if everyone has a few extra minutes can you view my pictures and the ones you reallyreally like just comment and say nice picture or something along those lines? i only want to keep my strongest pictures up so i would appritiate the help! thanks!!! diane Jun 29 05 02:54 pm Link beautful eyes. your smile is a little bit forced in some of your pics, although you nailed it perfect in the blue topwith your hand in your hair. The mirror bathing suit one doesn't work for me I think your other swimsuit work is much better. Jul 04 05 01:12 am Link You have a great start...most of your images show your eyes off...a strong point for you. I agree the mirror swimsuit doesn't work....cropped off center...distant. The image with you at beach with your hair blowing is very good. You have a really good look and should do well, just keep putting your best images up....your on the right track. Jul 04 05 09:48 am Link You've got some lovely shots in there. You do indeed have great eyes and you photograph well, esp. in headshots. I agree with the folks who suggested removing the mirrored shot. Also, you might remove the pink top, blue jeans shot where you're seated, and the "chillin' as the sun sets" shot. Both make your lower region, esp. the thighs look bigger than they are and out of proportion. Jul 04 05 12:47 pm Link Don't get mad or your feelings hurt, but the main issue is that you have a few extra pounds if you want to be a commercial model. This is one of the reasons the mirror shot isn't working. Clients do not want to hire a model that they have to worry about what angle will she look good from. "Plus size" is size 14 or so, and in porportion. You are not even approaching that size. You would do well to get into a regular aerobics routine or hire a personal trainer. Jul 04 05 01:14 pm Link Posted by XtremeArtists: Xtreme, how could you!!! Be so brutally honest, that is. Jul 05 05 10:55 am Link try a few different looks. right now, you have 2 looks, serious and big smile. how about a subtle grin? indifferent? unconcerned? happy? aloof? pensive? my 2 cents. Jul 05 05 05:54 pm Link Posted by XtremeArtists: It's politically incorrect as hell of Xtreme to point this out, but he's right. Your portfolio has you in a couple of outfits and poses that would look SLAMMIN' (as GWC would say) if you dropped a few pounds. We're not talking "get anorexia" here, just that you look like you've got the kind of body that would turn into miles of hot curves with a bit of aerobics. Jul 05 05 06:00 pm Link Diane, yes, I think you have potential. I'm just trying to offer some constructive feedback. 5'6" makes you a couple of inches too short to be a fashion model, but I think you could do fine with lifestyle images for commercial print. I'm onboard with Brian's comments about showing more variety as well. Jul 05 05 06:06 pm Link Diane, DO NOT listen to Xtreme and Marcus! How many years have women spent trying to defeat the images created FOR US by a patriarchal society! God, this pisses me off! I spent most of high school trying to overcome anorexia because I wanted to look like something out of a freakin' issue of Vogue. Got down to 89 pounds and was frequently ill, not to mention how it temporarily screwed up my cycle. Anorexia puts women at risk for many health problems, including infertility and osteoporosis...and that's just a start. You are gorgeous! If you were in Texas, I would shoot you in a heartbeat. Variety in your portfolio will certainly help it along, I agree with that...and your height may dampen things for you in the high fashion industry...but so what?! There are so many different arenas opening up in modeling. Listen to what YOU want to pursue, not what others tell you is right for you. Change NOTHING about your size unless YOU want to do that; please don't allow your actions to be dictated by insensitive males who continue to view women as objects. Only in America...*hanging her head* Jul 05 05 06:52 pm Link If she is looking for commerical work, she will have to look the part. It's the same reason I can't be a male model. I don't look the part. Just look through any commercial agency's portfolio for yourself. I don't make the rules, consumers do. You are barking at the wrong dog. Jul 05 05 06:55 pm Link It's time to change the rules of the game, and the more women step up to bat on the field, the more they're GOING to change. How do we begin to change them? By saying that we're happy with how we look...we ain't changin' it for nobody...and if they don't like it, it's their loss. Then we move on and don't look back! Jul 05 05 06:59 pm Link Posted by Moonsbreath: I think the best way to change a system is from within. Jul 05 05 07:07 pm Link What't the point in following the rules, making yourself as average as possible so that nothing is inoffensive. Yeah, you'll fit right in with the pack. Do what you want, but all my favorite models stand out as completely different from the industry standards. Jul 05 05 07:13 pm Link Posted by Moonsbreath: Hey, thanks. Really. What a dumb-ass thing to say - here's someone asking for advice and commentary and a couple people give it. Just because you don't like what we had to say you're gonna wade in and say "DON'T LISTEN TO THEM"?? Maybe next you'll tell her not to ask for advice and only to listen to you. I spent most of high school trying to overcome anorexia because I wanted Why don't you start a separate thread about your unfortunate personal problems? If I recall, this was the thread where she publicly and openly asked for advice about modelling. Spewing a bunch of politically correct rhetoric about patriarchy is so 80's. Jul 05 05 07:19 pm