May 30, 2008 10:48am Four aspects to a formal photograph: framing, focus, flatness, and time. Here - you are working on three of the four - and it shows. The framing/composition is great. i like it tight. It adds power and energy. The focus / depth of field - keeps the eyes on her face - and not lingering beneath her bra. The flatness - is good too... no distortion from wide angle lenses...
