MatureModelMM wrote:
I would love to know your thoughts

I like you, I see you around the forums a lot, and I like what you say.
Your portfolio needs to be updated though. I think you need to come visit me, so we can take some nice pictures of you. No nudity required.

Axioma wrote:
Please, go ahead

Girl! You are rockin' it.
I'm digging the new underwater trend. I wish I were amazballs so I could work with you for freesies. But really, I'd feel bad not paying you, since you are obviously very talented. I've seen your port before, and you have definitely made huge strides forward. Keep it up!

Alannah The Stylist wrote:
why not?

So, is the job of a wardrobe stylist to make sure everyone has clothes and they don't look like they just crawled out of a dumpster? (Seriously though, do you just provide clothes? Whats the difference between you and a designer?)

Your port definitely shows that you can dress people and make them look shnazzy.

Penumbra Photography wrote:

So, is the job of a wardrobe stylist to make sure everyone has clothes and they don't look like they just crawled out of a dumpster? (Seriously though, do you just provide clothes? Whats the difference between you and a designer?)

Your port definitely shows that you can dress people and make them look shnazzy.

Well a designer makes the clothes, I don't. My job is create looks based off concepts/themes and client needs.Though, in some cases I wear many job hats prior to being on set and on set.

Images by MR wrote:
Yes plz..

I like your stuff, it's not bad. But it doesn't have a wow factor. Nothing in your port draws me in, it's very soft and unoriginal.

Pauline Yee wrote:
Me please.

I'll be nice since it seems like you are still pretty new to modeling. You have a nice look, but you really need to work on expressions and poses. And, if you are doing your own makeup, you should also work on that. Some of the styles of makeup make your eyes look sunken in and bad. Some of your images are blurry/out of focus, some look stiff or awkward, and some are okay.

This is my favorite of yours:


I'm not crazy about the crop, or your expression. But it's a nice image of you where you don't look to forced or bored.
Keep practicing, modeling is a full time job, if you're not working on it directly, you should be researching.

Michael R Photography wrote:
Tell me your thoughts please .

I can't decide whether or not I like your work. It's good, you have the skill down, but I don't know how I feel about the subjects.... hmmm

Ambiguity wrote:
I will be delighted to hear your feedback.

You have a pretty face, there is no denying that. But reading that you are (rarely) taking trade, and only accepting paid work, your port does not sell me to want to pay for your services. Your pictures are all over the place, I wouldn't be sure what I was getting if I hired you. You need to cut out all the unnecessary images and just keep the ones that will earn you money. Or do more TF to build up a better port.

I'd keep:




and this one (for now) just for a close up of your face:


Aside from the wedding ones, everything else is either blurry, blown out or bad (The triple B... Oh Noes!). Most of your portraits are blown out and lacking in texture, half the ones of you laughing are blurry. And the others are just poor quality all around. I'm not seeing a good reason to pay for your skill with this portfolio. Figure out what genre you want to model and research it. Learn poses and expressions matching it, then hire a good photographer and start your port over with those images.

Penumbra Photography wrote:
You have a pretty face, there is no denying that. But reading that you are (rarely) taking trade, and only accepting paid work, your port does not sell me to want to pay for your services. Your pictures are all over the place, I wouldn't be sure what I was getting if I hired you. You need to cut out all the unnecessary images and just keep the ones that will earn you money. Or do more TF to build up a better port.

I'd keep:




and this one (for now) just for a close up of your face:


Aside from the wedding ones, everything else is either blurry, blown out or bad (The triple B... Oh Noes!). Most of your portraits are blown out and lacking in texture, half the ones of you laughing are blurry. And the others are just poor quality all around. I'm not seeing a good reason to pay for your skill with this portfolio. Figure out what genre you want to model and research it. Learn poses and expressions matching it, then hire a good photographer and start your port over with those images.

Thank you for your feedback. Ironically, my main close-up is the one that gets me 3 - 5 paid assignments a week. I appreciate your input though!

J-PhotoArt wrote:
This ought to be interesting.

I'm pretty picky about nude work (mainly because I don't think most of the people shooting it do it well) but my gawd do I love this image:

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/38253024 +18
(I'm not a huge fan of the edit though)

All in all, I think you have some great images, and you have some not great images. I think you would benefit from a trimming of your port. But I like your style, and I like your creative side. I want to see more stylized shoots from you, your themed stuff is good.

TDSImages wrote:
Tell me...

These two I don't like:




Everything else I think is interesting. I like the creative stories in them. Some aren't the best technically, but I can look past that since they are intriguing otherwise. And I think that's the most important thing to retain as a creative individual, your imagination. I think you capture that well, keep at it. (I've seen your port before, and I think you've improved a lot since then, good work).

Penumbra Photography wrote:

These two I don't like:




Everything else I think is interesting. I like the creative stories in them. Some aren't the best technically, but I can look past that since they are intriguing otherwise. And I think that's the most important thing to retain as a creative individual, your imagination. I think you capture that well, keep at it. (I've seen your port before, and I think you've improved a lot since then, good work).

Thank you for your time and insight!

David Kirk wrote:
Sure, let me know what you think.

I love your work, very crisp and classy. You are obviously skilled, and your models are fantastic!

Vinny Kim wrote:
What do you think?

I'm not a fan of your style... Not to say that it's bad, but I don't personally like it.
I think some of the images have appeal outside of just the nudity, they are graceful and well done technically.

Layla_B wrote:
Let's start the stuff

Your new work is very nice. Your avatar is outdated and doesn't represent your talent very well. I assumed from it, you'd be a beginner, but looking at the first few rows in your port, I can see that's not true. I'd suggest updating your avi.

Penumbra Photography wrote:
Your new work is very nice. Your avatar is outdated and doesn't represent your talent very well. I assumed from it, you'd be a beginner, but looking at the first few rows in your port, I can see that's not true. I'd suggest updating your avi.

Thanks, I will
Do you maybe have any views on what you think is the weakest in my port?
I have some new work, but I'm never sure what to switch out..

Layla_B wrote:
Thanks, I will
Do you maybe have any views on what you think is the weakest in my port?
I have some new work, but I'm never sure what to switch out..

I'd ditch these:

(Too far away, and it's a little blown out. Too hard to see you. I do like the image, but in a model port, I don't know if it's your strongest.)


(Too far away, hard to see your face, not terribly interesting. not bad, but not amazing in your port)


(Can't see your face, doesn't sell you as a model very well. Unless I were hiring you for the bottom of your feet or the back of your head)


(I like the one of you laughing more.)


(And this one. I don't think it's a very good shot of you, your expression is bland, the outfit doesn't fit you nor does it match the scene of a chalk board. Over all not your best)


All my personal opinion, take from it what you will.

Penumbra Photography wrote:
I'd ditch these:
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All my personal opinion, take from it what you will.

thankyou ! I appreciate it.

Eric SUN wrote:
Yes; please.

156 images!
I only looked in the folder that auto opened when clicking on your port. You have nice stuff, but I'm not going to sift through 150 images.

Syrena Fury wrote:
Yes please.

You definitely have some interesting poses. But you need to work on expression, you have the same look in every picture.

KatrinaWhite wrote:
I'm always nervous to ask for critique since no one wants to hear criticism, but I am in process of refreshing my portfolio so critique would be good for me. Especially about which images I should keep and which I should replace.

Your work isn't really my style. Out of your port, this would be my favorite:

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/36758001  +18

Alexandra - C wrote:
??

I love this, do more of this!