Marleaux Desire wrote: I would say probably not. You have a nice look, but this image doesn't really show me your modeling skills/ability. The light blue color scheme is kind of cool, as is the background but beyond that, the outfit doesn't go (I would lose the baseball cap), your pose is boring and expression weak-blank... Should be more engaged. Oct 08 13 07:00 pm Link Jenna Bunny wrote: No. This is clearly a snapshot.. The coloring is faded, background is too blurred, outfit is not chic and though you have lovely facial features, your expression is very confused and even looks a little upset. I kind of like the posing but the branch in your hand- looks like you're just holding a branch, as opposed to holding onto a branch on a tree. Oct 08 13 07:20 pm Link Ida Bailey wrote: Guess you're no longer on the site.. Oct 09 13 10:56 am Link Bruce M Walker wrote: Yes. I like the smooth quality of the image and the model's pose/outfit looks good. You've captured her figure well. Lovely hair and makeup, though the expression looks a bit bored. And I dislike where you've cut off the model's left leg in your avatar image... Though I see that image in your portfolio has the model's full figure. Oct 09 13 08:35 pm Link Eric D SUN wrote: Yes, even though the image looks overexposed- skin especially, I like it. Sexy outfit and model- beautiful hair and facial features. I just don't really like the posing of the arms straight in front. Expression looks sad which kind of goes with the overall image. Oct 09 13 10:24 pm Link Oct 10 13 01:32 am Link winking_wonder wrote: Blame MM's avatar-cropping code for that. It was either cut off her leg or her head. Oct 10 13 05:31 am Link Bruce M Walker wrote: Ah okay, got you! Nice shots! Oct 10 13 08:39 am Link curious to know Oct 10 13 09:09 am Link Keeys wrote: I would say maybe. I like the color scheme and the model looks great- nice hair and makeup as well as facial features. The bra and necklace are lovely but pose (especially arms) is a bit awkward and you've cut off part of the model's finger on the right side. Expression also needs work.. Model looks upset and/or mad. Oct 10 13 09:20 am Link would you? Oct 10 13 09:23 am Link If you wouldn't mind reviewing mine? Thank you! Oct 10 13 10:31 am Link Go for it... Oct 10 13 10:41 am Link Why hello Oct 10 13 12:07 pm Link Oct 10 13 12:25 pm Link Oct 10 13 12:45 pm Link VeronicaB wrote: Yes. I like the smooth feel of the image and the color scheme is not (albeit a bit on the dark side- I do think there is a bit too much shadow on the left side). Your hair is lovely - especially the way it frames your face as are your facial features. Nice makeup too. Expression is also pretty good. Oct 10 13 01:38 pm Link What do you think? Oct 10 13 01:47 pm Link If your doing any models and not just photogs Id appreciate you letting me know what you think! Oct 10 13 01:58 pm Link I'm all in. Thanks! Oct 10 13 01:58 pm Link Location Photography wrote: No longer on the site? Oct 10 13 05:34 pm Link Oct 10 13 06:16 pm Link Meghan Noelle wrote: Maybe. You have a nice look and features but the photo is over exposed and it looks like you have no arms. Decent posing though - Great angle for your face. Expression is a little weak though. Oct 11 13 08:39 am Link Chris Jabbal wrote: Yes. I really like the lighting and the black/white tones in the image. You've also captured the model beautifully- Sexy tights and overall look, decent pose (though placement of right hand is a bit awkward) and very well done hair style and makeup. Expression is also good. Oct 12 13 06:35 pm Link Would love your advice Oct 13 13 01:24 am Link Go for it. Oct 13 13 03:14 am Link Yes please Oct 13 13 03:18 am Link Why not? Oct 13 13 03:19 am Link Hahaha...curiosity has gotten the better of me. Oct 13 13 03:41 am Link Beautifully Soft Focus wrote: I would say maybe.. On the one hand, I like the lighting and the sparkle that's focused on the model. I also really like the dress but not sure it flatters the model as well as it should. I do like the model's features- lovely brown hair and blue eyes. But the pose is contrived and it kind of looks like you've superimposed the model onto the image. Oct 13 13 03:51 pm Link Oct 13 13 05:28 pm Link Amelia Vane wrote: Oct 13 13 06:43 pm Link Amelia Vane: Yes. Very sexy-sensual image you've got there! Even though it's a little dark, I can see your figure/shape really well. And you've got a great one! The posing is very good and your expression is also emotive- Nice! Lovely: https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/33487776 18+ Oct 13 13 06:51 pm Link Im def curious Oct 13 13 10:48 pm Link Oct 14 13 09:07 am Link Bateleur wrote: Maybe. I like the back lighting but the black background is too stark for me and I don't really like the black/white tones. Plus I can't see the model's face, as the camera is covering it. Oct 14 13 10:53 am Link Marlene Potfer wrote: Most definitely. You've got a great look and figure. The lingerie fits you well and the jacket goes together with it. Your posing is good and I also like the black and white tones. Nice hair style. Expression could be improved though- More emotive/connection to the camera. Oct 14 13 06:29 pm Link winking_wonder wrote: Great, thanks so much for your appraisal! Perhaps this would be a better option, and cropped to only show the face? https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/34071374 Oct 15 13 12:10 am Link winking_wonder wrote: Thank you very much for your feedback, much appreciated I've been told recently that I tend to 'act too much' on my expressions which is very true. Its something I'm working to improve at the moment Oct 15 13 02:58 am Link yes Oct 15 13 09:16 am Link |