Forums > Critique > Based on your Avatar... Would I work with you?

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Ashley Murray  wrote:
I would like an opinion

Probably. It's a little on the natural side - Nice lip color and shine though. Nice blending of the eyeshadow and pretty thick lashes. I would like to see a bit more color and blush though.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/131008/03/5253dec712c63_m.jpg

Dec 01 13 06:59 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Forty-Six and 2 wrote:
I'm new to MM, interested to see your response smile

It's a very different style than I'm used to shooting but I sort of like it, so yes. I like the color scheme a lot and the model is quite beautiful. The props are nice- especially like the roses in the model's hair, as well as the lovely necklace. Model's dress is also pretty and she has nice features. Expression is a bit sad which I think goes with the image.

Also:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/131122/22/52904c0295d7d_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/131124/00/5291b240b0450_m.jpg

Dec 01 13 07:52 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

marcsh wrote:
New avatar, could you say a few words?

Yes. Even though the pose, especially hands are very strange, I do like the smooth quality of the image and the way that the model's dress, figure, facial features and hair look.

Lovely:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130322/06/514c61aacaca8_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121120/20/50ac5d4476c8b_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121007/05/50717c79962bf_m.jpg

Dec 02 13 10:05 am Link

Photographer

MarkGreenStudios

Posts: 15

Columbia, South Carolina, US

interested

Dec 02 13 10:48 am Link

Digital Artist

Doppelganger20

Posts: 16

Arlington, Virginia, US

Be honest, I can take it!!!! hehe...

Dec 02 13 01:36 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

marcovalle wrote:
867-5309

Yes. I like the smooth quality of the image and the colors scheme- nice pops of color, especially the model's red hair. Pretty hair and I like the way it frames the model's face in the image. Nice makeup and facial features, though expression looks quite blank. Also, showing more neck would make the capture even better.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/131021/09/52655484671f4_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/131117/22/5289b9b852c31_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/131021/09/526554834dbaf_m.jpg

Dec 02 13 08:41 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Angel in Training wrote:
Let me know! smile

Yes. I like the posing and the wind in the hair look. Nice top and figure but expression could be more engaged.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/131015/20/525e0b0839e12_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/131127/17/529698bd9fc6b_m.jpg

Dec 03 13 08:49 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

M A B wrote:
Shoot! smile

Yes. Lovely close up shot of you and I really like the makeup. Nice eyes and other facial features as well. Only thing is expression is a little dead/blank.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130821/19/52157c553d0bc_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110601/20/4de70487b0dab_m.jpg

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/33003152 18+

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/24905388 18+

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/24060697 18+

Dec 04 13 11:22 am Link

Photographer

JDR_Photo

Posts: 1

Kansas City, Missouri, US

Just started shooting again and hoping for a critique. smile

Dec 04 13 02:23 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Funfreedom wrote:
Ok ... What do you say

I would say maybe. I do like the top part of the image where you've captured the model's face beautifully... Nice features and love the wind in hair look. The model appears to have a lovely expression as well. The pose, though, is awkward especially the arm in the way of the model's figure. Also I am just not a fan of black background with black shirt.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121227/18/50dd0ae31f390_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121227/18/50dd0b2aa84d6_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121227/18/50dd0a939b279_m.jpg

Dec 04 13 09:21 pm Link

Photographer

C G Photography

Posts: 150

Ukiah, California, US

How about mine?

Dec 04 13 10:00 pm Link

Model

Krystal-Dawn

Posts: 1

Stevenage, England, United Kingdom

Mine?

Dec 05 13 02:21 am Link

Model

Jademd

Posts: 2

Montreal, Quebec, Canada

Would love a critic smile

Dec 05 13 03:06 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Art by Asher wrote:
please?

Maybe. Nice lighting and colors. I like the pose by the model, as well as the style/color of her hair and lovely facial features. I just don't like the expression- looks peeved.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/131128/22/529834620068a_m.jpg

Dec 05 13 07:59 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

JustinSteven wrote:
Just updated my port. Feedback would be great! THX

Yes. I like your look- very handsome and you have strong features. Also like the color scheme and your smart outfit. Expression is decent as well.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/131129/13/5299036a66a7f_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130728/02/51f4eaf09d0b5_m.jpg

Dec 05 13 11:03 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Rayne Beaux wrote:
Me?

It's a maybe. The expression kind of ruins it for me- it looks quite blank and I always hate that. And the makeup is a bit too unique for my style. While I do like the eyes- nice blue eyeshadow, liner and mascara are done well... I just don't like the orange. Though the necklace is lovely and I like your hair- nice updo/style.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/131108/10/527d2d734ad01_m.jpg

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/34368112 18+

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/34368320 18+

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/34368115 18+

Dec 08 13 06:48 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

James F Jones wrote:
bunny

Yes. I like the color scheme and style. Especially the jacket and candy necklace, as well as the makeup. Nice hair style, posing, and expression!

Love:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/131130/15/529a79db36285_m.jpg

Dec 08 13 08:16 pm Link

Photographer

The Dave

Posts: 8848

Ann Arbor, Michigan, US

Me?

Dec 08 13 08:32 pm Link

Photographer

Mark Callen Photography

Posts: 260

Buffalo, New York, US

My avatar is new…so please let me know!
Thanks!

Dec 08 13 08:38 pm Link

Photographer

PicturePerfectImage

Posts: 81

Edmonton, Alberta, Canada

Would you?

Dec 08 13 08:45 pm Link

Photographer

Hidden Hills Photography

Posts: 116

San Antonio, Texas, US

Ok, I'll throw myself into the mix...

Dec 08 13 08:48 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

PicturePerfectImage wrote:
Would you?

