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Andrea Rosu

Posts: 1670

San Francisco, California, US

I have some down time, and I'm always looking to be inspired.  With that being said, what feeds my belly and heart (amongst other part of me!) is erotic art.

I will give you my thoughts on one image you consider to be erotic.  Please link it if it shows boobies or other delicious parts.

I will focus mostly on: if I consider it to be erotic, why yes or no.

And last but not least...this is solely my opinion.  I realize that it's quite subjective, and please take it with the grain of salt my thoughts may hold!! wink

Jun 28 12 04:50 pm Link

Photographer

Nor-Cal Photography

Posts: 3719

Walnut Creek, California, US

I consider this to be erotic. Perhaps not the best image in my port, though.

18+

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/p … 0#25428050

Thanks for your opinion.  smile

Jun 28 12 05:32 pm Link

Photographer

S-U-B-L-I-M-E

Posts: 1557

Victoria, British Columbia, Canada

Jun 28 12 05:40 pm Link

Model

Andrea Rosu

Posts: 1670

San Francisco, California, US

Nor-Cal Photography wrote:
I consider this to be erotic. Perhaps not the best image in my port, though.

18+

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/p … 0#25428050

Thanks for your opinion.  smile

You're welcome...

I think there's potential there...but all in all, I don't regard it as erotic.  I think there is a dearth of emotion present.  And for me, erotica is all about the emotion.

Jun 28 12 05:41 pm Link

Model

Andrea Rosu

Posts: 1670

San Francisco, California, US

S-U-B-L-I-M-E wrote:
18+


https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/p … 67#5031667

I want to start by saying that I still fantasize about the day we get to work together!! smile

Apart from that...the image has erotic aspects to it...but I feel like it's very posed.  There's nothing wrong with "posing"...but it shouldn't be apparent to me.

Jun 28 12 05:43 pm Link

Photographer

Eros Fine Art Photo

Posts: 3097

Torrance, California, US

I'd say this is my most erotic image.

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/1 … e33f39.jpg  (18+)

Jun 28 12 05:45 pm Link

Photographer

S-U-B-L-I-M-E

Posts: 1557

Victoria, British Columbia, Canada

Andrea Rosu wrote:

I want to start by saying that I still fantasize about the day we get to work together!! smile

Apart from that...the image has erotic aspects to it...but I feel like it's very posed.  There's nothing wrong with "posing"...but it shouldn't be apparent to me.

Thank you kindly
I agree our collaboration would be great
What of my images strike you as most erotic
If you have time smile
Darren

Jun 28 12 05:46 pm Link

Photographer

FootNote Fotography

Posts: 18809

Gainesville, Florida, US

Jun 28 12 05:46 pm Link

Photographer

Syosset Studio

Posts: 296

Syosset, New York, US

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/100303/12/4b8ec4cf7edc7.jpg

Jun 28 12 05:51 pm Link

Photographer

Photo Visions

Posts: 1034

Cape Coral, Florida, US

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/1 … l#/8292691   18+

This is the only erotic shot in my port.
All the rest are porn.

Jun 28 12 05:53 pm Link

Model

Andrea Rosu

Posts: 1670

San Francisco, California, US

Eros Fine Art Photo wrote:
I'd say this is my most erotic image.

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/1 … e33f39.jpg  (18+)

I love the focal point!  And absolutely, this is a very erotic image...done beautifully.

Since I'm in the habit of being particular...I find that her right hand doesn't match the intensity and tension in her left.  Her right hand kind of seems positioned there without much going on.  Does that make sense?

Jun 28 12 05:54 pm Link

Photographer

Five Moons

Posts: 152

San Antonio, Texas, US

Jun 28 12 05:58 pm Link

Model

Andrea Rosu

Posts: 1670

San Francisco, California, US

S-U-B-L-I-M-E wrote:

Thank you kindly
I agree our collaboration would be great
What of my images strike you as most erotic
If you have time smile
Darren

You have a number of them!
This one from an aesthetic perspective.  There's nothing explicitly erotic about it.  But she has such a delectable ass...that well...sometimes that's all a girl (at least this girl!) needs
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/p … 3#14005573

Her mouth, and expression overall, is what does it for me.  It's beautiful, seductive and sensual.
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/p … 15#7080015

This one almost has it.  What works is there's a candidness to it...as if you've captured a personal moment.  However, what doesn't work is the woman's expression apparent in the mirror.
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/p … 3#11929813

Jun 28 12 05:58 pm Link

Model

Andrea Rosu

Posts: 1670

San Francisco, California, US

FootNote Fotography wrote:
My shot at erotic.

