Forums > Critique > Based on your Avatar... Would I work with you?

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Marleaux Desire wrote:
Would you work with me ?

I would say probably not. You have a nice look, but this image doesn't really show me your modeling skills/ability. The light blue color scheme is kind of cool, as is the background but beyond that, the outfit doesn't go (I would lose the baseball cap), your pose is boring and expression weak-blank... Should be more engaged.

Like:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130915/20/52367dd01c5ee_m.jpg

Oct 08 13 07:00 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Jenna Bunny wrote:
New Avatar, curious

No. This is clearly a snapshot.. The coloring is faded, background is too blurred, outfit is not chic and though you have lovely facial features, your expression is very confused and even looks a little upset. I kind of like the posing but the branch in your hand- looks like you're just holding a branch, as opposed to holding onto a branch on a tree.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130905/12/5228e26ac4b62_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130829/09/521f7472721c4_m.jpg

Oct 08 13 07:20 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Ida Bailey wrote:
Would like to hear your opinion...

Guess you're no longer on the site..

Oct 09 13 10:56 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Bruce M Walker wrote:
Just for grins.

Yes. I like the smooth quality of the image and the model's pose/outfit looks good. You've captured her figure well. Lovely hair and makeup, though the expression looks a bit bored. And I dislike where you've cut off the model's left leg in your avatar image... Though I see that image in your portfolio has the model's full figure.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130921/18/523e4cc33f95d_m.jpg

Oct 09 13 08:35 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Eric D SUN wrote:
Mine pls.
Thanks in advance.

Yes, even though the image looks overexposed- skin especially, I like it. Sexy outfit and model- beautiful hair and facial features. I just don't really like the posing of the arms straight in front. Expression looks sad which kind of goes with the overall image.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130406/09/51604f16ed98a_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130729/09/51f69a780fbe2_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130521/07/519b88bcafc89_m.jpg

Oct 09 13 10:24 pm Link

Model

Lilith Von Dahlia

Posts: 123

Newcastle, New South Wales, Australia

winking_wonder wrote:

Yes. I like your overall look - Also nice styling. Great outfit and makeup. I also enjoy your hair style. The black feathers surrounding you is a bit much though and your expression looks blank/faraway- I would love it more if it was more emotive.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120706/06/4ff6e8df6d6d0_m.jpg

Thank you!

Oct 10 13 01:32 am Link

Photographer

Bruce M Walker

Posts: 119

Toronto, Ontario, Canada

winking_wonder wrote:

Yes. I like the smooth quality of the image and the model's pose/outfit looks good. You've captured her figure well. Lovely hair and makeup, though the expression looks a bit bored. And I dislike where you've cut off the model's left leg in your avatar image... Though I see that image in your portfolio has the model's full figure.

Blame MM's avatar-cropping code for that. It was either cut off her leg or her head. smile

You can see the cheerful, smiling shots from that shoot here: http://www.flickr.com/photos/bruce_m_wa … 610963289/

Thank you!

Oct 10 13 05:31 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Bruce M Walker wrote:

Blame MM's avatar-cropping code for that. It was either cut off her leg or her head. smile

You can see the cheerful, smiling shots from that shoot here: http://www.flickr.com/photos/bruce_m_wa … 610963289/

Thank you!

Ah okay, got you! Nice shots!

Oct 10 13 08:39 am Link

Photographer

the MooD-ologist

Posts: 240

Oakland, California, US

curious to know

Oct 10 13 09:09 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Keeys wrote:
go take a look and tell me what you think...

I would say maybe. I like the color scheme and the model looks great- nice hair and makeup as well as facial features. The bra and necklace are lovely but pose (especially arms) is a bit awkward and you've cut off part of the model's finger on the right side. Expression also needs work.. Model looks upset and/or mad.

Oct 10 13 09:20 am Link

Model

Alexandra Nefedova

Posts: 1

Lisbon, Lisboa e Vale do Tejo, Portugal

would you?

Oct 10 13 09:23 am Link

Model

Alden A Stewart

Posts: 4

Lambertville, New Jersey, US

If you wouldn't mind reviewing mine? Thank you!

Oct 10 13 10:31 am Link

Model

Vixen Minerva

Posts: 26

Wolverhampton, England, United Kingdom

Go for it...

Oct 10 13 10:41 am Link

Photographer

Roy Hubbard

Posts: 3199

East Stroudsburg, Pennsylvania, US

Why hello

Oct 10 13 12:07 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Dan OMell wrote:
please

No. I think the image is too dark/gray for me and it appears to be slightly blurry. It's also tough to make out the model in the image. The expression looks pretty engaged at least though.

Better:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120811/21/5027374644346_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120826/01/5039e0514569d_m.jpg

Oct 10 13 12:25 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Sunny Foto wrote:
I'm curious as well.

I would say maybe. It's a bit too close up for me but I do like the colors of the scarf and you've captured the model's eyes very well. Perhaps the makeup could be more polished/colorful. Also, the expression is a bit lacking.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110826/08/4e57b4fbca9d5_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/090701/17/4a4c05c969f1c_m.jpg

Oct 10 13 12:45 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

VeronicaB wrote:
thanks!

Yes. I like the smooth feel of the image and the color scheme is not (albeit a bit on the dark side- I do think there is a bit too much shadow on the left side). Your hair is lovely - especially the way it frames your face as are your facial features. Nice makeup too. Expression is also pretty good.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/131006/21/52523c03e5ee8_m.jpg

Oct 10 13 01:38 pm Link

Photographer

de Gier Photography

Posts: 20

Halifax, Nova Scotia, Canada

What do you think?

