Link

Model

Torttunaattori

Posts: 320

Helsinki, Uusimaa, Finland

Hi David! Could you take a look at mine also?

Nov 22 14 09:52 am Link

Photographer

ShapeTheLight

Posts: 270

Garner, North Carolina, US

Go for it..

Nov 22 14 10:02 am Link

Photographer

Jorge Kreimer

Posts: 3716

San Cristóbal de las Casas, Chiapas, Mexico

Very nice website!

Mine is www.gershonkreimer.com
My commercial and editorial is in the "password" section, in case you'd like to see it. Pass is jkreimer

I'm using "Gershon" as my artist name, and eventually moving that stuff to www.jorgekreimer.com as per the advice of my agent.


Thank you in advance.

Nov 22 14 11:10 am Link

Photographer

Visual Poetry Journey

Posts: 38

Toronto, Ontario, Canada

Would love your feedback on mine.

New to MM, and have been focused on fashion for a few months - did street photography and landscapes before that.

Thanks!

Nov 23 14 12:09 am Link

Photographer

tenrocK photo

Posts: 5486

New York, New York, US

Let's go!

Nov 23 14 01:55 am Link

Model

Destiny Noir

Posts: 49

Clarksville, Tennessee, US

Would love to know

Nov 23 14 10:42 am Link

Model

Blaire_

Posts: 343

Portland, Oregon, US

I would be so grateful smile

Nov 23 14 12:14 pm Link

Model

Anita1993

Posts: 316

Venlo, Limburg, Netherlands

Would like to know smile

Nov 23 14 01:27 pm Link

Photographer

Paige Addams

Posts: 21

Brugge, West Flanders, Belgium

I would love to know smile

Nov 23 14 02:47 pm Link

Photographer

MKanji

Posts: 422

Los Angeles, California, US

Oh im curious too!

Nov 24 14 11:33 pm Link

Photographer

juliarabkin

Posts: 782

Rochester, New York, US

I just wanted to say I really like your work after looking through your portfolio.

Nov 25 14 12:00 pm Link

Model

Elyse Nicole Craft

Posts: 41

Tampa, Florida, US

please?

Nov 25 14 12:08 pm Link

Model

Stephanie Ezekiel

Posts: 53

Miami Beach, Florida, US

Feedback would be great smile

Nov 30 14 05:25 am Link

Photographer

thigpenimages

Posts: 538

Houston, Texas, US

Would love a critique! Always down for one.

Dec 01 14 03:42 pm Link

Model

Kyra Mangual

Posts: 87

Houston, Texas, US

me too ")

Dec 01 14 03:52 pm Link

Photographer

Joseph William

Posts: 2039

Chicago, Illinois, US

Take a look

Dec 01 14 03:57 pm Link