Forums > Critique > Based on your Avatar... Would I work with you?

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Eric Peek wrote:
Is this post for real?

I would maybe work with you... I like the background colors and that it's blurred nicely. The model looks pretty- lovely hair and smile. However, it looks a bit like a snap shot

Jan 02 14 05:02 pm Link

Model

Rusty Angel

Posts: 438

Brisbane, Queensland, Australia

Hmmm I'm not too sure. Check me out?

Jan 02 14 05:03 pm Link

Photographer

NR Creations

Posts: 208

San Luis Obispo, California, US

I'll have a go!

Jan 03 14 09:44 pm Link

Photographer

Mark Reeder

Posts: 627

Huntsville, Ontario, Canada

Ok, I'm in.

Jan 04 14 04:56 am Link

Makeup Artist

Gloria R. MUA

Posts: 106

Miami, Florida, US

I would work with me.

Jan 04 14 04:59 am Link

Photographer

unexpected captures

Posts: 272

San Francisco, California, US

your thoughts?
thank you much!

Jan 04 14 02:29 pm Link

Model

Tuck C

Posts: 5

San Francisco, California, US

Sure!

Jan 05 14 02:27 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Brandow Photography wrote:
I would like to see this.

Yes. I love rooftop shoots! I like the lighting, color scheme and the dress/shoes on the model. The angle in which you are shooting is not the most flattering for the model though. While I like her hair style and posing, the expression looks quizzical/confused.. Not good. And the composition of the background is great, but model is placed right in the center of the image- Would be good if she was moved off-center a little.

Jan 05 14 07:56 pm Link

Photographer

Mister Sifuentes

Posts: 1078

San Antonio, Texas, US

shot.

Jan 05 14 08:00 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

AshleeMarie wrote:
Would love to know smile

Yes, you have a lovely look. I like your hair, beautiful light blue eyes and the outfit looks great on you. Nice posing as well. Expression looks a bit sad with a bit of longing- suits the image.

Lovely:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140101/20/52c4ee19b4189_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/131231/13/52c333b873fd6_m.jpg

Jan 05 14 08:57 pm Link

Model

Anthony White

Posts: 30

Brook Park, Ohio, US

Id like to hear your opinion smile

Jan 05 14 10:32 pm Link

Photographer

Raw Artistry

Posts: 29

Faribault, Minnesota, US

sure?

Jan 06 14 02:19 am Link

Model

Sharife

Posts: 2

Atlanta, Georgia, US

Interesting, would you work with me?    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=C42cmPHxEO8

Jan 06 14 02:23 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Trisha May Photography wrote:
moi?

No. This image is not my style.. I'm not a dark gothic kind of person. I do like the black lace outfit that is on the model but think the posing isn't great. The expression is decent though- kind of haunting.

Maybe:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130719/21/51ea1082d3e78_m.jpg

Jan 06 14 10:06 am Link

Model

David E Simmons

Posts: 133

New York, New York, US

me plz

Jan 06 14 10:10 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

SEI Photos wrote:
I'll play if you're still up for it.

Maybe. I don't like the pose especially the elbow that is directly facing the camera. But I do like the model's dress and how it looks on her- shows off her figure really well and the expression is candid.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/131022/07/52668cc722073_m.jpg

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/34185745 18+

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/34213462 18+

Jan 06 14 11:07 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Vulpes Photography wrote:
Do me.. :-)

Yes, I like the black and white tones, as well as the lighting. Nice smooth quality in the image as well and the model is beautiful.. Really like her soft hair and style, and you've captured her features well. I just am not too keen on the surprised expression.

Lovely:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/131230/16/52c20fef4597f_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/131227/20/52be511676464_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/131227/20/52be560a868f0_m.jpg

Jan 06 14 01:16 pm Link

Model

aisha__lee

Posts: 7

Providence, Rhode Island, US

heyyy what about me?

Jan 06 14 02:24 pm Link

Photographer

French Studio

Posts: 16

Melbourne, Victoria, Australia

Why not smile

Jan 06 14 02:30 pm Link

Model

Adrienne N

Posts: 1

El Paso, Texas, US

ok! im game!

Jan 06 14 02:36 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

JQuest wrote:
I'll play... smile

Yes. I like the black and white tones and the clarity of the image. The model looks great in that outfit- the posing is pretty good but the crop is a bit too tight. Expression could be more engaged as well.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/131101/11/5273f88354109_m.jpg

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/34304192 18+

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/34304193 18+

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/34769664 18+

Jan 06 14 02:58 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Elementum Draconic wrote:
would love to know

No this is clearly a snap shot and not a very good one- It's blurry, lighting is over exposed and the crop could be better. Your expression looks peeved - not attractive.