Link Posted by Steven Abel: I agree standing out from the pack is important, but one should do it in a manner that is benefitial. Jul 05 05 07:20 pm Link Hey, I didn't wade in...I stomped in. Make no mistake about that. And no, I AM NOT using this as a forum for my personal problems. I'm explaining the influence that these impossible industry standards and your "harsh voice of reality" have on an impressionable young female mind. You're telling me this is "so 80's"! I would refer to your comments and attitude as positively Neanderthal. Personally, I'd rather be stuck in the 80's! Jul 05 05 07:25 pm Link Man, I can't believe all the HEAT that is going on here about this!!! Look, here's the deal: when I'm shooting for Perfect-10 magazine, I gotta be shooting perfect-10's right? It's as simple as that. You gotta have SLAMMIN' curves, a big round butt, a little bitty waist, and nice natural b(o)(o)bies if you're gonna be a Perfect-10. Moonsbreath, hey, you wanna be a Perfect-8 or Perfect-9, be my guest!!! It's all good. The line for TFP with the GWC forms to the left! GWC Jul 05 05 07:29 pm Link Posted by Moonsbreath: I have already stated I agree with some of what you have to say from a societal point of view, but this is a modeling forum. Jul 05 05 07:33 pm Link Ok, thanks for putting me on the spot. I think I was all concept and no reality there. I'm wracking my brain though. Nadja Auermann has a very disproportionate body but she uses it to her advantage by becoming a leg girl. How about the incredible shrinking Sophie Dahl before the industry gave her a complex? I loved her earlier images. Marina Dias who doesn't hide her tattoos. I want to say Karen Elson but I must as much as I want to say she is different, the fact is everything about her is pretty much industry standard. Ok, I'll hide now. I'm just some high school graduate hack with a love of fashion magazines. Jul 05 05 07:34 pm Link Posted by Steven Abel: You are onto something with your photos. Keep shooting. Jul 05 05 07:36 pm Link Posted by GWC: I know I don't have any experience to back it up. I haven't had a paying photography related job in my life. However I have to believe that taking pictures of those perfect 10s over and over is just boring. I'd rather shoot a girl who is energetic and works with the camera, can take instruction and understand what I want. If she happens to have a big ass, I'll just slap an art tag on it and charge extra. Jul 05 05 07:37 pm Link Let me just add to that. Perfect 10 is just that. As much as we like to say that beauty is in the eye of the beholder, the truth is that perfection has been defined and patented and is being churned out on assembly line style. It's boring. It's what you expect. There is nothing to it but what the photographer brings to the image. I prefer a model who will bring something more. Every shot should call for a different look not the same girl with a different name. Jul 05 05 07:40 pm Link Posted by Moonsbreath: I noticed. Your response was rather "over the top" considering that Xtreme and I were about as tactful as it's possible to be about such a sensitive subject. I'm sure you feel that your rudeness is justified - obviously this is an emotional issue for you. And no, I AM NOT using this as a forum for my personal problems. Of course not. Which is why you immediately fired off with "I" "me" "me" "I" and references to your unfortunate past. Sure, you're not using this as a forum for your personal problems - that's why you didn't mention them, right? Right. I'm explaining the influence that these impossible industry standards and your "harsh voice of reality" have on an impressionable young female mind. I answered a question from a young want-to-be professional about her profession. Those "impossibe industry standards" as you put it are not impossible at all. Get real for a second, take a deep breath, and put your agenda down. The girl wants to be a model and she's 34-26-34 and weighs 122. I think both Xtreme and I suggested she drop a few pounds. Not become an anorexic crazed ranter - in fact I even said "we're not talking anorexia, here" and pointed out that she'd look fantastic if she could tighten up a little bit. Neither of us suggested that she looks terrible right now, did we? Neither of us said, "forget being a model, you're too fat" did we? Jul 05 05 07:41 pm Link Now this is interesting. Now, we can talk about art... Posted by Steven Abel: To you, it may be boring. It depends entirely on the viewer, doesn't it? Who are you to say perfection is boring? Who are you to say you'd know perfection if the gods dropped 16 tons of it on your head? It's what you expect. There is nothing to it but what the photographer brings to the image. You're just mouthing platitudes. I've seen a fair number of issues of Perfect-10 back when I had a subscription and I'll assure you that all the models are different. Some are pale-skinned, some dark. Some are angular, some curvy. Some are cool, distant, and reserved-looking. Some look at the camera with a cryptic expression in their eyes. Some stick their butt up at the camera. Whatever. There is tremendous diversity in one issue of Perfect-10 and I can prove it to you. How? I prefer a model who will bring something more. Every shot should call for a different look not the same girl with a different name. I think you're babbling mealy-mouthed garbage without thinking what you're saying. Perhaps, you think, you can play the "sensitive 90's male" to Evil Politically Incorrect Marcus' foil, or something. You're trying to disagree with a position (that Xtreme and I have willy-nilly taken) that you wish weren't true, so