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/p … 3#20083593

I would say it's erotic...absolutely.

What works is the natural feel of it.

However, my biggest criticism is that I've seen many (I mean MANY) images of a woman's face in the middle of what appears to be a big O.  There's nothing original about it.  The trick is to find a way to make it original...or at least interesting.

Jun 28 12 06:00 pm Link

Photographer

Eros Fine Art Photo

Posts: 3097

Torrance, California, US

YOU are a very astute and highly perceptive person.  You are definitely correct.  We were at a group shoot and my time with Amelia was up, so I shot this quickly.  That right hand has always bugged me, but it didn't seem to detract from the overall image, so I let it slide.

Thank you for the input.  I'd love to shoot with you one day.  smile

Jun 28 12 06:01 pm Link

Model

Andrea Rosu

Posts: 1670

San Francisco, California, US

Undercover Nudes wrote:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/100303/12/4b8ec4cf7edc7.jpg

I don't entirely get it.  She looks angry...and not sexy angry...but weird, "a little uncomfortable to see" angry. Sorry!

Jun 28 12 06:01 pm Link

Model

Andrea Rosu

Posts: 1670

San Francisco, California, US

Photo Visions wrote:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/1 … l#/8292691   18+

This is the only erotic shot in my port.
All the rest are porn.

It's sweet and pretty and lovely and makes me smile. But it doesn't produce more of response for me.  Maybe your porn would!

Jun 28 12 06:02 pm Link

Model

Andrea Rosu

Posts: 1670

San Francisco, California, US

Five Moons wrote:
18+

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/28056877

I would say yes...it's quite erotic!

I think for one...it's simple, and the lines are beautiful (and so is his tush!)...and it's simply a pleasure to gaze upon him.

Jun 28 12 06:03 pm Link

Model

Andrea Rosu

Posts: 1670

San Francisco, California, US

Eros Fine Art Photo wrote:
YOU are a very astute and highly perceptive person.  You are definitely correct.  We were at a group shoot and my time with Amelia was up, so I shot this quickly.  That right hand has always bugged me, but it didn't seem to detract from the overall image, so I let it slide.

Thank you for the input.  I'd love to shoot with you one day.  smile

big_smile Thank you on all counts!  I'm glad to know that what I see makes sense to others!

And it would be a pleasure, sir!! smile

Jun 28 12 06:04 pm Link

Photographer

Photo Visions

Posts: 1034

Cape Coral, Florida, US

Jun 28 12 06:06 pm Link

Photographer

Five Moons

Posts: 152

San Antonio, Texas, US

Andrea Rosu wrote:

I would say yes...it's quite erotic!

I think for one...it's simple, and the lines are beautiful (and so is his tush!)...and it's simply a pleasure to gaze upon him.

He's even more of a pleasure to photograph smile

Jun 28 12 06:06 pm Link

Photographer

Art Silva

Posts: 10064

Santa Barbara, California, US

Not sure if I can consider this erotic or not. Her look can certainly suggest an erotic mood but I'm on the fence about how to label this. The shot was taken in the flow of the shoot and we really weren't looking to do erotica at the time but sometimes it trickles in a bit  wink
This is posted on the models port btw;
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/28569988 18+

Jun 28 12 06:18 pm Link

Model

Andrea Rosu

Posts: 1670

San Francisco, California, US

Photo Visions wrote:
OK, try this.

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/1 … l#/9199583     18++

Meh...it's a woman sitting with her legs spread...it's pretty boring.  Don't get me wrong, she's a cute girl with a lovely body.  But that's all it is.

Jun 28 12 06:18 pm Link

Model

Andrea Rosu

Posts: 1670

San Francisco, California, US

Art Silva Photography wrote:
Not sure if I can consider this erotic or not. Her look can certainly suggest an erotic mood but I'm on the fence about how to label this. The shot was taken in the flow of the shoot and we really weren't looking to do erotica at the time but sometimes it trickles in a bit sometimes wink
This is posted on the models port btw;
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/28569988 18+

For one, it's a lovely shot!  I would say that there is definitely a subtle eroticism to it.  It's in her face, the way her hair is tousled, the way she looks at you.

