Ms Cupcake Couture wrote:
I'd greatly appreciate it

You are a great model. Your photos are very different and unique, which is something I like. The editing styles are a bit scattered, so I wouldn't do too many different ones. I know a lot of photographers like to be diverse (I always want to try different things), but then it makes your portfolio look like one giant mess. Not saying that yours is, but that it can have that effect. I would work on a lot of your facial expressions, but other than that, I think you're heading the right path.

Dave Kai Piper wrote:
Sounds like something interesting !!  If you do find the time though.. or if anyone one does. Feed back is always interesting to have.

www.davekaipiper.co.uk

Your portfolio is magnificent. You have great photos, but something I'm not fond of and happen to think makes your work look a bit amateurish is vignette on some of the images. Other than that, I love your work. Props.

Randy Potvin wrote:
I'll play

Your portfolio is getting there. You need to experiment with 1) your facial expressions, and 2) your body language. This will let you have an even better portfolio. I wouldn't want you to get stuck on the same look and then not have much varied work. Plus I'd get rid of the first 3 images on the top row.

Farenell Photography wrote:
Sure, go for it.

I do happen to like some of your work. There are other images that I'm not thrilled about either, like the last four. I love how you have so many different locations, it adds to your portfolio. Just watch out that it doesn't take away from your art but rather aid in telling a story. Like in this one, I feel the environment takes away from the beautiful subject:



Also, change your avatar.

Rachel Hayslette wrote:
Me too please.

One thing that I told someone else is that having just one look sometimes makes you very forgettable. You need to practice on your facial expressions and body language. They're very cookie-cutter for me. Put some images where you're not looking at the camera. Some that you're smiling. Some that you're serious. I feel that most of the best models have some pretty awkward facial/body expressions, but they make them look so beautiful. Try posing in front of a mirror. You'll warm up to the shoot.

Urban Exp photography wrote:
im still learning and growing but i would certainly like to hear from someone with more experience than myself so thank you in advance...

The editing is a bit rough, but that's something that's just going to take time and practice. There are great tutorials out there, and even actions on photoshop that you can buy that can make editing a world's difference. You have beautiful models, and also a good eye, at least from these few images that I saw. Keep working on that, as well as working with more models so you can showcase more of your work.

Felipe Jimenez wrote:
I do happen to like some of your work. There are other images that I'm not thrilled about either, like the last four. I love how you have so many different locations, it adds to your portfolio. Just watch out that it doesn't take away from your art but rather aid in telling a story. Like in this one, I feel the environment takes away from the beautiful subject:

Fair enough.

Felipe Jimenez wrote:
Also, change your avatar.

To help me better understand, did you have a particular reason why?

Mini_ wrote:
I need to move forward, more & better quality collaborations, and finding the right direction to focus on

I agree with the moving forward, but I believe that you have an amazing portfolio with great focus. There are a lot of great images that really showcase how well-rounded you are. Definitely keep getting work done, and if you're already getting paid, then make sure you start charging. )))

Jenny Jannetty wrote:
I'm in

I like your variety, but I don't feel like the quality of the photographs you have are exactly what you need to really succeed. Just stay on the lookout for castings with good photographers with good concepts.

Felipe Jimenez wrote:
Disclaimer: I will provide more feedback on some portfolios if I feel they can be improved. If I feel yours can't really improve, then I won't leave you as much feedback.

As far as nudes come, I can critique your work, but if that's all you have in your portfolio (not even classy nudes), then I will most likely not critique it at all.

Who's ready to play?

Hi,
I initially thought this was a critique of profile, (as in wording) but, I am game. My port was overhauled and I also created another one too at https://www.modelmayhem.com/2720769

Jen

Merry P wrote:
Please do if you have the time!

Your images are quite exquisite. Your black and whites are beautiful, and so keen on detail, but I wish they told a bit more of a story. Your colors, are honestly to die for. They contain so much beauty that I'm pretty sure I just overdosed on them. That's the kind of storytelling that's worth a million bucks.


(beautiful beautiful beautiful)

Yin L wrote:
Would really love to know. Thanks!

I'm pretty sure I've critiqued your work before, and honestly you don't have much to work on. Your work is beautiful, and you have such a natural talent at just being beautiful in front of a camera. I love how your work is so diverse, I would work with you in an instant. I would watch out what type of work you show, just because you have some great shots, and then some that let you down as a model. Also, I would see if I could maybe use individual shots instead of the collages. I feel it takes away from an image.