Alright so now I am sick and I want something to do. Give me a photo and I will tell you what I like and/or dislike about it. Keep in mind I'm not a professional and it's just my opinion based on my aesthetic preferences. Let's make the cut off on this at 10 p.m. today, so that it doesn't go on forever. Jan 01 13 08:39 pm Link Might have to keep bumping it -_- Jan 01 13 08:43 pm Link Jan 01 13 08:45 pm Link Miroslava Svoboda wrote: This one please https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31128279 (18+) Jan 01 13 08:46 pm Link Jan 01 13 08:47 pm Link Jan 01 13 08:50 pm Link Jan 01 13 08:50 pm Link dhp wrote: I love the composition of this shot, her styling and the setting match perfectly. On thing is I would change the expression or try to evoke a different one from the model. Her current expression speaks "I'm making a business deal" to me but it should match what she's wearing which would be, "I think I'd like to seduce you right now" Jan 01 13 09:07 pm Link Jan 01 13 09:08 pm Link Jan 01 13 09:09 pm Link Solus wrote: This is actually amazing, very creative concept and I love it. I think I'd like to pose a challenge and have them all facing and trying to emote their part of love, faith, and hope. Jan 01 13 09:11 pm Link Autumn Rose Brightly wrote: Very lovely shot, i like the softness of the edit. Like the styling but it's missing something. There is a question I want to ask, "What are we doing here, why is she sitting there dressed like that?" Maybe some eyes contact or at least if the eyes are away some sort of movement or action would answer it for me. Jan 01 13 09:14 pm Link Jan 01 13 09:15 pm Link Jan 01 13 09:15 pm Link Brandon L Ingram wrote: Oh yes! Love it. The expression on her face and her tattoos. Great feel here, just what I would expect from a shot like this. Jan 01 13 09:16 pm Link Jan 01 13 09:19 pm Link Jan 01 13 09:19 pm Link Miroslava Svoboda wrote: Thank you. Jan 01 13 09:20 pm Link Poulsons Photography wrote: This shot confuses me a little. On one hand the shadows, her expression, and body language including the big syringe with dark liquid tells me that it's supposed to be dark theme or mood; which it does have a feel of. On the other hand her immaculate costume takes away from that darkness. If I only looked at her styling I would say she should be in a lighter setting doing a lifestyle shoot. So I would change the styling up a little. Jan 01 13 09:24 pm Link Jan 01 13 09:28 pm Link Jan 01 13 09:29 pm Link Miroslava Svoboda wrote: Good call. Thank you. Jan 01 13 09:29 pm Link Jan 01 13 09:32 pm Link Jan 01 13 09:34 pm Link MM Nudes wrote: Great edit; her pose and the background fit very well. Was the ribbon on her during the shot or was it added after? For some reason when I look at it I think after, it's a little stiff. I could be wrong and actually a soft ribbon on the model during a shot would take it up a notch. Jan 01 13 09:36 pm Link Bear wrote: Bear! I love this styling, the attitude in your pose and expression. It's one great combination. One thing I don't like it's all the white in the photo itself, think it would be much better without it. Jan 01 13 09:38 pm Link Miroslava Svoboda wrote: Well take me up a notch Miroslava .... I threaded the ribbon over her body while she laid on the bed. In hind sight it probably should have been draped a little more loosely over her breasts, but hindsight is 20-20! Jan 01 13 09:41 pm Link Vanisa Dimitrova wrote: Beautiful shot and a beautiful model. Love the hair in this and the expression matches the hair. Hands, I have an issue with hands that don't make sense. I know that many use hands in beauty shoots and it ads an element to the shot but in this case I think it distracts. You expression doesn't tell me they should be there. I think an arm extended in the direction of where the hair is going would make much more sense because the expression almost calls for someone to go with you somewhere or to look at something. I hope this makes any sense, sometimes it's hard to express what's going on in my head. Jan 01 13 09:42 pm Link I hope you feel better soon. Feel free to say anything you'd like, but keep in mind I am aware there are a number of older images, which I plan to replace as I get new pretties. Jan 01 13 09:44 pm Link MM Nudes wrote: Ok so it could be just what the ribbon was made of, there are some fabrics that fall a little softer and others that go over a little stiff. Jan 01 13 09:45 pm Link DougBPhoto wrote: Hi Doug! I would like you to pick an image that I would look at. I don't like doing the picking myself. Jan 01 13 09:45 pm Link Jan 01 13 09:46 pm Link Jan 01 13 09:48 pm Link Miroslava Svoboda wrote: Jan 01 13 09:50 pm Link Tracy Zabriskie wrote: Love the concept and the way how the model's hair and the horse's mane are swept aside. Great skies! Only one but, the crop, I think that I should be able to see the whole animal or at least it's head. The model isn't exactly the focus here, it's more like the model and the animal together. I don't want to get technical because I am not experienced in that but it seems that either it needs to be cropped tighter on a model or looser to include the second model. Jan 01 13 09:51 pm Link Miroslava Svoboda wrote: Alright!! High fives all round!!! Jan 01 13 09:53 pm Link DougBPhoto wrote: I really like this shot, i like her posing and her expression. I think the only thing I have an issue with is styling. The reason why I picked styling over posing is because you're a photographer so I believe you have your objective of creating a mood and feel of the photo established if it was a model i was doing this for I would say change the pose. Jan 01 13 09:57 pm Link Rik Image wrote: Thank you and Happy New Year to you as well! Jan 01 13 09:58 pm Link And that's a wrap, it's 10 p.m. no more new submissions but the discussion can continue Jan 01 13 10:00 pm Link Miroslava Svoboda wrote: Thank you! It does make sense. Jan 01 13 10:00 pm Link |