Was the jewelry on your hand so heavy you couldn't do something pretty with it. Let me just flop my arm across my body to show the jewelry. Everyone loves a boring straight arm and flat hand - WRONG. There's movement in the photo and an arm that looks glued onto your body. Ruins it. Don't do that again.
I'll hurt you like you did your model. Bend your neck till it hurts - that's a pretty look. Then I'll just shove you centered in the frame, that will remove any tension or interest. And why add a rim/hair light to separate her from the back ground, a big black blob is what you were going for. You are one frame away from being labeled a GWC with this photo.
Another annoying trend. No idea how to pose the model, so have her stand there like she is in a daze. Shows anybody can be model. Can you stand-up, you're a model. And I will make you famous because I am a photographer. See my portfolio - you don't even have to show your boobies *wink wink*.
lol, well that was good for a laugh. Thanks for the insight