Forums > Critique > Does your Avatar make me want to see your port?

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6906

Champaign, Illinois, US

Tiffiney C wrote:
I'm interested.

Tiff
www.TiffineyC.com

even though I am usually not a big fan of collages for an avatar, you may be the exception. I will say 60-75% yes

Feb 27 14 06:41 pm Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6906

Champaign, Illinois, US

UltimateAppeal wrote:
Sure.. let me know. smile

Even though I appreciate the creative effort, it just doesn't do much for me

Feb 27 14 06:43 pm Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6906

Champaign, Illinois, US

Justin Bonaparte wrote:
I'm game!

I am a leg fan, and I like hers. But the angle doesn't do it for me quite as much as a couple of your other leg shots. Like your work!!

Feb 27 14 06:45 pm Link

Photographer

Canvassy

Posts: 209

Saint Paul, Minnesota, US

I think you skipped me on the last page smile  would love to know what you think!

Feb 27 14 06:50 pm Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6906

Champaign, Illinois, US

Canvassy wrote:
I think you skipped me on the last page smile  would love to know what you think!

so sorry. Love the treatmen, pose and model. Probably yes........very nice work BTW

Feb 27 14 06:52 pm Link

Photographer

Canvassy

Posts: 209

Saint Paul, Minnesota, US

Peach Jones wrote:
so sorry. Love the treatmen, pose and model. Probably yes........very nice work BTW

thank you very much smile

Feb 27 14 06:53 pm Link

Model

n a t a l i e

Posts: 165

Flagstaff, Arizona, US

Sure, why not?
If not can you offer wich may be a better choice?
Thank you so much.(:

Feb 27 14 07:01 pm Link

Photographer

Justin Bonaparte

Posts: 265

Charlotte, North Carolina, US

Thanks for having a look!

Feb 27 14 07:04 pm Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6906

Champaign, Illinois, US

n a t a l i e  wrote:
Sure, why not?
If not can you offer wich may be a better choice?
Thank you so much.(:

you have a good start Natalie, but from this photo probably not

Feb 27 14 07:08 pm Link

Model

n a t a l i e

Posts: 165

Flagstaff, Arizona, US

Thanks for the honesty! (:

Peach Jones wrote:

you have a good start Natalie, but from this photo probably not

Feb 27 14 07:21 pm Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6906

Champaign, Illinois, US

n a t a l i e  wrote:
Thanks for the honesty! (:

One small hint......whenever possible use red. And use your smile, it is beautiful!

Feb 27 14 07:25 pm Link

Photographer

HighLander

Posts: 430

Atlanta, Georgia, US

Shoot!
{|}

Feb 27 14 07:29 pm Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6906

Champaign, Illinois, US

HighLander wrote:
Shoot!
{|}

sorry, but cannot tell what it is

no

Feb 27 14 07:30 pm Link

Photographer

HighLander

Posts: 430

Atlanta, Georgia, US

Peach Jones wrote:

sorry, but cannot tell what it is

no

I'm sorry but it's quite obvious that's a Llama in a heated argument with an Elf!

Feb 27 14 07:44 pm Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6906

Champaign, Illinois, US

HighLander wrote:

I'm sorry but it's quite obvious that's a Llama in a heated argument with an Elf!

Oh, how did I miss that!!??

Feb 27 14 08:21 pm Link

Model

-NORA ELIZABETH-

Posts: 1

Greensboro, North Carolina, US

Always open to thoughts and critique!

Feb 27 14 08:26 pm Link

Model

Veronika Vitkina

Posts: 257

Brooklyn, New York, US

Peach Jones wrote:

the colors would at first get my attention, but not sure if there is enough there to make me want to open your port..........and that would be a shame because I did look and I must say your beauty is outstanding!

Thanks for the feedback and the compliment

Feb 27 14 08:36 pm Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6906

Champaign, Illinois, US

-ELIZABETH- wrote:
Always open to thoughts and critique!

Elizabeth, your look and work are outstanding!! You have sooo many things going for you....your gorgeous long legs, your amazing smile, your beautiful eyes, your flowing hair, but.......I really can't tell any of those effectively from your current avi. It doesn't show me how great of a model you truly are. So your current avi would not make me look more. But you have so many other shots that would turn any head ......including mine.

