Forums > Critique > Does your Avatar make me want to see your port?

Model

MsNeet

Posts: 35

Melbourne, Victoria, Australia

ill play...how about mine?

Apr 10 14 09:09 pm Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6906

Champaign, Illinois, US

MsNeet wrote:
ill play...how about mine?

Very nice quality, beauty and contrast. The cleavage is the final hook......yes!

Apr 10 14 09:23 pm Link

Model

MsNeet

Posts: 35

Melbourne, Victoria, Australia

Peach Jones wrote:

Very nice quality, beauty and contrast. The cleavage is the final hook......yes!

Thanks smile

Apr 10 14 09:28 pm Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6906

Champaign, Illinois, US

MsNeet wrote:

Thanks smile

so welcome! Keep up the great work!!!

Apr 11 14 07:25 am Link

Makeup Artist

Sandra Valero

Posts: 293

Madrid, Madrid, Spain

I'm interesed in this!! smile

Apr 12 14 02:45 pm Link

Photographer

Kane

Posts: 1647

London, England, United Kingdom

??

Apr 12 14 02:51 pm Link

Model

Morganfisher

Posts: 63

Raleigh, North Carolina, US

I was think of changing mine so shoot. And if you could tell me what one would be better that would be supppper helpful and make you an awesome person

Apr 12 14 02:54 pm Link

Photographer

Alpha Photography

Posts: 9

Glendale, California, US

curious

Apr 12 14 05:35 pm Link

Photographer

Seattle photo

Posts: 199

Seattle, Washington, US

Love to know what you think...

Apr 12 14 07:21 pm Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6906

Champaign, Illinois, US

Sandra Valero wrote:
I'm interesed in this!! smile

The muted color in this artwork means I would most likely pass it over.

Apr 12 14 08:06 pm Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6906

Champaign, Illinois, US

kane wrote:
??

good tease and good hook. The only problem I can see is perhaps the monochrome will not stand out initially. So I will go with 60-75% yes

Apr 12 14 08:07 pm Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6906

Champaign, Illinois, US

Morgandanielle wrote:
I was think of changing mine so shoot. And if you could tell me what one would be better that would be supppper helpful and make you an awesome person

I like your choice of color, and your lips look fabulous. The only problem is the subject.....you......are a bit smaller in that shot. IMO that is probably your 3rd best avi choice in your port. With these being your 2 best:

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140326/17/5333737e4a417_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140412/16/5349d28bce39a_m.jpg

and perhaps this if you crop it in to eliminate the open/negative space

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140323/07/532ef1dee57a1_m.jpg

Apr 12 14 08:14 pm Link

Model

lovekia143

Posts: 18

Road Town, Tortola, British Virgin Islands

let me know

Apr 12 14 08:20 pm Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6906

Champaign, Illinois, US

Sasoon Amerian wrote:
curious

love the location and her legs are amazing. Listed the photo BTW. If you would drop in on her a bit more, I think it would serve as a better avi. Right now I will say 75% yes

Apr 12 14 08:22 pm Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6906

Champaign, Illinois, US

Seattle Wes wrote:
Love to know what you think...

While I do like her smile, just not enough of a hook to draw me in

Apr 13 14 10:51 am Link

Photographer

Fashion Beauty Photo

Posts: 954

Lansing, Michigan, US

Sound like fun. smile

Apr 13 14 05:16 pm Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6906

Champaign, Illinois, US

lovekia143 wrote:
let me know

sorry but it is too dark to even stand out.

no

Apr 13 14 06:37 pm Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6906

Champaign, Illinois, US

Andrea Acailawen wrote:
Sound like fun. smile

It is a fabulous shot of a beautiful woman. Good contrast. I will say 50/50

Apr 13 14 06:40 pm Link

Photographer

Fashion Beauty Photo

Posts: 954

Lansing, Michigan, US

Peach Jones wrote:

It is a fabulous shot of a beautiful woman. Good contrast. I will say 50/50

Thanks! smile

Apr 14 14 09:15 am Link

Photographer

Commercial Works Photo

Posts: 276

Cuyahoga Falls, Ohio, US

Yes?  No?  Maybe?

Apr 14 14 10:16 am Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6906

Champaign, Illinois, US

Commercial Works Photo wrote:
Yes?  No?  Maybe?

Excellent use of red. That is a huge plus. Good use of skin and some cleavage.......75% yes

and for the record, I did look. Very very nice work!!

