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winking_wonder
Posts: 5,583
New York, New York, US


Phil Bartow Photography wrote:
If your not out of breath, I'm In !

No. While the location/background is beautiful, the framing of the model is not great and the model's face looks not as polished/smooth as the rest of her body. I will say you have captured her figure well but the pose of her head is not so good and the expression is weak.

Sep 18 13 09:06 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Lauren Arcadia
Posts: 15
Perth, Western Australia, Australia


I'm game
Sep 18 13 09:11 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
mjjay
Posts: 1
Sunnyvale, California, US


New to the game, but definitely in the game..
Sep 18 13 09:31 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
winking_wonder
Posts: 5,583
New York, New York, US


PAULDO wrote:
Would you work with me dear?

Yes. Normally I don't really like darker images, but these are done well especially the top two images. The model is lovely, and you've captured her figure really well. I like the poses, the hair in the wind look and the expressions are good- emotive. The bottom image is also decent- sensual and full of emotion as well.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130831/13/5222514aed55e_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110727/21/4e30df1a889c2_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120528/20/4fc441e473c3b_m.jpg

Sep 18 13 09:56 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Matrix Mark
Posts: 147
Maumee, Ohio, US


Wondering... work with me?
Sep 18 13 10:03 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
HChoi
Posts: 2
Hoboken, New Jersey, US


I'm down for this.
Sep 19 13 12:23 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Kortney Kesha
Posts: 16
Denton, North Carolina, US


I'll play smile
Sep 19 13 10:22 am  Link  Quote 
Model
winking_wonder
Posts: 5,583
New York, New York, US


VeronicaB wrote:
how about me?

No. This looks sort of like a portrait snap shot and the coloring is a bit off. The pose and composition is boring and though you have nice big eyes, the expression does not meet your eyes.

Maybe (even though it still looks like a snap shot... get more professional images!):
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130826/18/521c0318dad1e_m.jpg

Sep 19 13 01:30 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
winking_wonder
Posts: 5,583
New York, New York, US


FranklinElsey wrote:
I'd hope so..

Yes. Even though I can't make out how you look exactly, I do like this image. Nice bodypaint and great capture of the side of your face- You appear to be handsome with nice bone structure and features.

Like:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130913/06/52330e5d4606a_m.jpg

Sep 20 13 10:05 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
ChelseaChee
Posts: 9
Sydney, New South Wales, Australia


Yes, please....
Sep 20 13 11:46 pm  Link  Quote 
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Peter Jo
Posts: 11
Amsterdam, Noord-Holland, Netherlands


What about mine?
Sep 22 13 04:52 am  Link  Quote 
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Tremmy
Posts: 19
Nizhniy Novgorod, Nizhniy Novgorod, Russia


I'm back again smile
Sep 22 13 02:15 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Brittany Waldron
Posts: 33
Erie, Pennsylvania, US


I'll give it a go
Sep 22 13 02:17 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
juliarabkin
Posts: 548
Rochester, New York, US


me too
Sep 22 13 02:39 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
winking_wonder
Posts: 5,583
New York, New York, US


Photo by Darryl Cobb Jr wrote:
Would appreciate the feedback on this.

No. Though this is a dynamic portrait, I don't think the the pose or expression is that flattering and the model's arm/hands look disproportionately larger than the rest of his quite skinny body. Also not loving the outfit- the color pairing is not great.

I like:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130912/15/5232446be1e3a_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130903/20/5226af113767e_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130911/18/52311e400a390_m.jpg

Sep 22 13 09:40 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Becky Ward
Posts: 262
Crawley, England, United Kingdom


What about mine?

Becky x
Sep 23 13 06:23 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Courtney Virginia
Posts: 201
Atlanta, Georgia, US


Go for it
Sep 23 13 06:47 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Mr Rod P
Posts: 142
Vienna, Virginia, US


OK, I am in!
Sep 23 13 09:20 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
DFTBA Photography
Posts: 74
Waterbury, Connecticut, US


Giving this a try - im still starting out so please be gentle.
Sep 23 13 10:16 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Hardy Yuen
Posts: 9
Hồ Chí Minh City, Pomorskie, Vietnam


i'm in smile
Sep 23 13 11:35 am  Link  Quote 
Retoucher
RON IMAGES EDITED
Posts: 482
Miami, Florida, US


Would you????
Sep 23 13 11:41 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Ruqya
Posts: 58
Bergen, Hordaland, Norway


probably not..but i will try anyway.. smile
Sep 23 13 02:54 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
mlsy
Posts: 36
Singapore, Singapore, Singapore


Would you work with me?
Sep 23 13 03:35 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Kendrah Astira
Posts: 53
Southfield, Michigan, US


Curious ahaha
Sep 23 13 06:54 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
winking_wonder
Posts: 5,583
New York, New York, US


C L O U D wrote:
hows about me? smile

Yes. First of all, I love this type of ethereal pretty pic and the lighting/colors are nice. I love your general look- long lean figure, good looking face and lovely features and blue eyes. The outfit looks great and good posing but your expression is a teeny bit blank.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130413/06/516956f991580_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/090226/15/49a72272b2544_m.jpg

Sep 23 13 07:49 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
winking_wonder
Posts: 5,583
New York, New York, US


MikeSmith Photography wrote:
I'll play.