you're throwing up a smokescreen of fine-sounding platitudes that can't survive a second glance. Jul 05 05 08:07 pm Link Posted by Steven Abel: Nadja had a "perfect" 36-25.5-35.5 figure and weighed a "perfect" 119lbs. Jul 05 05 08:10 pm Link Posted by Steven Abel: Are you stoned, Dude? It RAWKS!!! Jul 05 05 08:13 pm Link Posted by Marcus J. Ranum: Have you seen a picture of her? She's all gams and a smile. Not that I am complaining. Jul 05 05 08:28 pm Link Posted by Marcus J. Ranum: I won't pretend to know what I am talking about. I say what I think when I see it. I look at modern photography and 99% of the models bore me. *yawn* Sorry. Perfection is boring I don't care how many different poses it takes. What draws my eyes is someone doing something *different*. I'm not trying to play the sensitive male. Truth be told I tend toward the worst of the fashion extremes. I like the emaciated glamazons that by their very nature of existing draw your eye and amaze you. It may not be pretty, but it is definitely interesting. Twiggy and Edie. That's my thing. I won't push it on girls though because I've found something interesting in everyone. Jul 05 05 08:32 pm Link This is a very fun discussion I think. I hope the original poster enjoys it as well. Obviously she must hold some potential as a model to set off such a debate. I only raised the issue of weight because I think the realities of commercial modeling need to be considered. I tried to do it in a relatively tactful way, for me at least. I think she has to play her odds and decide what is going to be the most productive avenue for her in the long run. Jul 05 05 08:34 pm Link Posted by Marcus J. Ranum: I hate to take over this thread with our wrangling though. If you want it to be a pissing match then why don't we talk in by private message so people don't have to listen to our crap. Jul 05 05 08:35 pm Link Posted by GWC: Sorry about that flooding. We need a multi-quote. Jul 05 05 08:37 pm Link Posted by Steven Abel: Posted by GWC: Sorry about that flooding. We need a multi-quote. GWC stands for Guy With Camera. If you look at his ports and read his comments, you will find it very enjoyable. Don't get too worked up. Jul 05 05 08:39 pm Link Posted by Steven Abel: Posted by Marcus J. Ranum: I hate to take over this thread with our wrangling though. If you want it to be a pissing match then why don't we talk in by private message so people don't have to listen to our crap. Diane has 3 posts. I don't see her returning to this thread any time soon. I actually think you and Marcus can find some common ground if you keep at it. Jul 05 05 08:41 pm Link Posted by XtremeArtists: I won't. I'm also not that up in arms about the weight issue. Like I said I like the waif look personally which isn't even what you were suggesting to this model. Jul 05 05 08:44 pm Link Posted by XtremeArtists: Lol. True. I'm more than willing to try. If he shows me wrong, then I'll admit it. I'm stubborn though. I actually thought when I first read his comments that we were agreeing. Who knows. We'll see where this leads. Jul 05 05 08:45 pm Link Posted by Steven Abel: Posted by XtremeArtists: I won't. I'm also not that up in arms about the weight issue. Like I said I like the waif look personally which isn't even what you were suggesting to this model. I think it's part of a healthy debate to raise as many sides of the issue as possible. There are always more than two sides. Marcus and I seem to be in agreement, but I don't see you and Moonsbreath arguing the same point, so we really have a few different sides being raised. Jul 05 05 08:49 pm Link Posted by XtremeArtists: No doubt. It'd be boring if we all liked the same thing. You remind me of Diane though. I feel bad since I have sort of taken over her thread and haven't said anything about what she asked. The problem is I don't feel comfortable enough in my own knowledge to critique another. Diane, I can say I really only like your thumb but don't know enough to say why. Your other images really just don't grab me. Someone metioned the one with your hand in your hair. That is a little better, but is just flat and unemotional to me. I say try other photographers especially if you have been using the same one or two over and over. People think that modeling is just looking pretty but there really is a lot to it. Sorry Diane. Jul 05 05 08:54 pm Link Posted by Steven Abel: Xtreme's right - we're saying the same thing. See, I think the difference is that where you see "boring perfection" I see infinite layers of detail. Nadja actually had nearly exactly the same measurements as Christy Turlington - are they both boring perfect clones? Hell no! Jul 05 05 08:58 pm Link Posted by Steven Abel: Posted by XtremeArtists: No doubt. It'd be boring if we all liked the same thing. You remind me of Diane though. I feel bad since I have sort of taken over her thread and haven't said anything about what she asked. The problem is I don't feel comfortable enough in my own knowledge to critique another. Diane, I can say I really only like your thumb but don't know enough to say why. Your other images really just don't grab me. Someone metioned the one with your hand in your hair. That is a little better, but is just flat and unemotional to me. I say try other photographers especially if you have been using the same one or two over and over. People think that modeling is just looking pretty but there really is a lot to it. Sorry Diane. I agree with you here. There could be more emotion...more acting. She needs to be enjoying something for example, and we are just looking on... catching her in the moment. Jul 05 05 09:04 pm Link |