Thanks for asking!

Feb 28 14 10:36 am Link

Photographer

250465

Posts: 134

Amsterdam, Noord-Holland, Netherlands

Hmm? smile

Feb 28 14 02:29 pm Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6906

Champaign, Illinois, US

Joris van der Ploeg wrote:
Hmm? smile

I like the expressive nature of your work! Your current avi? I will say 60% yes

Feb 28 14 02:40 pm Link

Photographer

erics_Toronto_GTA

Posts: 5176

Toronto, Ontario, Canada

Yes,maybe or no?

Feb 28 14 10:44 pm Link

Model

Izabelle Laufeia

Posts: 13

Melbourne, Victoria, Australia

I'm totally game for this.

Feb 28 14 11:15 pm Link

Model

LadyAsh

Posts: 17

Bloomington, Indiana, US

Okay, I changed my avatar. How about this one? <3

Mar 01 14 06:38 am Link

Photographer

Maria J Campos

Posts: 252

Tilburg, Noord-Brabant, Netherlands

does it?

Mar 01 14 06:43 am Link

Photographer

Lou DiGesare

Posts: 159

Scotia, New York, US

Me??

Mar 01 14 06:48 am Link

Photographer

NAZM0

Posts: 63

Cape Town, Western Cape, South Africa

mememe

Mar 01 14 08:02 am Link

Photographer

Kens Photos

Posts: 228

Visalia, California, US

What do you think?

Mar 01 14 08:03 am Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6906

Champaign, Illinois, US

Eric SUN wrote:
Yes,maybe or no?

Perfect coloring to get my initial attention.....good curves and subject presentation to make me look more......yes!

Mar 01 14 12:14 pm Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6906

Champaign, Illinois, US

Miss Demoninen wrote:
I'm totally game for this.

colors and light are a bit flat. If not for your hair I wouldn't see you at all

probably not

Mar 01 14 12:15 pm Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6906

Champaign, Illinois, US

Lady Ash12 wrote:
Okay, I changed my avatar. How about this one? <3

good eyes, skin, boldness, lighting and coloring.....60-70% yes

Mar 01 14 12:16 pm Link

Model

FranklinElsey

Posts: 71

Omaha, Nebraska, US

Mine?

Mar 01 14 12:16 pm Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6906

Champaign, Illinois, US

Maria J Campos wrote:
does it?

while I like the artwork, not sure it works really great as an avatar. I will go with 50/50

Mar 01 14 12:17 pm Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6906

Champaign, Illinois, US

FranklinElsey wrote:
Mine?

good presentation and hook with the snake

60-70% yes

Mar 01 14 12:18 pm Link

Model

FranklinElsey

Posts: 71

Omaha, Nebraska, US

Thank you (:

Mar 01 14 12:19 pm Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6906

Champaign, Illinois, US

Lou DiGesare wrote:
Me??

While it is a good attempt to gain attention with the colors, I don't think it just quite works. I did look at your port and you have many other fabulous shots that I think would work much better as an avi IMO

Thanks for stopping by!

Mar 01 14 12:21 pm Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6906

Champaign, Illinois, US

Nazmo wrote:
mememe

sorry but the subject is so small in the avi that I can't even see her gorgeous curves

no

Mar 01 14 12:23 pm Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6906

Champaign, Illinois, US

Kens Photos wrote:
What do you think?

sorry but the shot is too busy and and subject doesn't stand out very well.

no

Mar 01 14 12:25 pm Link

Photographer

NAZM0

Posts: 63

Cape Town, Western Cape, South Africa

Peach Jones wrote:

sorry but the subject is so small in the avi that I can't even see her gorgeous curves

no

Thanks for the great advice smile I agree and will amend

Mar 01 14 12:32 pm Link

Photographer

EnlightendedPhotography

Posts: 828

Eugene, Oregon, US

I look forward to your thoughts

Mar 01 14 12:39 pm Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6906

Champaign, Illinois, US

EnlightendedPhotography wrote:
I look forward to your thoughts

A bit flat and not much contrast. Probably not

Mar 01 14 12:43 pm Link