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Model

Mey Lynn

Posts: 25

Oklahoma City, Oklahoma, US

comment pwease

Sep 08 05 10:11 pm Link

Model

Mey Lynn

Posts: 25

Oklahoma City, Oklahoma, US

ill comment yours if you comment mine

Sep 08 05 10:11 pm Link

Photographer

Justin

Posts: 22389

Fort Collins, Colorado, US

Here you go, but you don't need to comment on mine. Understand that I'm a hack art guy, not one of the polished professionals you see here. Add that to the fact that I don't work with models under 18, and you may well not care what I write.

Interesting shots, from my perspective. A couple of them didn't do much for me, but a few of them, I liked. As a prospective photographer, sorta, I like the Russel Underwood shots because they showed me what I'd be working with more than the others. (I know there will be critiques on the lighting in those shots, but they worked for me just fine.)

May I suggest some rewording in your portfolio introduction? I was getting a little motion sickness issues by the time I got to the bottom. I say that in jest, but it's a little hard to track.

Good luck.

Sep 08 05 10:22 pm Link

Photographer

Columbus Photo

Posts: 2318

Columbus, Georgia, US

It looks like you took those last few yourself, right?

Paul

Sep 09 05 01:40 am Link

Photographer

Michael Crouch

Posts: 457

San Diego, California, US

Some of the pics in your port or good... Some not so good. My advice, pic your 6 least favorites and remove them. It would be an improvement. As you get more quality pics from shooters you can build a strong port.

Sep 09 05 01:57 am Link