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Peach Jones
Posts: 6,228
Champaign, Illinois, US


REBEL iPHOTO wrote:
How about mines??

good pose and physique, just not much of a hook to draw me in

Jun 26 14 11:47 am  Link  Quote 
Model
mwilde
Posts: 10
Los Angeles, California, US


How about me?
Jun 26 14 11:51 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Peach Jones
Posts: 6,228
Champaign, Illinois, US


mwilde wrote:
How about me?

so sorry, but no.

Jun 26 14 02:18 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Noncho
Posts: 67
Sofia, Sofija grad, Bulgaria


I guess not really, but this is me, not another model smile
Jun 26 14 02:24 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
cnicole
Posts: 42
Laurel, Maryland, US


Does mine?
Jun 26 14 03:48 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Peach Jones
Posts: 6,228
Champaign, Illinois, US


cnicole wrote:
Does mine?

bad quality, so no

Jun 26 14 08:57 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Peach Jones
Posts: 6,228
Champaign, Illinois, US


cnicole wrote:
Does mine?

That one is better, but still not much hook

Jun 27 14 07:50 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
carl davino 75
Posts: 5
Shelton, Connecticut, US


I'll play does mine
Jun 27 14 08:00 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Nico Simon Princely
Posts: 1,742
Las Vegas, Nevada, US


If it does take a look. If not oh well.
Jun 27 14 08:55 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Quentin Skyking
Posts: 296
Lancaster, Massachusetts, US


Sure... I'm curious...
Jun 27 14 11:21 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Slawee
Posts: 11
Dublin, Dublin, Ireland


What do you think? smile
Jun 28 14 02:27 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Peach Jones
Posts: 6,228
Champaign, Illinois, US


carl davino 75 wrote:
I'll play does mine

the subject....you.....is still a bit too distant and small in the photo. So the pop you are looking for is toned down because of that. Crop in tighter to get a better effect. As of now the answer would be no

Jun 29 14 06:52 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Peach Jones
Posts: 6,228
Champaign, Illinois, US


Nico Simon Princely wrote:
If it does take a look. If not oh well.

Excellent and perfect:

tease
mystery
creativity
cropping in on your subject
hook

in other words.....yes

Jun 29 14 02:23 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
John Moses
Posts: 3
Graham, North Carolina, US


Well, I wonder if mine does?
Jun 29 14 03:28 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
International2014
Posts: 90
Manassas, Virginia, US


in on this!
Jun 29 14 08:16 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Meghan Wilson
Posts: 3
Jacksonville, North Carolina, US


What are your thoughts?
Jun 29 14 08:24 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
astralweeks
Posts: 5
Chicago, Illinois, US


How about mine?
Jun 29 14 08:32 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Peach Jones
Posts: 6,228
Champaign, Illinois, US


Quentin Skyking wrote:
Sure... I'm curious...

good hook and tease

yes

Jun 30 14 02:38 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Nico Simon Princely
Posts: 1,742
Las Vegas, Nevada, US


Peach Jones wrote:

Excellent and perfect:

tease
mystery
creativity
cropping in on your subject
hook

in other words.....yes

Thanks for the detailed feedback I appreciate that and I think others will too.

Jun 30 14 04:30 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Steven Lemmens
Posts: 137
Antwerp, Antwerp, Belgium


check, I'm in!
Jun 30 14 05:36 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Alexandra Spencer
Posts: 64
Sydney, New South Wales, Australia


Lets do this thing smile
Jun 30 14 06:20 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Peach Jones
Posts: 6,228
Champaign, Illinois, US


Slawee wrote:
What do you think? smile

good physique but not a real big hook

50/50

Jun 30 14 12:03 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Peach Jones
Posts: 6,228
Champaign, Illinois, US


jmoskee wrote:
Well, I wonder if mine does?

Subject is kind of small. And little contrast to make it stand out much.......so probably not

Jun 30 14 12:05 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Peach Jones
Posts: 6,228
Champaign, Illinois, US


International2014 wrote:
in on this!

the lack of color and contrast may mean I won't even notice it. If i would notice it then probably yes

Jun 30 14 12:09 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Peach Jones
Posts: 6,228
Champaign, Illinois, US


Meghan Wilson wrote:
What are your thoughts?

I like the work, but the horizontal orientation hurts you. I will say 50/50

Jun 30 14 12:11 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Peach Jones
Posts: 6,228
Champaign, Illinois, US


astralweeks wrote:
How about mine?

not a real big draw........probably not

Jun 30 14 12:11 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Peach Jones
Posts: 6,228
Champaign, Illinois, US


Steven Lemmens wrote:
check, I'm in!

good cropping attention on your subject. Probably yes

Jun 30 14 12:13 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Peach Jones
Posts: 6,228
Champaign, Illinois, US


Alexandra Spencer wrote:
Lets do this thing smile

I like the shot, but not sure if there is a big enough hook to draw me in. IMO there are others in your port that would serve you better as an avi

Jun 30 14 12:17 pm  Link  Quote 
Artist/Painter
Glitterartsi
Posts: 29
Liverpool, England, United Kingdom


I was wondering about my avatar please?
Thank you x
Jun 30 14 02:35 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Jechs
Posts: 3
Beaverton, Oregon, US


I'm definitely curious, since I just re-did most of my photos after a recent shoot.
Jun 30 14 04:13 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Peach Jones
Posts: 6,228
Champaign, Illinois, US


Glitterartsi wrote:
I was wondering about my avatar please?
Thank you x

Not really into the cartoon pictures thing.......so no

Jun 30 14 04:56 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Peach Jones
Posts: 6,228
Champaign, Illinois, US


Jechs wrote:
I'm definitely curious, since I just re-did most of my photos after a recent shoot.

good contrast and definition.

Yes

Jun 30 14 04:57 pm  Link  Quote 
Artist/Painter
Glitterartsi
Posts: 29
Liverpool, England, United Kingdom


Peach Jones wrote:

Not really into the cartoon pictures thing.......so no

Thank you for your honesty.
Take care, Rhiannon x

Jun 30 14 06:31 pm  Link  Quote 
Retoucher
Deep Blue
Posts: 69
Buenos Aires, Buenos Aires, Argentina


:v
Jun 30 14 06:36 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Peach Jones
Posts: 6,228
Champaign, Illinois, US


Deep Blue wrote:
:v

good quality and nice mystery. .........probably yes

Jun 30 14 07:37 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Kandi Carmel Sampson
Posts: 3
Clovis, New Mexico, US


What about me?  If not, which is best?   Thank you in advance.
Jun 30 14 07:46 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Peach Jones
Posts: 6,228
Champaign, Illinois, US


Kandi Carmel Sampson wrote:
What about me?  If not, which is best?   Thank you in advance.

Your current avi I would say probably not. The horizontal shots usually do not work as well. My fav for an avi is this:
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30101359

use your gorgeous eyes, they are your best quality

P.S.---great message on your hat......you go girl!!!!!!

Jun 30 14 08:17 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
HO Photo
Posts: 515
Los Angeles, California, US


Please share your thoughts
Jun 30 14 10:25 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
RyansOffAxisAthletics
Posts: 3
Oceanside, California, US


How about mine? Huh?
Jun 30 14 10:25 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Torttu Doris
Posts: 165
Lappeenranta, South Karelia, Finland


I just uploaded a new one, would love to know what you think!
Jul 01 14 12:53 am  Link  Quote 
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