Jun 28 12 06:19 pm Link

Photographer

White Lace Studios

Posts: 1719

Mesa, Arizona, US

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/14988965  +18


There are a few others there too

Jun 28 12 06:20 pm Link

Photographer

Moodscapes

Posts: 422

Sydney, New South Wales, Australia

This is one of my faves from my couples folder:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/17900342

Jun 28 12 06:21 pm Link

Photographer

Art Silva

Posts: 10064

Santa Barbara, California, US

Andrea Rosu wrote:
For one, it's a lovely shot!  I would say that there is definitely a subtle eroticism to it.  It's in her face, the way her hair is tousled, the way she looks at you.

That's exactly how I was taking it with the face, hair and hands... so I'm not off base with my self evaluation of this... Thank you Andrea smile

edit: what I think I need to do to step up my Erotic Game is to get off my butt and work with you already  wink

Jun 28 12 06:22 pm Link

Photographer

C.C. Holdings

Posts: 914

Los Angeles, California, US

Jun 28 12 06:24 pm Link

Photographer

David Westlake

Posts: 1539

Mansfield Center, Connecticut, US

Jun 28 12 06:25 pm Link

Model

Andrea Rosu

Posts: 1670

San Francisco, California, US

White Lace Studios wrote:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/14988965  +18


There are a few others there too

Tis alright...but truth be told, I don't get much from it...feel nothing due to it.  Because of that, I don't regard it as erotic.

Jun 28 12 06:26 pm Link

Model

Andrea Rosu

Posts: 1670

San Francisco, California, US

Moodscapes wrote:
This is one of my faves from my couples folder:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/17900342

The woman has beautiful expression and she's clearly connecting to him and the moment.  I find him to be a bit awkward.  Overall, I find the angle and the foreshortening effect to put me off.

Jun 28 12 06:27 pm Link

Model

Andrea Rosu

Posts: 1670

San Francisco, California, US

Art Silva Photography wrote:

That's exactly how I was taking it with the face, hair and hands... so I'm not off base with my self evaluation of this... Thank you Andrea smile

edit: what I think I need to do to step up my Erotic Game is to get off my butt and work with you already  wink

You're welcome...

And I know...really now!!! wink Whatcha waiting for??!! big_smile

Jun 28 12 06:28 pm Link

Model

Andrea Rosu

Posts: 1670

San Francisco, California, US

C.C. Holdings  wrote:
Oh, I can play here

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/p … 0#28840600

There's potential here.  I like her body language and pose.  I feel like it's missing however.  It's bordering on moving beyond a pretty picture of a pretty woman...but doesn't quite get past that.

Jun 28 12 06:30 pm Link

Model

Andrea Rosu

Posts: 1670

San Francisco, California, US

David Westlake wrote:
How about this one?

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/p … 2#25133372 18+

Meh...it's alright...but I fail to see the eroticism in it.  It's a nice picture of a cute girl...with a boob in the shot.  It doesn't make me feel anything.

Jun 28 12 06:30 pm Link

Photographer

Moodscapes

Posts: 422

Sydney, New South Wales, Australia

Andrea Rosu wrote:
The woman has beautiful expression and she's clearly connecting to him and the moment.  I find him to be a bit awkward.  Overall, I find the angle and the foreshortening effect to put me off.

Fair enough - thanks for the considered feedback :-)

Jun 28 12 06:31 pm Link

Photographer

C.C. Holdings

Posts: 914

Los Angeles, California, US

hm, what about this

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/p … 5#28412595


or anything in my portfolio?

Jun 28 12 06:33 pm Link

Photographer

MicMar Photography

Posts: 503

Tampa, Florida, US

Jun 28 12 06:38 pm Link

Photographer

David Westlake

Posts: 1539

Mansfield Center, Connecticut, US

Jun 28 12 06:39 pm Link

Model

Andrea Rosu

Posts: 1670

San Francisco, California, US

C.C. Holdings  wrote:
hm, what about this

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/p … 5#28412595


or anything in my portfolio?

Actually...I like the last image of the three.  I personally feel like it can stand alone.  I also think it's very delectable and alluring.

Jun 28 12 06:41 pm Link

Photographer

C.C. Holdings

Posts: 914

Los Angeles, California, US

Andrea Rosu wrote:

Actually...I like the last image of the three.  I personally feel like it can stand alone.  I also think it's very delectable and alluring.

I have more erotic that I've never posted, I should, since I book that using this portfolio

Jun 28 12 06:43 pm Link