Yes. You've captured the model's figure and there's a real sexiness to the model/image. Love the lingerie and the model's makeup and hair. Pose and expression is a little forced though.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130206/17/511309b05ed52_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130206/17/51130a0e16217_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130526/08/51a2309093356_m.jpg

Dec 09 13 10:16 am Link

Photographer

John Weidow

Posts: 10

Geronimo, Oklahoma, US

You are the athletic nature type. I suggest more natural settings and loosen up. Move, dance enjoy the camera winking at you and capturing your true beauty. Move to the rythyms around you make the photographer shoot 100 shots, but capture the true you.

John
https://www.modelmayhem.com/Johns Photography

Dec 09 13 10:57 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Personal Photograph wrote:
I'd be interested to know.

Maybe. It has the feel of a snap shot almost but I do like the smoothness of the image. I like the outfit on the model but think the black wings are too much and not really seamlessly worked into the image. Also, while the model's makeup and hair is nice, the expression looks quite bored/blank and the pose a little awkward.

Lovely:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/33094790 18+

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/33094793 18+

Dec 09 13 01:09 pm Link

Model

Assimillano

Posts: 501

Tangier, Tangier-Tétouan, Morocco

it would be nice to know big_smile

Dec 09 13 01:12 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Billy Thompson III wrote:
Sounds good, Let me know what you think!

I would say maybe. It looks like you have a good look but not sure the image is that good - It's a bit blurry, background is too busy, color is a little off, and not sure about your expression or the bike... Also can't really see your physique with that baggy outfit.

Maybe:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/131125/13/5293bf0501e9e_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/131125/13/5293beef24a32_m.jpg

Dec 09 13 06:28 pm Link

Model

Melanie Elysia

Posts: 1

Boston, Massachusetts, US

Me Me ME! big_smile

Dec 09 13 06:31 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

MarkGreenStudios wrote:
interested

Yes. I like the composition and background. Also love the model's outfit, pose, hair, makeup and features. Expression could be more engaged though.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/131202/10/529cd8650b3ea_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/101120/07/4ce7eb59c136a_m.jpg

Dec 09 13 07:19 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Doppelganger20 wrote:
Be honest, I can take it!!!! hehe...

Yes. I like the style of the image- Nice color scheme and location.. And the animation of the model is quite sexy- Cool outfit, hair, expression.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/131119/17/528c0cd380a2f_m.jpg

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/34625191 18+

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/34630399 18+

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/34580884 18+

Dec 09 13 07:45 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

JDR_Photo wrote:
Just started shooting again and hoping for a critique. smile

Maybe. I like the lighting and overall color scheme but dislike the blurriness of the image. Model looks decent though - Just would like to see her face better and have a more engaged expression.

Dec 10 13 08:58 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

C G Photography wrote:
How about mine?

Yes. I really like the color scheme and smooth quality of the image, though it is a tad over-retouched. Nice makeup, hair and facial features. Expression is decent.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/131205/20/52a153fd5bd25_m.jpg

Dec 11 13 11:56 am Link

Model

starla dawn

Posts: 161

Beaufort, South Carolina, US

interesting! I'm curious

Dec 11 13 12:03 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Krystal-Dawn wrote:
Mine?

Yes. Beautiful colors and the makeup is flawless. I also like the softness of the image and your serene expression.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/131129/06/5298a3cb43fa7_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/131211/02/52a842beeb758_m.jpg

Dec 11 13 12:38 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Jademd wrote:
Would love a critic smile

No. This image almost looks like a snap shot. The yellow shirt isn't the best color for you and your pose is awkward, and your expression is just weird.

Maybe:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/131120/06/528ccc0571ee6_m.jpg

If the bottom half wasn't blurry:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121114/16/50a43b502e3bd_m.jpg

Dec 12 13 09:44 am Link

Model

Connie Rose

Posts: 48

Hatfield, England, United Kingdom

Id like to know what you think smile xXx

Dec 12 13 07:15 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

-The Dave- wrote:
Me?

I'm not sure. While I like the black and white tones, the texture and the bokeh of the background, the overall image doesn't entice me much. You've captured character well though.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120117/13/4f15eb192fbd4_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/100718/12/4c43580290f4a_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/090301/23/49ab83f575376_m.jpg

Dec 13 13 08:58 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Mark Callen Photography wrote:
My avatar is new…so please let me know!
Thanks!

No. While I like the black and white tones, it looks like a snap shot and the pose is very awkward- especially the elbow that's pointed directly to the camera. Also expression is not the best.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130409/20/5164dda160495_m.jpg

Also like the images with sunflowers in the Members Only folder.

Dec 16 13 01:00 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

PicturePerfectImage wrote:
Would you?

Yes. Very sexy outfit and model. I really like the lingerie and you've captured the model's figure and beauty well. Pretty hair style and facial features. Decent posing. Expression looks a little forced though.

I like:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130206/17/51130a0e16217_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130217/08/51210b5be088c_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130526/08/51a2309093356_m.jpg

Dec 16 13 01:38 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Happy Dragon Photo wrote:
Ok, I'll throw myself into the mix...

I would say yes. While the image is a bit busy, I like it overall. Nice warm lighting, colorful and I really like the model's style/outfit. As well as her makeup and hair. Good posing and expression too!

Nice:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/34549195 18+

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/32199844 18+

Dec 16 13 10:35 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Assimi Adnane wrote:
it would be nice to know big_smile

I would say maybe. It seems like you have strong, handsome features but the angle is not great- not very flattering. I do like your style though and the background looks nice. Expression looks a bit forced though.

Dec 17 13 03:30 pm Link