Maybe use this as your avatar for now:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/131231/20/52c39910cdb67_m.jpg

Jan 06 14 04:35 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Depth Persuasion wrote:
Your honest advice is always welcome.

Thanks,

-DP

Yes. It's a bit muddied and hard to make out the details in the smaller view but I like it- The lighting is nice and I like the little spots in the center. Also, the models are showing real emotion and love that is really touching.

Beautiful:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/131231/18/52c3793b4d40b_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130607/19/51b293de1918b_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/131212/22/52aaa8d814673_m.jpg

Jan 06 14 08:48 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

ADOImaging wrote:
Well if your still doing this. Love your opinion.

Yes. This image is very well done. Love the white background and the model's outfit- sexy lingerie with cute leather jacket, etc. The posing is flawless (except that the model's head looks a bit too far back_ and you've captured the model's figure beautifully.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/131118/12/528a721eee6ad_m.jpg

Jan 07 14 11:27 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

usb photography wrote:
refreashed my image

No. It's a bit like a snap shot and I don't love the color scheme but the model looks pretty good- I like the outfit on her and you've captured her legs (that go on for days!) well. Decent posing on the table. Just not the best background or cropping. And expression isn't great.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/131002/19/524cd89c861ae_m.jpg

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/25837737 18+

Jan 07 14 02:36 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Manoj Ramanchira wrote:
Tada !! :-)

I would say maybe. I like the lighting and colors but the model's expression looks crazy, which is not that attractive. Love the hair style and model's makeup. The outfit is okay but the scrunchie bracelet should not be there.

Better:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/131215/22/52aea3a238909_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/131215/22/52aea34e2ac50_m.jpg

Jan 07 14 05:09 pm Link

Model

NYX

Posts: 11

Kissimmee, Florida, US

Please evaluate me to see if I'm worth your time and inspiration. Thank you!

Jan 07 14 08:20 pm Link

Model

Michelle White

Posts: 39

Moline, Illinois, US

my turn!!!

Jan 08 14 09:24 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

nicholasdavid wrote:
Building up my portfolio, I'm still new here wink

Yes. The background is kind of messy but actually kind of goes with the overall image. The model is beautiful- Really good posing, great outfit etc. You've captured her figure really well. Also like the hair style and lovely facial features. Expression could be a bit more engaged though.

Also nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/131225/21/52bbbf656a4ac_m.jpg

Jan 08 14 12:38 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Rusty Angel wrote:
Hmmm I'm not too sure. Check me out?

No. The image is too blurry and your makeup/hair style isn't that great. The pose is just there and you have a bra strap showing. Also your expression is kind of upset/blank.

Nice:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/32419706 18+

Jan 08 14 02:05 pm Link

Artist/Painter

KisaraelElementum

Posts: 4

Varna, Varna, Bulgaria

Would you?

Jan 08 14 03:28 pm Link

Model

Porsche Patrice

Posts: 8

Los Angeles, California, US

interested ... ?

Jan 08 14 03:54 pm Link

Model

Shirin Brigitte

Posts: 379

Sydney, New South Wales, Australia

even with this avi? smile

Jan 08 14 07:22 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Nora Ramirez wrote:
I'll have a go!

Yes, beautiful colors and background. The model is also lovely - Nice bikini she has on and what looks like a good figure but the pose is such that the viewer is unable to see the model's body so would like to see more of that. Also I don't love the big hat but otherwise, the image looks good. I also like the model's hair style and friendly genuine smiling expression.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/131019/12/5262d9627f035_m.jpg

Jan 09 14 10:59 am Link

Photographer

Vincent Arthur

Posts: 901

Red Bank, New Jersey, US

Yes I would!

Jan 09 14 11:06 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Mark Reeder Photography wrote:
Ok, I'm in.

No, as this is not really my style- I'm not a fitness model. I do like the outfit on the model but the pose is a little awkward and the expression is okay... Quite strong.

Maybe:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/131231/13/52c3329f4fd68_m.jpg

Jan 09 14 11:41 am Link

Makeup Artist

Sandra Valero

Posts: 293

Madrid, Madrid, Spain

I'm in!!! big_smile Pleasie big_smile

Jan 09 14 12:03 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Gloria R. MUA wrote:
I would work with me.

No. As a MUA I need to see the style of makeup that you do and this model's eye makeup etc is covered by her large sunglasses. I do see the color of the model's is nice but that's not enough to go on.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/100323/09/4ba8ee6865ee3_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120331/13/4f776d9d9603c_m.jpg

Jan 10 14 08:20 am Link

Model

Delightfully Jessica

Posts: 18

Brentwood, California, US

Yes, what about me?

Jan 10 14 08:32 am Link

Photographer

Chixpix

Posts: 427

Melbourne, Victoria, Australia

I'm ready!

Jan 10 14 08:43 am Link