Kelli Maire wrote:
Im still pretty new, but ill give it a try

Hello not listable yet but a here's a few critiques you need to practice your expressions you kind of play it safe a little timid I think its time you get really creative look at other models that inspire you and try to figure out what you got!! You have potential now WORK!

CMx Photo wrote:
Go go go!

Hello again It was almost a no then I saw this and yes it was listed! Why this is not your avi is beyond me, it is a very strong shot.

Nam Vuong wrote:
I'll give it a go!

Not yet you do not have much in your port but pretty much four headshots although I do like your avi the best the model reminds me of Zelda Keep shooting!

B R U N E S C I wrote:
Tell me!

Yes! I have seen your port many times def listed you before and this time is no different

Listed!

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/19139636 18+
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/23920236 18+
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/28176218 18+

Allie Glenn wrote:
i wanna play

Almost a no but this shot is lovely



Listed!

Loona Wynd wrote:
I've added some new shots to my port.  What do you think?

Not listable but def better! I see you are leaning toward the nude art which works for you keep going!

My fave

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/28638476 18+

MD Photography II wrote:
am I

Not yet you have a lot of shots that bring down your port IMO Try trimming it down

My fave

Tom Linkens wrote:
The new shots I mentioned:

First one made it they are all lovely but that one just wow

Kayla Anne Thomas wrote:
Meow meow

frotography wrote:
Hit me

I had a feeling I was going to like your style and I do however you are not listable yet but I feel if you work on editing a bit more it will really bring your art to life (I do retouching as well and I would love to make this shot sharp PM me if interested)

My fave

Ellie Fisher wrote:
I am new at photography I wanna play!

Work on more variety and try again get creative remember photography is about making art!!

My fave

Cynthia Serrano  wrote:

Work on more variety and try again get creative remember photography is about making art!!

My fave

Thank you :-) I like simplicity in styling but everyone is different ;-)

Ellie Fisher wrote:

Thank you :-) I like simplicity in styling but everyone is different ;-)

You can do beauty shots but look at photographers that specialize in that genre and how they execute it

Devign Elements wrote:
I'd be interested in your thoughts. Thanks!

Hello you need to work on lighting and composition you are not listable yet but keep shooting I would remove your logo as your avi we want to see your work not only your name I would suggest making this your avi

Cynthia Serrano  wrote:
Not listable but def better!

The way I see it the only way to get better is to practice infront of the camera and off the camera (for poses). 

Cynthia Serrano  wrote:
I see you are leaning toward the nude art which works for you keep going!

Thanks.  I thought it would be fun to try and explore and I really can't wait to do some more shots.

Cynthia Serrano  wrote:
My fave

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/28638476 18+

That seems to be one of the more popular of the new photos.  I've thought about taking out the color version of the shot, because they are basically the same.

Tilcia wrote:
Since I'm new to MM ... what does listable mean?

Listable means being added to any of my current lists

Unfortunatly you are not there yet keep shooting and work with better photographers here is my fave

P Figueroa Photography wrote:
My turn

Hello again!! This was super close but not yet keep shooting you will be listable soon

Fave (this and your avi)

jwagers wrote:
me??

Not yet but you have potential keep shooting and work on your expressions also you stated you only accept paid work I think you should try some TF to build your port up and show us why you should be paid

This is my fave

Cynthia Serrano  wrote:

Listable means being added to any of my current lists

Unfortunatly you are not there yet keep shooting and work with better photographers here is my fave

Ahh thanks Cynthia.  Yeah most of my pics are from the composites shot for agencies.  That pic (one of my favs) was by Dan Howell and my avatar by Douglas Bizzaro (both in NYC).  Love them both, they're super awesome photographers.

Cynthia Serrano  wrote:
Sorry but not yet work with better photographers and work on your expressions and posing

This was my fave



I suggest you get rid of this makes just a snapshot and you don't need it

Thank you very much! I did get rid of it and working with a lot more slowly but surely! Critique appreciated!

Erica America wrote:
Yes?

Your port really surprised me based on your avi you look very innocent girl next door and these shots show me the opposite very kick ass

listed



I didn't list this but it is awesome as well

Mirror With A Memory wrote:
Count me in!

Almost a no but you have hidden gems in your port

so LISTED!

Tims Solution wrote:
How about me?

Very close you have clean work but nothing really made me say wow get creative and work with better models and you will be listable soon

This was a great concept def my fave