Apr 14 14 10:20 am Link

Photographer

Commercial Works Photo

Posts: 276

Cuyahoga Falls, Ohio, US

Peach Jones wrote:

Excellent use of red. That is a huge plus. Good use of skin and some cleavage.......75% yes

and for the record, I did look. Very very nice work!!

Thanks for the vote of confidence!!

Apr 14 14 10:22 am Link

Model

TonesJones

Posts: 10

Ontario, California, US

Does miine? smile

Apr 14 14 10:26 am Link

Model

Dea and the Beast

Posts: 4796

Saint Petersburg, Florida, US

Let's try this one. smile

Apr 14 14 10:28 am Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6906

Champaign, Illinois, US

TonesJones wrote:
Does miine? smile

Usually collages do not make good avatars. You are taking a very small photo and now making it even smaller. So the answer is no

Apr 14 14 10:50 am Link

Model

Julia Weber

Posts: 48

Indianapolis, Indiana, US

Thoughts?

Apr 14 14 10:53 am Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6906

Champaign, Illinois, US

Amadea T wrote:
Let's try this one. smile

I do like the concept of the shot very much. However, the look on your face is not very flattering. Because of that I would be inclined to pass your port over

Apr 14 14 10:59 am Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6906

Champaign, Illinois, US

Julia Weber wrote:
Thoughts?

Julia, you actually look like you are in pain in that shot. Because of that I would probably so no

Apr 14 14 11:00 am Link

Model

Julia Weber

Posts: 48

Indianapolis, Indiana, US

Peach Jones wrote:

Julia, you actually look like you are in pain in that shot. Because of that I would probably so no

I actually was in much pain. I was holding my foot to my back in heels. I'll keep it in mind.

Apr 14 14 11:01 am Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6906

Champaign, Illinois, US

Julia Weber wrote:

I actually was in much pain. I was holding my foot to my back in heels. I'll keep it in mind.

word to the wise......when you are in pain is probably not a great time for a photo shoot

:-)

Apr 14 14 11:07 am Link

Model

Julia Weber

Posts: 48

Indianapolis, Indiana, US

Given the fact that I was though, is it still pretty bad?

Apr 14 14 11:11 am Link

Photographer

Jerry Nemeth

Posts: 33355

Dearborn, Michigan, US

Peach Jones wrote:

I do like the concept of the shot very much. However, the look on your face is not very flattering. Because of that I would be inclined to pass your port over

I looked at her port.  smile

Apr 14 14 11:15 am Link

Photographer

Knight Vision Imaging

Posts: 54

Toronto, Ontario, Canada

Hey there.  I have done this before, but I chose a new avatar last night, your thoughts would be welcome.

Thanks.  smile

Apr 14 14 11:15 am Link

Model

Julia Weber

Posts: 48

Indianapolis, Indiana, US

Peach Jones wrote:

word to the wise......when you are in pain is probably not a great time for a photo shoot

:-)

Given the fact that I was though, is it still pretty bad?

Apr 14 14 11:16 am Link

Model

Cervezax

Posts: 152

Atlanta, Georgia, US

Interested!

Apr 14 14 01:15 pm Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6906

Champaign, Illinois, US

Cervezax wrote:
Interested!

It is nice, and I will go with 50-60% yes. IMO you have others in your port that might draw more attention.

Thanks for stopping by!!

Apr 14 14 01:21 pm Link

Model

RosieDemise

Posts: 64

Shepperton, England, United Kingdom

yes please x

Apr 14 14 01:27 pm Link

Model

Cervezax

Posts: 152

Atlanta, Georgia, US

Peach Jones wrote:

It is nice, and I will go with 50-60% yes. IMO you have others in your port that might draw more attention.

Thanks for stopping by!!

Thanks! Any suggestions on which?

Apr 14 14 02:38 pm Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6906

Champaign, Illinois, US

Knight Vision Imaging wrote:
Hey there.  I have done this before, but I chose a new avatar last night, your thoughts would be welcome.

Thanks.  smile

sorry, but at a glance I can't even tell what it is.

so the answer is no

Apr 14 14 02:58 pm Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6906

Champaign, Illinois, US

Cervezax wrote:

Thanks! Any suggestions on which?

Sure!

These:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/35731750
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/35731674
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/35726937
and if you crop this vertically:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/35432214

The thing is, you are extremely beautiful. The only thing wrong with your current avi is that we can't readily see that beauty because you are so far away. A model with your looks needs to use it to her advantage every step of the way.

Thanks for asking and best of luck!!

Apr 14 14 03:19 pm Link