With regard to Composition Message (Mood, Feeling) Technique Thanks, Jan 13 13 11:21 am Link I like the overall image. But the white space on the left can be distracting. Traditionally an image should leave more space on the side the model faces. I think some creative shots can break the rule to make it more interesting. In this case there is nothing on the left and makes it more a distraction. Jan 13 13 09:54 pm Link Ted Wen wrote: +1 with this ^__^. Jan 13 13 10:02 pm Link I agree, the negative space on the left feels funny. I love the detail on the dress, wish I saw more in the chest area. I also would have liked to see the entire left hand. The dress covers the fingers. Jan 13 13 11:13 pm Link Thank you for your responses! Jan 14 13 08:14 am Link I'm liking everything about this picture but I'm not sure of the meaning and feel of the pose. Too weird to be natural, not weird enough to be juxtaposing the elegant, old fashioned styling. Jan 15 13 07:32 pm Link Excellent! Jan 15 13 08:57 pm Link The tones are rich and wonderful... it's well composed and the lines are great. Stunning photo. Best I've seen on MM in a while. Maybe ever. Jan 15 13 09:34 pm Link |