Yes. The model has an extreme amount of makeup on but she looks good- The lighting is great on her and though the background is dark, I'm not focused on that. Also the model's skin is lovely - love her pose and long neck - looks so graceful. I like the silver on her neck and the glitter on lips/eyes. The eye makeup is really gorgeous and hair is nice too- though the top of her head is a bit much. Expression is emotive and ethereal.

Lovely:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130918/08/5239c9f49f4a8_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130311/20/513e9ce4135cc_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130311/19/513e96310b153_m.jpg

Sep 23 13 08:02 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Ella Wilkes Photography
Posts: 392
Canberra, Australian Capital Territory, Australia


Would you?
Sep 23 13 09:19 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
winking_wonder
Posts: 5,583
New York, New York, US


MR J Photography wrote:
Yeh you'd work with me, because you were bored and there wasn't interesting on TV that day. big_smile

I would say probably though I don't like the dark shadow around the model's arm. The showing of the model's skin and smoothness of it looks nice though and I like how the model is in color while the background is black/white. Also really like the model's look- Nice hair color, great makeup and lovely features. The expression is quite empty though.

Decent:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130907/06/522b301d43814_m.jpg

Sep 24 13 09:53 am  Link  Quote 
Model
winking_wonder
Posts: 5,583
New York, New York, US


16th Floor wrote:
This is my latest shot....interested?

I would say probably not. I feel that the model's face is a bit blurry and the crop is a bit too tight. Also the angle of the model's face is not the most flattering. I do like her bra and necklace though. Expression is not great.

Sep 24 13 10:27 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Marleaux Desire
Posts: 3
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania, US


Would you work with me ?
Sep 24 13 12:22 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
winking_wonder
Posts: 5,583
New York, New York, US


Roxy Naughton wrote:
Very interested.

Maybe. I like the color of your dress and your hair color/style- Nice tendrils framing your face. The makeup doesn't match the outfit though and your posing could be better. Expression is okay.

Sep 24 13 12:31 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
winking_wonder
Posts: 5,583
New York, New York, US


Mischi - wrote:
Me please!

Maybe. I don't think the posing- especially your hand- is not great and the crop especially on the left side, cutting out part of your arm is not very good. I do like how you have the sheets covering you though and you have lovely bone structure and nice features. The expression, however, is quite blank- Should be more emotive, especially for a sensual shot like it is!

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130908/14/522ceaf5a12e1_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120318/19/4f669376074fc_m.jpg

Sep 24 13 12:43 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
winking_wonder
Posts: 5,583
New York, New York, US


Angelina Chloe wrote:
Let me know what do you think! I will appreciate it!

Yes. Even though the image is just a snap shot- you have a really pretty look. I like the way your hair looks and the way it frames your face, as well as your nice features. Lovely big blue eyes! The expression looks quite blank though- Should have more connection with the camera. And while I like the shirt, the pose could be better.

Cool:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130331/09/51586847a5c71_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130621/18/51c4fe5b33942_m.jpg

Sep 24 13 01:06 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
winking_wonder
Posts: 5,583
New York, New York, US


Leone P wrote:
Interested to know what you think. smile

Yes. I really like the color scheme and the feel of this image. You also have a beautiful, unique look - love your big blue eyes and your hair style- the flowers in your hair are lovely. Nice makeup and endearing expression. The pose is decent- though hands are a little awkward. Pretty blue outfit material though and nice background. I just don't like the huge watermark from the photographer but that's not your fault.

Like:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130913/08/52332931239d6_m.jpg

Sep 24 13 09:05 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
winking_wonder
Posts: 5,583
New York, New York, US


KRISTEN MARIE wrote:
smile me!

I would say probably. I think the post processing work is a bit much and that your skin looks too smooth- reminiscent of a doll's skin, especially your face. But I really like your long light blond hair with brown and the makeup is nice. Pose is okay- the right hand looks awkwardly placed though. And expression is wide eyed and blank.

Lovely:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130823/19/5218179ac1d2c_m.jpg

Sep 25 13 09:50 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Jenna Bunny
Posts: 10
Missoula, Montana, US


New Avatar, curious
Sep 25 13 09:51 am  Link  Quote 
Model
winking_wonder
Posts: 5,583
New York, New York, US


Gran Via 536 wrote:
Still playing?

Maybe. I like the color scheme and the composition. The model looks pretty good- I especially like the outfit. Posing is okay but placement of right hand/arm could be better and the expression is quite stern.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130818/10/52110862759d1_m.jpg

Sep 25 13 06:17 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
winking_wonder
Posts: 5,583
New York, New York, US


Lauren Hiebert wrote:
Me?

No. This is very snap shotty- Also very grainy, blurry, not in focus and unprofessional. The pose is not great and expression looks blank.

Sep 25 13 09:04 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Ida Bailey
Posts: 7
Brooklyn, New York, US


Would like to hear your opinion...
Sep 27 13 01:27 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Bruce M Walker
Posts: 105
Toronto, Ontario, Canada


Just for grins.
Sep 27 13 02:21 am  Link  Quote 
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