Posting here instead of General Feedback because I'd also like a more concentrated commentary on the editing aspect.
I'm getting ready to push some of my studio and editing work in a direction, and after experimenting a bit I think I'm on the path I've intended. The idea is to use use poses and lighting that will aid in the post-production addition of energy that plays on poses. While I think these attempts have put me closer to my intent than I've been before, I'd like some critical thought on the subject. What works well? Not so well? What's piss poor?
Here are the images I consider to be a start to this project: