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Orcatek Photography
Posts: 1,686
Tempe, Arizona, US


Winnie L wrote:
Hope I made it

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/111114/21/4ec1fd3dcce39_m.jpg

Was the jewelry on your hand so heavy you couldn't do something pretty with it.  Let me just flop my arm across my body to show the jewelry.  Everyone loves a boring straight arm and flat hand - WRONG.  There's movement in the photo and an arm that looks glued onto your body.  Ruins it.  Don't do that again.

Jan 31 12 05:07 am  Link  Quote 
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Orcatek Photography
Posts: 1,686
Tempe, Arizona, US


Gasoline Photography wrote:
Hurt me.

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110819/04/4e4e44607f640_m.jpg

I'll hurt you like you did your model.  Bend your neck till it hurts - that's a pretty look.  Then I'll just shove you centered in the frame, that will remove any tension or interest.  And why add a rim/hair light to separate her from the back ground, a big black blob is what you were going for.  You are one frame away from being labeled a GWC with this photo.

Jan 31 12 05:13 am  Link  Quote 
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T-D-L
Posts: 10,303
Los Angeles, California, US


Orcatek Photography wrote:

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120117/01/4f15407c4079c_m.jpg

Another annoying trend.  No idea how to pose the model, so have her stand there like she is in a daze.  Shows anybody can be model.  Can you stand-up, you're a model.  And I will make you famous because I am a photographer.  See my portfolio - you don't even have to show your boobies  *wink wink*.

lol, well that was good for a laugh.  Thanks for the insight wink

Jan 31 12 05:23 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Renae Model
Posts: 3
Perth, Western Australia, Australia


Sure smile
Nov 07 12 02:45 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Autumn Rose Brightly
Posts: 1,097
Crowley, Texas, US


Go for it big_smile
Nov 07 12 07:52 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Angelique Model
Posts: 28
London, England, United Kingdom


*deep breath* go for it wink
Nov 07 12 09:15 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
RAY JOHN PILA
Posts: 138
West Hollywood, California, US


OK-  ME ALSO-PLEASE!!!!
Nov 07 12 10:20 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Amelia Rouge
Posts: 114
Anaheim, California, US


How about me?
Nov 07 12 05:29 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
BreezyCoverGirl
Posts: 51
Pomona, California, US


ready yikes
Nov 07 12 05:39 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Brittney Denea
Posts: 285
Oceanside, California, US


Oh my, how far you went past ten!  Still going?
Nov 07 12 06:18 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Jalanis
Posts: 323
NORTH HOLLYWOOD, California, US


Me Next!
Nov 07 12 06:26 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Brightonn
Posts: 234
New Orleans, Louisiana, US


Lay it on me!  I have some new work that I'm considering posting anyway.
Nov 08 12 01:19 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Agent_Zero
Posts: 108
New York, New York, US


me me!
Nov 08 12 01:27 pm  Link  Quote 
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