Oct 10 13 01:47 pm Link

Model

Connor Saxon Blue

Posts: 25

San Diego, California, US

If your doing any models and not just photogs Id appreciate you letting me know what you think!

Oct 10 13 01:58 pm Link

Photographer

jHpeg Photography

Posts: 8

Port Charlotte, Florida, US

I'm all in.  Thanks!

Oct 10 13 01:58 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Location Photography wrote:
I'd love to..but remember: I'm just a hobbyist.  smile

No longer on the site?

Oct 10 13 05:34 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

melissa brouwers wrote:
Tell me!

Yes. I like the color scheme, background location and composition except where your finger is cut off. You have really lovely delicate features and nice hair- love how it looks framing your face. Makeup is also good. And you have a great, serene expression.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130914/11/5234a9e68b4d5_m.jpg

Oct 10 13 06:16 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Meghan Noelle wrote:
I wanna try:)

Maybe. You have a nice look and features but the photo is over exposed and it looks like you have no arms. Decent posing though - Great angle for your face. Expression is a little weak though.

Oct 11 13 08:39 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Chris Jabbal wrote:
Ok, will you or won't you...

Yes. I really like the lighting and the black/white tones in the image. You've also captured the model beautifully- Sexy tights and overall look, decent pose (though placement of right hand is a bit awkward) and very well done hair style and makeup. Expression is also good.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130628/15/51ce08e0dfe60_m.jpg

Oct 12 13 06:35 pm Link

Model

Joanna_94

Posts: 13

London, England, United Kingdom

Would love your advice smile

Oct 13 13 01:24 am Link

Photographer

Mochrum Photography

Posts: 16

Maitland, New South Wales, Australia

Go for it.

Oct 13 13 03:14 am Link

Model

stephanie weller

Posts: 6

Fleet, England, United Kingdom

Yes please smile

Oct 13 13 03:18 am Link

Model

Rachel Wilklow

Posts: 2

Los Angeles, California, US

Why not?

Oct 13 13 03:19 am Link

Photographer

A Campbell Photo

Posts: 5

Launceston, Tasmania, Australia

Hahaha...curiosity has gotten the better of me.

Oct 13 13 03:41 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Beautifully Soft Focus wrote:
Would love to know smile

I would say maybe.. On the one hand, I like the lighting and the sparkle that's focused on the model. I also really like the dress but not sure it flatters the model as well as it should. I do like the model's features- lovely brown hair and blue eyes. But the pose is contrived and it kind of looks like you've superimposed the model onto the image.

I like:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120622/22/4fe55981e2f07_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/101026/20/4cc798d399823_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130731/17/51f9af1c7e932_m.jpg

Oct 13 13 03:51 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Mystery Man Photography wrote:
Maybe yes, Maybe no?
Tips are appreciated

No. This image is just not my style. It's whimsical and strange - not really sure what to make of it. I do like the background color though.

Maybe:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130411/17/51674f699c002_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130520/10/519a647a37e74_m.jpg

Oct 13 13 05:28 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Amelia Vane wrote:
New avatar, would love to know

Oct 13 13 06:43 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Amelia Vane:
Yes. Very sexy-sensual image you've got there! Even though it's a little dark, I can see your figure/shape really well. And you've got a great one! The posing is very good and your expression is also emotive- Nice!

Lovely:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130806/13/52015a552422e_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130816/09/520e5951d5c53_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130218/15/5122b9ac8fc01_m.jpg

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/33487776 18+

Oct 13 13 06:51 pm Link

Photographer

IndyNati Photography

Posts: 11

Cincinnati, Ohio, US

Im def curious

Oct 13 13 10:48 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Vani wrote:
Will you?

Maybe. I think the lighting and stern expression on your face is not flattering but I do like the elegant shirt you have on, color of the background and composition. Also your hair looks nice.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130227/01/512dd24f8081f_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130427/06/517bd65e4942b_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130427/06/517bd61389ed9_m.jpg

Oct 14 13 09:07 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Bateleur wrote:
I'd appreciate your comment on mine too. - I'm here to learn ;-)

Maybe. I like the back lighting but the black background is too stark for me and I don't really like the black/white tones. Plus I can't see the model's face, as the camera is covering it.

Oct 14 13 10:53 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Marlene Potfer wrote:
Curious smile

Most definitely. You've got a great look and figure. The lingerie fits you well and the jacket goes together with it. Your posing is good and I also like the black and white tones. Nice hair style. Expression could be improved though- More emotive/connection to the camera.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/131004/03/524e927303c6c_m.jpg

Oct 14 13 06:29 pm Link

Photographer

Charles JS

Posts: 5

Vught, Noord-Brabant, Netherlands

winking_wonder wrote:

Maybe. I like the back lighting but the black background is too stark for me and I don't really like the black/white tones. Plus I can't see the model's face, as the camera is covering it.

Great, thanks so much for your appraisal! Perhaps this would be a better option, and cropped to only show the face? https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/34071374

Oct 15 13 12:10 am Link

Model

Marla Pandora

Posts: 2815

Glasgow, Scotland, United Kingdom

winking_wonder wrote:

Most definitely. You've got a great look and figure. The lingerie fits you well and the jacket goes together with it. Your posing is good and I also like the black and white tones. Nice hair style. Expression could be improved though- More emotive/connection to the camera.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/131004/03/524e927303c6c_m.jpg

Thank you very much for your feedback, much appreciated smile I've been told recently that I tend to 'act too much' on my expressions which is very true. Its something I'm working to improve at the moment smile

Oct 15 13 02:58 am Link

Photographer

234329043249234

Posts: 212

Melbourne, Victoria, Australia

yes smile

Oct 15 13 09:16 am Link